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ArHi (OS):A Dream With A Broken Heart (Page 6)

Radhika Shah IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 23 November 2011 at 8:49pm | IP Logged
Nice os...

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Lyraa99

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Posted: 23 November 2011 at 9:03pm | IP Logged
beautifully written...really loved it 

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littlemoi IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 23 November 2011 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
that was amazing!! so beautifully written!! i loved the os! thank you so much for the pm!

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savvz Senior Member
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Posted: 23 November 2011 at 9:19pm | IP Logged
beautiful...

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Posted: 24 November 2011 at 4:21am | IP Logged

ur second OS ... and as usual i am a bit late in reading it yaar .. i know i am forgiven for the delay .. i am counting on tht

.. so letz see how and wht u are talking about here ... the topic scares the hell out of me .. i hope u dont make me cry .. if u do i will lwt u know at the end ... 'now her goes nothing ...

god read the whole thing at one go .. i almost cried .. it was sad .. but still so heart felt .. the pain was contagious ...

god u have left me speechless ..how am i going to put into words .. how i felt .. i was perfect .. tht does justify even a single bit of wht i want to deliver ..

even in his dreams she could have her .. the sad thing about dreams is tht even after it is over it still lingered around the shattered wishes .. love the way u have put them into words .. god ... loved the dream .. it so sweet and so touchy and heart felt and at the same time heart breaking at the same time ... dream felt so real and i almost though tht she might fall into the lake .. my bad . .stupid mind of mine was dreaming my itself ...

i loved it a lot .. perfect use of words and phrases ... amazing job ...

btw .. perfect topic .. 

catch u later 

xoxo

- - badra

 

    

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Posted: 24 November 2011 at 4:43am | IP Logged
just one word...beautiful...Smile

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Posted: 24 November 2011 at 9:10am | IP Logged
For Arnav & Kushi:
 
This love that I feel with all my heart,
Will always be there, even when we're apart,
Wish there was some way I could let you see,
That you and I, my darling, were meant to be...
 
Nice update, as always, Lyraa..

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Posted: 25 November 2011 at 2:33am | IP Logged
Beautiful!!!!!!!!
 
Excellent narrationThumbs Up...you truly have a unique and gifted talent for writing...loved this OS
 
Actually after reading this i fellt really bad that i didnt get time to read it as soon as i got the PM from you...i truly missed the moment then...do write more like this

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