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Posted: 23 November 2011 at 8:37am | IP Logged
looking forward to yr ff...sounds interesting continue soon :))

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hey yaar.. a very warm welcome to BALH forumHug waiting for ur FFDay Dreaming

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Originally posted by Anamika163

hey yaar.. a very warm welcome to BALH forumHug waiting for ur FFDay Dreaming
thank you so much for warm welcome...loved all ur comment ...i will updt frist part soon Smile

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Interesting concept, cant wait to read more

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hey dear... plz update ur FF... eagerly waiting

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good one and different.. Start soon

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PART -1

                                           WHERE ARE YOU...

Regular morning at kapoor mansion….

Rams dadi .. –hayee iss ghar koi bhi meri kadar nahi karta tha who roh pata hi tha…par aaj toh bagwan ko  bhul gaye .. aree  niharika …tu kaha hai ?

Niharika came down the stairs with … slight feared face..

Niharika – ji mummy ji aap …meh yahi hu who bas kuch….kam reh gaya tha… iss liye

Dadi – ha ha janti hu meh ki kitna kaam karti hai … apna make up kar rahi ho gi na..

Naharika – ab puja shuru kare kya?

Dadi –par mere golu kaha pe hai …golu

Ram came down the stair wearing white kurta.. Talking on phone..

Ram – ok Mr.gupta ..we will surely got the news  ….what next deal plz fill the trader soon …I don't want any kind of unprofessional behavior

Dadi – golu yaha aja beta…

(Ram walks up to dadi with small smile on lips)

Kitne dino ke baad mili hu meh tujhee…aaj kal kaam meh busy ho gaya ki apni dadi ko bhul gaya..tu bhul gaya par meh kaise bhul jau tumhe…

(Ram bend down n take her blessings .placed his hand on her shoulder)

Ram –dadi aap kaise baat kar rahe ho …meh aap ko bhul skata hu kya..woh sirf kaam meh busy tha.. 

(Niharika personally hate ram…but always used to do fake acting that she loves for … his money …even dadi also nominate him as owner of whole kapoor industry after him)

 Naharika-ram ab ye sab bate chodo ..paja kar le..

dadi – ram beta aaj tu arti karega…

She handover thali to ram..And once the puja got over.. ram was about go to his room when dadi called him  n said

 Dadi – ram…beta..tujh se kuch baat kari thi

(ram turned to her..Listening her carefully.)

 Aaj ghar pe MR hah ane wale hai ..unki beti ke sath ,eh chahti hut u ghar pe jaldi ajaye

There sudden change in ram's expression.. Turning little bit annoying

Ram – dekhiye dadi meh acci tarha janta hi ki app ye sab kyu kar rahi ..par aap bhi meri baat sunn lijiye …meh ne ek baar aap ke kehne pe shadi.. karli thi ab ab mujh meh itni takat nahi …ki meh phhir se dhokha sheh saku

(And he walked out from there..)

Dadi – par ram meri baat toh .sunnn..

(dadi murmured in faint voice)

'ram teri jindgi meh ek tuhaan aa chukka hai …who bhi meri wajse …jis se tu puri tarha tuth gaya hai …par meh chati hu ki nayi shurwat kare apne jivansathi ke sath..meh tujhe teri khushiya wapas dungi..

Mujhe pana purana ram milega…hassta muskurata '

In ram's room

Ram enters in full anger getting ready for office…went towards dressing table…open the drawer took out watch form it.. While wearing it in wrist..He just gauzed at mirror..

Ram kya ye sach meh hu..kitna badal gaya hu meh …khud ko bhi pehchan raha hu…itni daulat kama kar bhi iss ghadi ko nahi badla..kyu ki ye uss ne di thi..kaha hogi woh.. ab bhi wasi hi ho kya?

Priya … tumhara naam bhi sukoon deta mujh ko…

Priya's house

 A gal getting ready …place bindi at her forehead..Warped chunni around her neck..

Someone called loudly "priya ..jaldi aja"

She replied "ji abhi ayi ..kaki"

And she came out of house..a middle age lady standing there with bucket full…vegetable.

Kaki –kya priya.ajj der ho gayi..

Priya –kaki kal..bachho se khel ke thak gayi toh..der ho gayi

Kaki –kuch teri sabzi dene ayi thi…tazi ayi toh tere liye ayi..

Priya- shukriya kaki…aap ki awaz se hi hoti hai meri subha..

Kaki- itne saalo se tujhe dekhte aa rahi hu..meri koi beti nahi par hoti na toh teri jaisi hoti

Priya- kaki aap ko meri maa manti hu..

Kaki – ye sab chod tujhe der nahi ho rahi …jaldi  jaa..waha bacche intzaar kar rahe honge

The end

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