The perfect couple (RTMC ff) (reply on page 51) - Page 38

Posted: 11 years ago
Part 18
Adi consoling charu described very nicely!!
but it was very heart wrenching!!
when she saw her mother's dead body!!😭

Charu there as she fainted the very next moment she saw her mother dead. She had not even heard of such harsh realities of life leave alone facing them with her eyes. Her mother always protected her from the real world. She was too weak mentally to accept it like a mature. That is why she knew she won't be able to endure the truth.
these lines are very true 😭
No one on this earth could better know their child than the mother.

πŸ‘
liked adi cared charu n made her eat!!

ohh we miss our charu who was mischeivous, irritating to adi!!
her maa's death made her silent!!
adi is very nice person to meet anki to make charu happy
and also he asked for karan too

 Adi perceived the doubt on her face and said softly "Don't worry. I won't kill him and get arrested. I love myself too much for that. I – I just want him to meet Charu."

Ankita chuckled at his excuse to hide his own emotions.

"I get you Aditya but I don't think this would work. He was just a crush of hers. I know her from school days. She lived in the world of fairies and princes."

"Ouch" he said dramatically and added, "You mean I am not a prince charming."

She chuckled again and admired the light heartedness he was capable of creating even under such grave issue.

we too know anki tht adi loves charu very much n she is very lucky!!

ohh both getting out πŸ˜ƒbut to meet tht karan
She came out in a dark red knee length skirt and cream top. His heart skipped a beat as he saw her coming out of the room. He smiled weakly trying to hide the storm in his heart.

you love her then y u r taking her to karan😑she will be happy with you only!!
ohh he made accident!1 obviously he lost his mind for charu!!😲

In the taxi she kept on crying with an unending stream of tears. She remembered the day she had lost her mother. She cannot afford to lose anyone anymore. Though he had told her that it was a minor accident but she felt abruptly scared.


ohh out poor charu!!

loved whole hosptial scene!1
it was beautiful n romantic!!
also cute teasing of friends sid n rohan!!!
n loved taxi driver who was
"Sorry Adi, but we found this pitiable man searching for an untrustworthy girl in the hospital"

thank u so much for these beautiful updates!!
sorry for late comments!

Edited by shruja - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Happy Half Century dear Samy!!
we don't want you to close this FF
Still confession part remained!!
and we wanted goa n other parts
its will do even if you show them in there sweet memories!!
like DV shown at end time!!
So please continue it whenever you can!!
will wait for you to get time to upload your ffs!!
We want our Ther Perfect Couple.

Admins & Mods : Please do not close or lock this n other samy's ff topics!
Posted: 11 years ago
Hey congrats dear
you completed 50 pages of ur FF
This is my one of  favourite love story Of RTMC .
u made it so beautifully...
waiting for next ud of Perfect copuple
 
plzz update soon
 
 
Posted: 11 years ago
Hey dear..
I m a new reader of ur ff..
& I hav read all d uds..
I mst say..u r really superb in writing..
Each & every scene described by u is amazing..
so happy that Adi & Charu know now that they luv each-other..
plz giv d nxt ud soon..
& plz send me also a PM..
plz plz plz..
Posted: 11 years ago
Simply love it. Continue soon... please 
Posted: 11 years ago
@samikshachauhan: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊
Posted: 11 years ago
really very goodπŸ‘...
please update soon

Posted: 11 years ago
@samikshachauhan: Nyc story!!!!😊 
Posted: 10 years ago
hey pls update
i just love your ff
pls update it soon
plsss
Posted: 10 years ago
hello friends, 
i know i am too late to even apologize. but this is an heart felt apology to all my wonderful readers who have probably stopped visiting thread cursing my laziness. i am sorry. 
and by the way, yes you are right about my laziness though! 

but in my defence, i remember i had informed you all about my plans of stopping the story as i had updated quiet a few chapters to bring this story to an end as abrupt as it may be. 
as you may be knowing, i stopped because of my studies and busy schedule. 

sorry if i kept any of you waiting... 

i love writing and reading your responses. and i would surely continue once i get some time or a lot of time(considering my lazy attitude πŸ˜†) 
but for now i wont be able to update this one. 

i hope when i next decide to write another story, you all will be there to give your precious response. πŸ˜Š

love you all...

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