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cuteteddy

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Posted: 23 November 2011 at 1:49am | IP Logged
he was standing near the window . she looked so sweet , so divine just like an angel .  her pic of smiling spreading the happiness around the whole world. "i wish i meet wid u soon , n i promise i'll be cuming back to ur life!!" he promised to himself . "rishi " called a male voice .
"cuming champ "he replied .
he again looked at her pic n his greenish beautiful eyes were waiting to see her .

"i don't know y u left me ? everyone did this wid me . first papa , then u n then my happiness " she told to herself . the diamond like tears were shining in her eyes . but her pretty lips which were once always curved into beautiful smile which suited her wasn't there . she herself didn't know when the time was about to cum when she will smile again .may be soon he will cum n take away the pain which is stored in her heart .
hey guys so i hope u people liked the prolouge Embarrassed
i'll be updating character sketch when u people will fill the first page wid ur very precious comments Embarrassed if u liked then please hit the like button n do let me know whether i shall continue or not Embarrassed


Edited by cuteteddy - 26 November 2011 at 12:40am

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Posted: 23 November 2011 at 1:52am | IP Logged
wow first to comment
welcome to the HD forum
i so loved it but think its a bit short

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Posted: 23 November 2011 at 2:13am | IP Logged
Its beautiful start dear.Loved ur concept.Would like to read it further.Do cont. it.
Plz pm me ur update.Take care.

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Posted: 23 November 2011 at 3:13am | IP Logged
Nice start.

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Posted: 23 November 2011 at 3:19am | IP Logged
nice ..

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cuteteddy

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Posted: 23 November 2011 at 3:43am | IP Logged
thanks guys .
anyone else interested ? shall i continue ?

kajol88

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Posted: 23 November 2011 at 4:08am | IP Logged
so short but nice one. 

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ananyashera

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Posted: 23 November 2011 at 5:14am | IP Logged
nice one dear but too short...please continue soon...waiting...

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