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A&J. Inspired to write my own scenes (Page 3)

alien_visitor Senior Member
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Posted: 17 March 2005 at 12:37am | IP Logged

I dont know if u read this poem of mine, Will try to write a new one, till then read this?

Hoshwalon ko khabar kya?

Zeher peene ka dum nahin

Jab tak tumhe na dekhloon...

Hosh mein jeene ka din nahin

Jab tak aankhen na bharsavoon...

 

Teri yaadon ki nasha mein

doob raha hoon,

Dard kya ab jaana hai hum

Aaakar mujhe sametlo sanam...

Rom rom pe aajayega jeevan

Aakar bhahomein samaajao sanam…

 

Hosh walon ko kabar kya

Bekhudi kya cheez hai,

Isdesh walon ko kabar kya

Mere Isqh bhi kuch ajeeb hai...

queenbee Goldie
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Posted: 17 March 2005 at 1:27am | IP Logged
OMG.. jprasad.. minnie is damn too right, you're a chhuppa rustom and I would LUV to read more posts like this from you...!!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

You have a fantastic imagination, and what else does one need to communicate effectively if not bold and simple words? You're talented and it shows. Appreciate it even more cos I'm hopeless at this imagination thingy myself.. I always end up making the serial characters turn into M&B protagonists and take the story on a whole different trackConfused that's what comes of reading too many M&B's too early on! I'm brainwashed!!Tongue

Alien_visitor, you're gifted too... still havn't forgotten ur poem that went something like: wish you'd swooped down as a vulture instead of pretending to be a sparrow.. then it wudn't have hurt me so much..OuchCry that was beautiful!!


Emaa Senior Member
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Posted: 17 March 2005 at 7:37am | IP Logged
since everyone is writting thier dream scene..i have one too...
i always thought of this scene
this takes place when jessi comes back...armaan has realized what he has done..and hee will do nething to makee jessi happy...even tho it hurts to see her with purab...he knows he made mistakes..and god should punish him...jessi ko purab ke saath dekhna bhi ka dard bhi ek saza hi hai...
he knows jessi has changed..and she is not his jesssi.."meri jessi"..

he tried so much to tell her he has changed..that her middle class mentality is what he fell for..her big glasses and her hair..just the way she is...he loves her for who she is...but she tells him she hates him..and he is a lier..so then armaan decide to do everything what jessi says...and wait for the day when she comes to know wthe truth by herself..


jessi has been working at gulmohar for past 2 months...she takes care of the company....
she needed to finalized some deal with other company ..and she needed to review the detail file...
she comes to think armaan has the file...

jessi goes to armaans apartment to pick up the file...
she knows the door..but no one answers...but then she realized..armaan has left the door open...

so she slowly opens the door..saying.."armaan sir, armaan sir..sir aap kahan ho"...
no one answers...she takes the good look around....then she walks into his bedroom..looking for him...
thats when she is shocked to see her pictures all over the wall...

woh pura ghoom ke sare bedroom mai apnni tasviren dekhti hai...uski har alag tasvir.....big glasses....those old hair...those braces...her old baggy cloths...
and she remembers old days..
who armaan sir ka car ki chabi dena
woh phool bhegna..
woh cards
woh teddy bear..
woh ring pehnana..
aaine mai apne saath..armaan ko pana...
woh pehli baar amraan sir ka..i love you jessi kehna..
woh last hug..
and she starts crying...
just then armaan comes out in his bath towel...wiping his hair...
he is shocked to see jessi in his room...


armaan:   jessi tum yahan kese?

jessi:    woh mai...(still lookking at pics)

armaan:   woh kiya jessi...: (he realized she is in his bedroom looking around those pics..)

jessi: amraan sir...ye meri tasviren...?

armaan: ye tumhari nahi hai..meri jessii ki hai...tum khud hi dekhlo..tumme aur meri jessi mai kitna fark hai...tumhari aankhon pe bare bare chasme nahi hai..tumhare baal..(by now he is angry and yelling..)
mujse dur jane ke liye tumne apne baal to kiya apni chaal tak badal di hai..tum meri jessi hohi nahi sakti...

jessi: armaan sir..kiya aap mujse wakehi etna pyar karte hai?

armaan: jessi ye baat sach hai ke..tumse pyar karne ki koi plannning to ki nahi thi..bas gulmohar ko bachane ke liye tumhari zaroorat thi..agar saaf saaf tumse fake balance sheet banane ko kehta to..tum na kehti..es liye raj ke kehne par jooth ka sahara liya...

jessi: armaan sir..aap jante the na mai kitna pyar karti huin aapse......ek baar kehte to jaan tak de deti...aur phir sahi kaam ke liye jooth ka sahara to sahi kaam hi hota hai na....

armaan: (realized..she said "kitna pyar karti huin...not kitna pyar karti thi)...kiya aabhi pyar karti ho mujse jessi?

jessi: (shocked..and thinks of what she just said..and turns her back on him)

armaan: mai janta huin jessi..tumhe mene dukh diya hai..lekin us dukh me ...mai bhi to pal pal jala huin...jessi tumse behad pyar karta huin...bahot koshish kii tumhare khayal se bhi dur rehne ki..lekin jessi..saco mano ...ye mere bas mai ab nahi hai...tumse door reh nahi sakta..aur tumhe dukhi bhi nahi dekh sakta..

jessi: (turns back to him..still crying..tears rolling down her eyes..)...armaan sir..aapko kiya lagta hai.aapse dur chale jane se aapko mai bhul gai huin...khudko to badal diya..lekin aapko pyar karne se es dil ko na rok pai..

thennnnn..they hug and tell each other..

armaan:   i love u jessi...tumhare bina ji nahi sakta..

jessi: i love u armaan sir...maii bhi to aapke bina kabhi ji nahi saki..aur nahi kabhi ji sakungii...

they then..armaan&jessi..FOREVER ALWAYS!!!
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Posted: 17 March 2005 at 8:35am | IP Logged
whoa emma...Armaan in a bathroom towel...whoa...I almost  passed out...whoa...whoa...whoa....(faint)
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Posted: 17 March 2005 at 8:44am | IP Logged
thank you so much Alien Visitor and I agree with Queenbee that poem you wrote on swooped down as a vulture instead of pretending to be a sparrow was beautiful.  Would you mind posting it again???


