Hitler Didi
Hitler Didi

India-Forums

   

ff to bring that curve on ur face (ch 1 on pg 3)

cuteteddy Goldie
cuteteddy
cuteteddy

Joined: 09 May 2005
Posts: 2117

Posted: 23 November 2011 at 1:49am | IP Logged
he was standing near the window . she looked so sweet , so divine just like an angel .  her pic of smiling spreading the happiness around the whole world. "i wish i meet wid u soon , n i promise i'll be cuming back to ur life!!" he promised to himself . "rishi " called a male voice .
"cuming champ "he replied .
he again looked at her pic n his greenish beautiful eyes were waiting to see her .

"i don't know y u left me ? everyone did this wid me . first papa , then u n then my happiness " she told to herself . the diamond like tears were shining in her eyes . but her pretty lips which were once always curved into beautiful smile which suited her wasn't there . she herself didn't know when the time was about to cum when she will smile again .may be soon he will cum n take away the pain which is stored in her heart .
hey guys so i hope u people liked the prolouge Embarrassed
i'll be updating character sketch when u people will fill the first page wid ur very precious comments Embarrassed if u liked then please hit the like button n do let me know whether i shall continue or not Embarrassed


Edited by cuteteddy - 26 November 2011 at 12:40am

The following 44 member(s) liked the above post:

cochindovepriya-ratiamithuprincess-mahumSportsFreakananyasheraDASTAK..AsktheDustsanyogitaprcshria19Mudrika25khushiratiashi.melodyfire-RH-ajahbamyhot___DASIBOY___kajol88jessica90jdots.Karam.Deewani.sonudewmadhubansenaysha1989bishwadeepakBhawna_artiPratameshmoksha89kirti123mygaby-RS-sreevijayanFavouriteofallKSG_luv-Khushi--Mehnaaz-loveinshi-PD-shafy_MNFaria..PINK.Silent.Dreamer-Araina-Roopal_ArDi

mygaby IF-Dazzler
mygaby
mygaby

Joined: 10 March 2010
Posts: 2599

Posted: 23 November 2011 at 1:52am | IP Logged
wow first to comment
welcome to the HD forum
i so loved it but think its a bit short

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

cuteteddy

Faria. IF-Sizzlerz
Faria.
Faria.

Joined: 30 January 2009
Posts: 22198

Posted: 23 November 2011 at 2:13am | IP Logged
Its beautiful start dear.Loved ur concept.Would like to read it further.Do cont. it.
Plz pm me ur update.Take care.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

cuteteddy

Bhawna_arti IF-Dazzler
Bhawna_arti
Bhawna_arti

Joined: 02 December 2010
Posts: 3436

Posted: 23 November 2011 at 3:13am | IP Logged
Nice start.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

cuteteddy

amyhot Senior Member
amyhot
amyhot

Joined: 13 May 2010
Posts: 322

Posted: 23 November 2011 at 3:19am | IP Logged
nice ..

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

cuteteddy

cuteteddy Goldie
cuteteddy
cuteteddy

Joined: 09 May 2005
Posts: 2117

Posted: 23 November 2011 at 3:43am | IP Logged
thanks guys .
anyone else interested ? shall i continue ?
kajol88 Senior Member
kajol88
kajol88

Joined: 26 May 2010
Posts: 386

Posted: 23 November 2011 at 4:08am | IP Logged
so short but nice one. 

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

cuteteddy

ananyashera Senior Member
ananyashera
ananyashera

Joined: 06 February 2011
Posts: 452

Posted: 23 November 2011 at 5:14am | IP Logged
nice one dear but too short...please continue soon...waiting...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

cuteteddy

Go to top

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index