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Posted: 02 August 2012 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
Wow amazing...all parts are awsom..thnx
waiting for next update..
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Posted: 03 August 2012 at 2:44pm | IP Logged

nice update
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Posted: 04 August 2012 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
my my u hv bombarred the updates on us...what an super fantatic updates they r...their slowely realisation,that emotional part n adi's care about charu n charu's getting jealous n angry
super fantatic...loved them a lot
well i know u r very much busy n studies came first in any case,i understand after i m also a student
but still i couldn't stop saying...try to update soon
luv u    :-)
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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 7:15am | IP Logged
ned to read all forur, wil take time.. sry fr being soopa late.. busy wid studies
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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 7:07am | IP Logged

Wow –ful uds they were all..

Mere pass 15mins h aaj, comp per bauthne k liye..

 And aaj pooore k epoore 15mins main aapke iss ff k liye preserve kerr arkhe h…

 Sirf aapke ff per cmt karne k liye..

 So here it is…

Since 4 chapters the.. so four coments bhi honge…

So first wala yeh raha…

Charu is so naughty gal na… she is enjoying his blush so much..

 Moreover, making him blush evn more…he luks so cute this way na.. aditya ko nazaar na lage.. so charu, plz aapne pati ko kala tikka laga dena.. okies…?

O no.. frm wer did dey land in Mumbai again.. I wanted more goa scenes….

No problem.. mum bai bhi acha h..

 Rose day.. yipiieee. Aditya charu ko rose dega..

 Aisa maine socha tha?? But aapne poori ashao per paani pheer diya..  **crying**

No prob.. still lovd dat prt.. coz… aditya din gave  rose to anyone also..

 See, I can search for a reason to smile everywhere…

Gdo dis gal is mad.. big crack.. she is asking her husband to give rose to her friend…crazy she is is..

 Bechare koi sid ko bhi dekh lo bechara hamesha…yunn hi rah jata h. koi uski bhi sunli bhai..

 Hmm. Moving on. Charu said.. '' dishonest friend and cheater wife.. nice match na?''

Actually its perfecto u noe.. but still not so perfecto as your couple- aditya n charu.. jus made for each other ~~DAY DREAMINNG~~

 

 

 


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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 7:08am | IP Logged

 

 

 

 

 

Okies.. next part.. lovely ud again.. but strting ws disguishting.. I  really hate that karan..

 Actually I hate every man who tried giving charu a rose,, thank god she rejected all..

 But iss bander ka kyun accept kerr kiya..

Dekha na.. adi ka dil tutt gya,, bechara..

 Karan itna handsome h kya, jo use aditya bhi nahi dekh raha- uska husband.. impossible..

Uuf!!..

 O no.. I mean o yesss!!!!!!!!!!!!...

 Jealousy game has strted.. wow maaze aa gye… sachi main.. jealousy really wrks…jealousy roxxx…..

Yipieee… charu bhi uncomfortable h, adi ke silence se…main bhi.. actually I m vry fond of their NOK JHOK jagda s…

Finally.. yeh.. finally it happened..

 U noe na, wat I mean… kiss…

Yipiee.. wat a mind blasting description di.. u rock here..sachhi main.. Mumbai language main bole tho.. DHANSUUU.. Haryanvi main bole tho.. PHODD  diya sab kuch..

 I cud amazingly imagine dis..

God, why is adi regretting his kiss wid her.. it ws just more dan perfect u noe…

 Lovely romantic ud di..

 Thnx for it.

 

 

 


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Posted: 07 August 2012 at 7:09am | IP Logged

 

 

Silence silence evry wer..

Itna sab kuch gumsum ' hmm. Finally humari charu ne aapna muak khola.. thnk god..

 This silence kills' really.

They care fr each other so much' he dnt leave her in house alone.. she  sends coffe fr him.. dats all is vry romantic'

Chutti time'party..

 Lekin yeh kya.. kya boring log h dono.. ghar main bhaike v- games khel rhe h  aur novels padd rhe h ..

O no finally aunty is no more'

Iske baad job hi hoa.. all I can say is.. it ws beautifully designed.. beautifully written.. it ws heart rendering.. simple more  dan amazing..

Charu's reaction, adi tion concern.. their action.. so much real, so much sentimental'.

Her wish.. n adi's helplessness'just so over romantic

 Di super ly written scene'

Merging the next ud too here in dis cmnt'

 

Charu fainted .. o no.. she is so much weak..

After all she loved her mother.. who does not???..

 She is admitted to hospital.. adi cares fr her so much'

Lovely couple' yeh ud poora ka poora itna sentimental tha.. dis ws important fr there relation to be mature a bit.. afta that jealousy part..

 But I din want her mother to actually die..critical case ho jata.. I mean admitted to ICU.. but not her death.. its to harsh on our charu..

Adi is so thoughtful her..he called ankita to home'

Why the hell he is asking fr karan.. ??

 I dnt like karan.. he is mad.. he dnt deserve our charu.. evn 0.000001%..

So.. he adi has crossed all his limits to lov charu unconditionally.. he arranged her a date wid that..idiot..mindless man.

Oops! Accident ho gya..aadi ka.. shukar h,, its minor'

 She ignored karan n rushed to hospital' lovd this scene'

Auto wale ko paise bad main milenge'

Hospital main jo hoa.. I feel like laghing.. thogh it ws emotional scene.. but crazy like me can laugh wid no reason to..

 But d.. loved that scene.. both trying to control each other' charu easily accepting his advise to leave..

But den jo hoa.. so romantic it was.. haye.. rabne bana di Jodi h yeh tho..

 But yeh autowala.. thoda wait nahi kerr sakta tha.. humme abhi tak koi kiss tho mili hi nahi'.last scene ws funny..

 Come on boyzz. Tumne tho sikha hoga skul main ki we knock d door before entering.. I din expected dis frm rohan n sid..naughty boyz'

Ud soon..

Lov u for this stry.



Edited by sweetsanyo - 07 August 2012 at 7:09am

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 9:24am | IP Logged
i love your ff and also your writing skill. you are amezing .its my first comment.
i m waiting for your next updateDay Dreaming.

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