Thanks!
queenbee Goldie
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Posted: 17 March 2005 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Emaa

since everyone is writting thier dream scene..i have one too...
i always thought of this scene
this takes place when jessi comes back...armaan has realized what he has done..and hee will do nething to makee jessi happy...even tho it hurts to see her with purab...he knows he made mistakes..and god should punish him...jessi ko purab ke saath dekhna bhi ka dard bhi ek saza hi hai...
he knows jessi has changed..and she is not his jesssi.."meri jessi"..

he tried so much to tell her he has changed..that her middle class mentality is what he fell for..her big glasses and her hair..just the way she is...he loves her for who she is...but she tells him she hates him..and he is a lier..so then armaan decide to do everything what jessi says...and wait for the day when she comes to know wthe truth by herself..


jessi has been working at gulmohar for past 2 months...she takes care of the company....
she needed to finalized some deal with other company ..and she needed to review the detail file...
she comes to think armaan has the file...

jessi goes to armaans apartment to pick up the file...
she knows the door..but no one answers...but then she realized..armaan has left the door open...

so she slowly opens the door..saying.."armaan sir, armaan sir..sir aap kahan ho"...
no one answers...she takes the good look around....then she walks into his bedroom..looking for him...
thats when she is shocked to see her pictures all over the wall...

woh pura ghoom ke sare bedroom mai apnni tasviren dekhti hai...uski har alag tasvir.....big glasses....those old hair...those braces...her old baggy cloths...
and she remembers old days..
who armaan sir ka car ki chabi dena
woh phool bhegna..
woh cards
woh teddy bear..
woh ring pehnana..
aaine mai apne saath..armaan ko pana...
woh pehli baar amraan sir ka..i love you jessi kehna..
woh last hug..
and she starts crying...
just then armaan comes out in his bath towel...wiping his hair...
he is shocked to see jessi in his room...


armaan:   jessi tum yahan kese?

jessi:    woh mai...(still lookking at pics)

armaan:   woh kiya jessi...: (he realized she is in his bedroom looking around those pics..)

jessi: amraan sir...ye meri tasviren...?

armaan: ye tumhari nahi hai..meri jessii ki hai...tum khud hi dekhlo..tumme aur meri jessi mai kitna fark hai...tumhari aankhon pe bare bare chasme nahi hai..tumhare baal..(by now he is angry and yelling..)
mujse dur jane ke liye tumne apne baal to kiya apni chaal tak badal di hai..tum meri jessi hohi nahi sakti...

jessi: armaan sir..kiya aap mujse wakehi etna pyar karte hai?

armaan: jessi ye baat sach hai ke..tumse pyar karne ki koi plannning to ki nahi thi..bas gulmohar ko bachane ke liye tumhari zaroorat thi..agar saaf saaf tumse fake balance sheet banane ko kehta to..tum na kehti..es liye raj ke kehne par jooth ka sahara liya...

jessi: armaan sir..aap jante the na mai kitna pyar karti huin aapse......ek baar kehte to jaan tak de deti...aur phir sahi kaam ke liye jooth ka sahara to sahi kaam hi hota hai na....

armaan: (realized..she said "kitna pyar karti huin...not kitna pyar karti thi)...kiya aabhi pyar karti ho mujse jessi?

jessi: (shocked..and thinks of what she just said..and turns her back on him)

armaan: mai janta huin jessi..tumhe mene dukh diya hai..lekin us dukh me ...mai bhi to pal pal jala huin...jessi tumse behad pyar karta huin...bahot koshish kii tumhare khayal se bhi dur rehne ki..lekin jessi..saco mano ...ye mere bas mai ab nahi hai...tumse door reh nahi sakta..aur tumhe dukhi bhi nahi dekh sakta..

jessi: (turns back to him..still crying..tears rolling down her eyes..)...armaan sir..aapko kiya lagta hai.aapse dur chale jane se aapko mai bhul gai huin...khudko to badal diya..lekin aapko pyar karne se es dil ko na rok pai..

thennnnn..they hug and tell each other..

armaan:   i love u jessi...tumhare bina ji nahi sakta..

jessi: i love u armaan sir...maii bhi to aapke bina kabhi ji nahi saki..aur nahi kabhi ji sakungii...

they then..armaan&jessi..FOREVER ALWAYS!!!


Emaa.... this is priceless!!! Armaan in a bath-towel embracing Jassi!!! WOWLOL

I loved it!!! Great imaginationBig smile
alien_visitor Senior Member
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Posted: 18 March 2005 at 4:39am | IP Logged

I am speechless Emma

Deli Senior Member
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Posted: 18 March 2005 at 7:54am | IP Logged

That's very sweet JP, great job! And thank you to Emma as well, you both rock! Clap

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