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Thnxxx for ur lovely reviews guyzzz..SmileHug

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Posted: 24 November 2011 at 2:53am | IP Logged
Hey really liked the character sketch. It will be interesting  to c Shilpa as Kria's friend. Thanks for the PM

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it was nice update. awesome just loved it Thumbs Up

                                                        Thanks for the pmSmile
and please pm me next time alsoTongue

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Posted: 24 November 2011 at 8:38am | IP Logged
WOW dat was SUPERB updateClap
LUV d convo btw RECKY awww soo cuteEmbarrassedLOL
nd den KRIA ka thokna dat too REY's moms car hahaha LUVD dat part tooo lolzEmbarrassedLOL
awww Rey nd his moms convo was ADORABLEEmbarrassed
cnt wait to read d next updateBig smile
thnx for d pmEmbarrassed

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Kria reaches her Home..Rings d door bell...and hr mom opens d door

Kria: hey mammaSmile

Padma: ITni der kyu kardi..??Angry

Kria: mamma pehle andar to aane do...Fir batati hu..Big smileKria enters..

Padma: mai Adhe ghante se tera wait kar rahi hu...

Kria: Mamma wo raste me purani freind mil gayi..to baaton baaton me tym ka pata nhi chala

Padma: dekh kria zamana thik nhi hai...tu 5 mint b der hojati hai to pata hai kitni paresha hojati hu mai...

Kria: oho mamma relax...aap kyu itni fikar kr rhe ho?? zamana chahe jitna kharab ho..mera kuch nahi bigad sakta..LOLLOL

Padma: haan Tu to tope hai na...Big smile

Kria: bilkul thik..she smiles and hugs her motherHug

Padma: meri pyari si bacchi...SmileJake haath mu dhole..mai khana lagati hu..

Kria: ok

Kria in her room...laying on bed...Thinks abt rey...Day Dreaming

kria: Pehle mra usse takrana...aur kuch hi der baad fir parking area me milna...*Blushes*kahin bhagwan ji mj koi signs toh nahi de rahe...???Ohh god yeh mai kya bol rahi hu...mai kyu uske baare me soch rahi hu...ufff...Angry

Padma: kria beta khana lag gaya hai

Kria: aayi mamma

Padma: maine tri fav aloo ki sabzi banayi hai..

Kria: ummm.Yummy...She starts eating..

Needhi enters

Needhi: hey

Kria: hey moti

Needhi: huh..mamma dekho naAngry

Padma: kria chup chap se khana khaoWink

Needhi: haan... Jaldi khake mamma ki help karo kitchen me..Big smile

Kria: accha nani ma

Needhi smiles

Kria: How ws ur day?

Needhi: ek dum boring..Teacher log ne pura paka diya

Kria: unhone pakaya to tune khaya kyu nahiROFL

Needhi: Makes weird face...Bahut hi bakwas joke maara di..plz dnt try again...Silly

Kria: laughs..

Padma: kria beta neha ka call aya hai

Kria: haan Mom

Padma: yeh le

Kria: Hello neha..Kaisi hai?

Neha: subah jaisi thi waisi hi hu..ROFL

Kria: huh...Kaise yaad kiya?

Neha:kyu mai tujko yaad nahi kr sakti..Kya ye haq sirf  Rey ko hai...?Wink

Kria: bakwas karegi to mai call disconnect kr dungiAngry

Neha: arrey wah itni acchi batein kar rahi hu mai aur tu isko bakwas bol rahi hai...LOL

Kria: ok bye

Neha: oye hang on..Big smile

Kria: hmmm

Neha: Tujhe mai ek baat batana bhul gayi yaar

Kria: kya??

Neha: aaj sham mere cousin ne party k liye invite kiya?

Kria:Konse cousin ne.?

Neha: sunny ne

Kria: toh??

Neha: Join me na plzzz

Kria: pagal hogayi hai kya?? Mamma papa mujhe maar dalenge...

Neha: arrey sun bahut maza ayega yaar..plzz..koi bahana bana de..

Kria: bahana..? Na baba

Neha: dekh mai janti hu k tu kitni badi nautanki hai..kisiko b apni baat manva sakti hai..plzz na mere liye..

Kria: Confusedummm...sochne de...tu ek kaam kar..tu abhi mere ghar aja..

Neha: aur?

Kria: aur mamma se kehna k group study karne k liye hum trisha k ghar ja rahe hai...

Here Trisha is Kria's Classmate..

Neha: gud idea..Mai abhi aayi..Smile

Neha cums 2 kria's place..

Padma: arrey beta kaisi ho???

Neha: thik hu aunty aur aap?

Padma: mai b thik hu..

Neha: Uncke kaise hai?

Padma: Wo b thik hai

Kria: whispers..point pe aaPinch

Neha: aunty aapse permission leni thi..

Padma: kis baat ki?

Neha: wo kya aunty examz nazdeek arahe hai aur hamare teachers ne portion complete hi nahi kiya..isliye..ahh..isliye hum saare classmates trisha k ghar group study karne ja rahe hai...

Padma: accha to jao..

Neha: kria ko saath lejaun

Padma: kya? Sham k tym..hargiz nahi..Kria tu jana chahti hai..

Kria: nahi mamma..wo neha mujhe force kar rahi thiUnhappy

Neha: kria padhegi nahi to fail hojayegi...

Kria: nahi mai fail hojaungi par shaam ko kahi nahi jaungiWink

Neha: aunty aap hi samjhaiye isse...studies ka sawal hai

Padma: haan..par kria k papa ko pata chala to wo gussa karenge..

Neha: aunty..uncle k aane se pehle hi hum ajayenge

Padma: pakka

Kria and neha: haan pakka...

Padma: thik hai fir jao..Magar dhyan se..Koi ladke to nahi arahe na?

Kria: no mamma koi nahi..aap b naa..sirf hum gals hi group study kar rahe hai...Wink

Kria: mai abhi tayyar hoke aati hu..neha chal...Dancing

Kria and neha in kria's room

Neha: woow hamara jawab nahi..kya drama kiya? Mai to darr rahi thi kahin phans na jaye..haha

kria: he he..Mai konsi dress pehenu..Ermm

Neha: koi b pehenle tujh par har dress suit karti hai...*smiles*Party

Kria gets ready and both leave...

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Posted: 24 November 2011 at 8:57am | IP Logged
osm update sultana...luv it...u rock...!!!!!! i jst luv ur updates...!!!!!!

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it was really nice update. loved itClap waiting for the next update. please update soonDay Dreaming

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