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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 9:12am | IP Logged
pm me if u update and this is really good and write more

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 10:01am | IP Logged
Awwh. This was a really good one.
Please pm me when you update.
And keep writing Smile

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2222222 guuud to be true & plzzz pm me whn u update nxt part

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plz continue...

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Last Part

Manvi sneaking away from the house at night, she passes near Jeevika's room and hears her sister lauging at something

Manvi: (teary eyed) Dii main aapko bohot miss karungi par Virat ko ab meri zaroorat hai, Main aapke paas jaldi vapas aaungi

Manvi wipes her tears and goes from there, she goes to the park and spends the night there

In the morning, Manvi wakes up and looks around hoping to see Virat there but she doesn't find him, she decides go to his friends house and get Virat's address from there. She goes to his friend's place and rings the door bell impatiently, The door opens aftr a while and she finds Virat standing infront of her…Manvi smiles and sighs as she didn't have to find him.

Virat: Tum…Tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho

Manvi: Main yahaan tumhare friend se milne aayi thi

Virat: *eyes her suspiciously* Woh yahaan nahi rehta ab, usne mujhe yeh ghar rehne ke liye diya hai

Manvi: Oh L Toh theek hai main chalti hoon (pretends to go)

Virat holds her hand and pulls her inside and closes the door

Virat: Tum yahaan aayi kyun thi

Manvi: *purposely* Woh Main…Woh Main, aise hi bas…ab main chalti hoon theek hai, Bye!!!

Virat holds her hands and pulls her again

Manvi: Arrey kya kar rahe ho, aise kisi ladki ka haath pakad te hue sharam  nahi aayi

Virat: Tum meri wife ho aur tumhe sharam nahi aayi aise akele kisi ladke ke ghar pea ate hue, Itna Jaldi bhool gayi tum mujhe *gives her his angry young man look*

Manvi: Haan bhool gayi waise hi jaise tum bhool gaye the ke main tumhari wife hoon

Virat: Tum…Tumse baat karna hi bekar hai

Manvi: Tumse bhi, Samjhe CHEP…kabhi tum chahte ho ki main tumhe bhool jaun aur ab bhool gayi hoon toh tumhe gussa aa raha hai

Virat: Bhool gayi…ek din mein *angry*

Manvi: Haan ek din mein

Frustrated Virat walks away to his window, Manvi looks at him and smiles, she goes to him and takes his hand in hers and rests her head on his shoulder

Manvi: I love u Virat  aur main yahaan sirf tumhare liye aayi thi, tumhare dost se tumhara ata pata poochne

Virat leaves her hand and turns away from her

Virat: Yeah Right!!!

Manvi: Arrey main sach mein sab chod ke aayi hoon, ab tum mujhpe yakheen bhi nahi hai kya?

Virat: Haan nahi hai

Manvi: theek hai toh jab tak tum yakheen nahi kar lete main chila chila kar kahungi ki (shouts) I LOVE U…I LOVE U, I LOVE U, I LOVE U

Virat looks at Manvi

Virat: (annoyed) Kya kar rahi ho…bandh karo…mere neighbours hai yahaan..ohk  

Manvi: Nahi chup baithungi, tumhare neighbours ko sunna hai toh sunne warna kaan bandh karle (shouts)…I LOVE U, I LOVE U, I LOVE U, I LOVE U

Virat laughs and keeps a hand over her mouth

Virat: (whispers) I love u too (smiles) Ab khush

Manvi moves his hand and hugs him

Manvi: Bohot :D

Virat holds her tightly and says "I missed u" and Manvi blushes

They stand like that in each other's arms for minutes, never wanting to let go of each other  ever now

 

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 05 December 2011 at 11:26am | IP Logged
Sooo, romantic yaar & plz nxt part mein kuch intimate scenes incorporate karoWink yaa i knw tht i m a bit of badmaash bachi but kya kare jahan Virman ka ques. hota hai toh DIL HAI KI MANTA NAHIN but seriously loved it and keep postingBig smile

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Posted: 05 December 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruchi245

Sooo, romantic yaar & plz nxt part mein kuch intimate scenes incorporate karoWink yaa i knw tht i m a bit of badmaash bachi but kya kare jahan Virman ka ques. hota hai toh DIL HAI KI MANTA NAHIN but seriously loved it and keep postingBig smile
Next Part bhi likhna padhega...try karoongi, i m lazyTongue

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Posted: 05 December 2011 at 11:31am | IP Logged
thank you soo much for the update
and its really gud

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