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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 8:15am | IP Logged
thanks for pm & updates
missing my charu adi very much
Part 15
y u ended this beautiful trip so early!!
loved this line
Like he had always been waiting for this' like it always meant to be like that' together'
end of goa trip take ur time dear but y u ended so early!
heheh tht bitch roshani appeared to surprise adi!!
n she thought they r siblings with their fights!!
loved grandma's reaction on charu's possessiveness
she is cute child still!!
well done charu u emptied water on tht bitch!!
and adi too thanks her for tht!!
ohho rose day!! adi forgot abt and result of many angry female fans!
and charu waiting for karan n she return 50 roses!!
how fool she is to asking adi to give rose to neeru!!
poor sid not getting any chance to give rose!!
and tht karan gave her rose i will kill him!!
adi was approaching to her n stop seeing tht!1
this is not done charu!! u r right!! u r a cheating wife!!
but we n adi still love u

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 6:43am | IP Logged
Part 16
loved the way u described his feelings!!
poor adi couldn't tell her abt his feelings as he himself not knowing it!
we also don't like her with tht karan!!
n adi y u calling him her boyfrnd call him only his frnd
charu too not knowing wht she actually did!!

Little did she realize that she had done something to him. She had made him fall in love with her...


ohh she too started caring for him sending coffee mugs with servant on exam time and she felt pain when she saw him in pain!!
ohh wow prom night
y is this roshini bitch comming even after adi insulted her!
he couldn't bear charu with karan!!
his emotions r exploding!!
and charu herself wanted him to speak out!!
next scene was amazing!!
loved their feelings he trying to tell her tht she is only n only his
though it was shocking to him but l loved tht fact!
yes she is of his only his n he is only hers
and she too want to sooth him his pain! and loved tht fact tht she owed him!!

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
I discovered this FF yesterday and read it till 2.00 pm.Smile Simply loved it, loved it, loved it. Smile
But i just felt this could have been stretched further, there could have been more college scenes and especially goa trip part was abruptly ended. I think it is a fantastic FF and writer is extremely talented. If possible can you still include Goa trip in a separate chapter?? Please don't finish this FF so early. It is extremely romantic.WinkBig smileEmbarrassed

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
please updateCry, best FF:)Smile

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 8:19am | IP Logged
No updates and no news, where is everyone?

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 7:41am | IP Logged
i just love ur story i keep on reading this story i have read it like 5 times and i am still of statisfied with it i want read more of The perfect couple plzz update if u can

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Posted: 01 October 2012 at 7:32am | IP Logged
need up 
need up 
need up

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 9:36am | IP Logged
plz i want updCry

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