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Originally posted by mohseena

NOTEnext part will be updated tomorrow afternoon...ive got a paper aakay i'll update wish me luck guyz!!

All d best for ur paper..Smile

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Originally posted by mohseena

NOTEnext part will be updated tomorrow afternoon...ive got a paper aakay i'll update wish me luck guyz!!
Good luck gal... All the best with your paper and hope to get more VirMan shots from you

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maanvi : Part 2...i hope all the wait was worth it =D kindly do comment and criticize ..it means a lot =D


Maanvi entered the room .jeevika was sitting all tensed ...but all the tension started to fade away when she saw her mannu face...something was different,...

jeevika : mannu tu aagai ...tu theek hai na ..
maanvi went right up to here jumped in the bed and lay down keeping her head on jeevikas lap ...jeevika wa surprised to see her change of mood ...jeevika put her arms around her and kissed her forehead ...

maanvi: ek dum theek hoon...after all tumhari mannu hoon di  *winked * looking up at jeevika ...
jeevika: sach sach bata ek dum se itna acha mood .main tou thee nahi wahan tujhko manay ..aisa kiya howa k aaj tou meray bagair he teri train patri pe wapis aage...

maanvi blushed recalling the sweet innocent moments ...brushing awayy the thoughts ...

maanvi: di tumko massage dena ata hai ...mera mutlab hai obviously tumnay pehlay nahi kiya ..laykin try karo na ..bahut simple hai ...

she took jeevikas hand and directed them the way she cud recall his finger movements ...jeevika gave it a shot ..but it was nowhere close to virats ...oh well ...

Jeevika: maza aarah hai ??
maanvi : hmm...haan di...haan aaraha hai ...

she got up remembered that she had to take her medicine ...


Mannu: acha di ab tum sojao wurna dark circles pur jain ge !! aur meri di tou subse khoobsorat lagni chye haina ??
jeevika: acha ziyada makhan na laga ..jao change karo aur aajao tum bhi sonay ..

maanvi thinking about excuses :...wo di ujhay tou abhi kuch song prep karni hai ...tum sojao mai thori dair mai aarai hoon ...di plzzz

jeevika : acha jaa laykin juldi aana wurna mai aaoongi tujhay lenay!!
maanvi : okay pukka di ..love u good night aur khoob saray jeeju k dreams dekho :P 
mannvi kissed her sister good night and ran to change in her night dress...

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Virat was on his way back to vadera house ...evry second a decision was being made ...at the same time he wondered that for the first time he was actually taking decisions which felt right ...he did not feel suffocated anymore ...just like reaching out to open the window so that he can breath freely ...all this time he acted stubborn...he cudnt get away frm his past cuz he was not letting it go ...but today he let go of it in an instant ..because today he felt bad ...firstly because he blamed maanvi ...maanvi...maanvi...y was he thinking so much abt her...who was she ...how can she affect Virat ...in such a short span of time ...grr...it was a mix feeling ..his one side of heart was just bzy pumping blood to his cheeksEmbarrassed ..while a little angry arrogant virat was being all stubborn how could someone control his thoughts his heart his decisions like that!!... 

anywayz ge reached vadera house ...evryone was worried ...as he entered before anyone said anything he spoke 

virat : im sorry  ..mujhay yun bagair bataye nahi jaana chaye tha ...ainda aisa nahi hoga ...dada ji bua ji im sorry ...he said it with sincerity...and what evryone noticed was the difference in his tone ...virat was talking like a responsible person ...with his sudden apology no one felt the need of scolding him criticizing him ...and they all let it go ...before moving up to his room he turned back ..

virat : ma dada ji bua ji ...kul aaplogon se bahut zarori baat karni hai ..mai breakfast k liey time pe aajaonga ...with that off he went to his...took a hot water bath ..that was just a fromality otherwise he was already all fresh with no sign to anxiety or tiredness ... 

he went outside ...the breeze felt even more cooler as they touched his wet hair ...standing under the moon light ..without thinking for another moment ..he dialed her number...


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maanvi had silently sneaked inside their room ..trying her level best to ignore any sort of noise that cud wake her di up ...first she grabed the shopping bag virat had given frm the side table (simultaneously thinking how jeevika di completely ignore and didnt even ask abt it...well good for her ...kiya bolti wo ) thn as soon as she opened the drawer he phone started ringing ...she quickly cut the call sat down down without breathing ...hoping that di did not wake up and cursing the person for the awesome timing ...she put her cell on silent and chkd who had called...smile appeared on her face..it was virat ..and...oh god calling again..not that she didnt wanted to talk ..SHE WAS DYING TO PICK UP THE CALL...she quickly took out her medicine ..stepped out of the room rand towards the terrace grabbing a waterbottle of the shelf ... as soon she closed the door behind her she answered the call ...

