ArSh-MOHOBBAT DO DILON KI DAASTAN note pg 17

Posted: 12 years ago

 

 

 

It will be an ArSh ff..

The storty starts from the point where  ridz was getting married to sid the second time and armaan was with shilpa''..she knows everything about AR from   Dr.kirti''..

NOTE:- shilpa and ridhima are not sisters in this ff.shilpa is an orphan

 

Sh-  Basss  armaan, bass. Apni haalat dekhi hai tumne kya kar rahe ho tum armaan kyon khudko  takleef de rahe, bhool jao   sab kuch armaan bhool jao aur apni zindagi me aage badho..

Ar- bhool jaoon sb kuch ,kehna aasaan hai shilpa karna nahi, ye koi cheez nahi hai shilpa jise khone    Ka dard main bhool jaoon..

 Apni jaan se zyaada pyar kiya hai maine ridhima se uske liye kya nahi kiya maine apni zindagi apne   Dost sabko chod diya yahan tak ki use bhi dur chala gaya taaki wok hush rahe'.        

Ar-  aur sirf main hi nahi ridhima bhi mujhse utn a hi pyar karti hai sirf apne papa aur samaaj ke liye wo.  '

Sh- pyar ha uska pyar to mujhe dikhta hi hai isliye to tumhe itni takleef dekar dubara shaadi kar rahi hai' agar itna hi pyar karti hai tumse to kyon tumhara istemaal kiya jab tum aaye the tab tumhe kyon nahi bata diya ki uski shaadi ho chuki hai kyon tumhara istemaal kiya kyon mazaak banaya tumhara'pyar aisa to nahi hota armaan'.pyar me sirf dena hota hai armaan dusre ki khushi me khush hona dusre ki takleef me rona na ki dusron ka mazaak udana.

Ar- shut up..just shut up mujhe tumhari koi baat nahi sunni(tears flowing from both their eyes)'

Sh- sunni padegi armaan tumhe sunna hoga samajhna hoga armaan'ridhima pehle bhale hi tumse pyar karti thi armaan par ab nahi uske aankhon me uske dil me tumhare liye koi pyar nahi bacha'wo apni zindagi me aage bad chuki hai tum bhi aage bado,''.tum sachchai ko nahi jhutla sakte armaan'.tum kisi aur ki nahi khud apne dil se pooch kya ye wahi ridhima hai kya wo tumse pyaar karti hai'tum sach se bhaag rahe ho armaan,use apna lo.tumhari takleef se kisi ko koi fark nahi padta sab apni zindagi me khush hai to tum kyon apni zindagi barbaad kar rahe'

Tum kya the aur kya ho gaye armaan..

Mai jaanti hoon ye aasan nahi hai par namumkin bhi nahi hai.us purane armaan ko waapis le aao armaan  jiski ek muskuraahat sab ke dil me khushi bhar deti thi mere liye nahi kisi ke liye nahi balki khud ke liye''.     

With that she left to her room leaving armaan with his thoughts and tears flowing down his eyes continuosly''''.

WHAT DO YOU THINK?SHALL I CONTINUE??????

DO COMMENT TRULY' ALL CRITICISM WILL BE ACCEPTED WHOLE HEARTEDLY''


INDEX

intro - pg 1

promo 1- pg 1

part 1 - pg 3

part 2- pg 8

part 3- 9

part 4 - 12

 

                                                         

 

Edited by friends_4dream - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey...very nicely written dear..i always love arsh ff...i dnno wat u have planned for this, but i guess after this part if u take a leap and start off with arsh married life, it l be rocking..cz we have already had so many arsh ffs like tis..so a leap and then married life and romance wd be treat..
newaz i wd be reading it no matter what..so do cont soon..
Posted: 12 years ago
hey
'its vry nice
cont soonish
nd add me 2 ur pm list
Posted: 12 years ago
hey..
 continue soon...
 would love to read more..
  do PM me..
tc
Posted: 12 years ago


hey guys thnx alot 4 ur comments and likes and those who all want pm
plz add heavens_way to ur buddy list..
here is d promo 4 d next part

PROMO 1

Shilpa walked towards the ticket counter'''..

Lady- yes mam how can I help you?

Sh- well actually meri tickets  maine book karwayi thi use mujhe yahan se pick karna tha..

Lady- sure mam,may I know ur full name'

After a pause

Sh- Mrs.Shilpa Armaan Mallik..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



now guys wait to see wheter its a leap or something different...

keep guessing

Edited by friends_4dream - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
hey awesome concept... ⭐️ specially the promo is making me curious... pls add me to the PM list and cont soon 😳
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by SabzKaShGrAnd


Hey...very nicely written dear..i always love arsh ff...i dnno wat u have planned for this, but i guess after this part if u take a leap and start off with arsh married life, it l be rocking..cz we have already had so many arsh ffs like tis..so a leap and then married life and romance wd be treat..
newaz i wd be reading it no matter what..so do cont soon..

thanks 4 ur lovely comment.
i cannot say anything about the leap but i will try my best to make myy myy ff different so readers dont get bored readins  d same thing
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by vidu87


hey
'its vry nice
cont soonish
nd add me 2 ur pm list

thanks alot
i will try to cont soon
i have added u in my pm list
except my request
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by m4manju


hey awesome concept... ⭐️ specially the promo is making me curious... pls add me to the PM list and cont soon 😳

thanj u so much
i will try my best to update d part soon and make it interesting😊

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