maanvi " he..hello ... trying to cath back on her breath ...

virat " hello maanvi ..tum theek ho ?? 

maanvi : ya ..wo ek mint ...she took two deep deep breaths and calmed her heart beat ..not being that successful but atleast now she cud talk properly ..

maanvi: relax chep!!! abhi bhagtay hoye uper aaye hoon ..saan tou aanay dou ..
virat : yaar tum to poori bunderiya ho ...sukoon naam ki cheez nahi hai !!
maanvi : ya ya whtevr... aur batao kesay call kara (maanvi was back to her normal giggly teasing self all carefree ...
virat : kuch nahi bus ghar pahuncha bahut bore horaha tha ..socha tumko tung karkay apnay app ko entetain karlon
maanvi : excuse me mai tum ko kyun k saas bh kabhi bahu lagti hoon jo entertain karongi ??!!!

virat : lol LOL

virat: nahi nahi maanvi tum tou ...tumkahan aur wo kahan ...i mean obviously tum se bara drami kon ho sukta hai (as soon as he completed his sentenced he distanced his cell phone frm his ear for the love of his hearing Wink 
Maanvi : virat k bachay!!! ziyada smart na bano..tumse bari drami tou nahi hoon ...itna talent chupaa kay bethay ho ...

as soon as the words were out she regretted it ...she hated herself for being so blunt and non-thoughtful...virat went silent as well ...it was not that he was hurt because of maanvi ...but a sudden flashback ...but he pushed it aside ...but he was more sober now ..

mannvi ..virat .sor...

virat : aray its okay banderiya   ...ummm ye batao ..tabiyat kesi hai 
maanvi : aaray yaar tum tou ab aisay poochtay ho jaisay mai kul he marnay wali hoon 
virat : maanvi yaar kabhi tou srs hojaya karo ..jub dekho kuch ulta he bolti ho..mout mazak nahi hoti ...

maanvi : aacha baba sorry ...nahi karongi ...but tum bhi mujhse baar baar na poocha karo ..aur plz mujhay wo indirect isharay bhi mut kara karo ...di ko bhi jhoot bolna purta hai ..
virat : tou bata kyun nahi deti ghar walon ko ..ismai chupana kiya hai ..

maanvi in her mind( chupana zaroori hai virat ...itna tou jaanti hoon ye koi choti moti chee nahi hai ...im afraid too ...but im more afraid..agar di ko pata chala tou wo tou mujhay nahi chor k jayege..laykin unko poora haq hai apni life jeenay ka ...meri waja se kyun wo pareshan hoon ) ..


Both hiding thr pain pain frm the world ...the sort of ppl who gave out only happiness ..and kept all the pain for thmslvz...

virat : hello...hello maanvi ...kidhar khoo gaii ..
maanvi : yaheen hoon duffer ...

virat: dawai khaaye ?/

maanvi : ye poocho chocolates khaee?? Wink
Virat laughed at her innocence ...: acha chalo wohee bata dou ...

maanvi : *giggles*..haan khae ..infact he chocolate k baad i had my medicine phir abhi mai dosri chocolate khaanay jaarai hoon (she had been munching on her chocolates adn gulped down her medicine during the convo )
virat : chocolates itni pasand hain ??


maanvi : uff itni itni itni itni k koi hud nahi agar poora samnder hota na tou mai tou god se bolti mujhay mermaid banade ...bahut achi lugte hain chocolates ...
virat : haan wo bhi mooti mermaid and started laughing out like crazy ...
maanvi joined him too ...they kept talking for a while when maanvi heard someone coming ..
maanvi : acha virat mai chalti hoon lugta hai di aarai hai ..wo mera wait kar rai theen ...
virat : okay ...tou 
maanvi : hmm tou ...
virat : nahi kuch nahi ...jaoo .apni  di k pass ...
maanvi : nahi tou kiya tumharay pass ao chep!!
virat : aao na Tongue
maanvi : haha joke tha ...bahut he sada howa tha 
virat : yeh right ..

maanvi : ...acha virat mai phone rakhti hoon ...
virat : okay bye ...
maanvi : nahi ek mint virat...
virat: bolo ...
maanvi : ...thank u ...sub cheezon k liey ..
virat : oye hoye ...maanvi the sherni itnay pyaar se thank u ...chalo tum bhi kiya yaad rakho gi welcome MAANVI !! 
manvi giggled and ended the call ...
both smiling look at thr cell phone ...they could feel the change in the air ...



part b coming up... (ignore mistakes plz )

hope u guyz like it sorry for making u guyz wait ,...plus i dont want to rush in with the story as i have it in my head ...next episode we'll see virat fixing things

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Part B plz...

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nice one...looking forward for part b

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so cool yaar..perfect virat manvi convo...thnks for the pm..please continue ur part B  soonSmile

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