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Kriyaansh FF-YOung Love NOTE(pg 150) (Page 3)

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Posted: 21 November 2011 at 10:08am | IP Logged
hey awesome concept
i loved kriyansh 1st meeting it was sweet
not a classic 1st jagda meeting!!..lol
n they were smiling n thinking abt each other..wow
cant wait 4 next
see yaaa =)
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Posted: 21 November 2011 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
WOW...this is good..!!!!!!
please continue soon...!! and plz PM me when u do..!

-Saumya
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Posted: 21 November 2011 at 7:47pm | IP Logged
LOVED IT PLZZZ PM ME!!!! AND KYA BAAT HAI THEY MET WITH NO JAGRA!!! Big smile
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Posted: 21 November 2011 at 8:44pm | IP Logged
superb 
kya baat yaar 
ur not a bad writer
nice to c a 1st meeting with no fighting
pm plz
great job!
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Posted: 22 November 2011 at 3:42am | IP Logged
Awww darn Happy wid d reviews...M on Cluod 9..Dint expect so mch of appreciation...Luv u all guyz Embarrassed
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Posted: 22 November 2011 at 3:43am | IP Logged

Part 2
Kria Enters her classroom and luks fr a seat...she sits n switches on hr cel and tells niharika..
Kria: nehaa...Mra cell...
Niharika lost in her thots...
KriA: (irritated) shouts neha ...neha... And pulls hr...
Niharika: haan haan kya hogaya kyu chilla rhi hai?
Kria: tu kaha kho gayi mri maa...
Niharika: Mai soch rhi thi k jahan tak mj pata hai tu rey se pehli baar mili aur milte hi hawa hawa luk luk...ummm...chakkar kya hai...laughs
Kria: shut up gadhi aisa kch nhi...wo kya hai ki..
Niharika: haan bata bata kya hai?
Kria: haan wohhh...
Teachrs entrs...
niharika: whispers...bolnaaa
Kria: chup hoja badme baat karenge...wrna sir hmko bahar phikwa denge
Niharika: yeh to acchi baat hai..bahar jake aram se baat karenge...aur rey ko b dkhne chalenge...hahaha..
Kria: pinches neha..
Niharika: shouts ahhh mummy...
Teacher: wats gng on dr..Kria and niharika plz concentrate...
Kria and niharika Sorry sir...
Niharika: buddha..
Kria: Giggles
rey in his classroom lost in thots of kria...
Vicky: rey mre bhai...
Rey: ummm...
Vicky: assignment complete kr liya tune?
Rey: ummm...
Vicky: kya umm umm kiye ja rha hai...mai kch puch rha hu...seeda seeda jawab de...kis ladki k khayalo me gumsum hai..?
Rey: Wat rubbish..mai kisi k khayalo me nhi khoya samjha...
Vicky: haan bhai sab dikh rha hai...
Rey giving tough luk 2 Vicky
Vicky: sry
Bell rings...Class ovr..
Rey and Vicky in parking area
Vicky: aaj to mai thak gaya
Rey: kyu...tne class me konsa pahad palta diya..
Vicky: arrey padhai kisi pahad se kam hai kya bhai...Laughs
Rey smiles...Rey: tu Saala nhi sudrega..
Rey luking around...
Vicky: kya dhund rha hai..apni bike udhar hai..chal chlte haiu aaj sham araha hai na sunny ki party me..?
Rey: naaa
Vicky: come on yaar...plzzz mre liye chlna bht maza ayega...
Rey:Ok Ok...Bt Plzzz Dance k liye mjko force mat kr waha...
Vicky: haan tu apna talent sbse chupa k rakhna chahta hai na..
Rey: watevr...
Rey: yaar Vicky mri bike k aage ye kis bewakuf ladki ne apni bike park ki hai..damn...in ladkiyo ko kch samaj nhi hai...he moves d bike aside..
Kria: hello hello ye aap kya kar rhe hai
Rey: Ye aapki bike hai
Kria: Ji..Sry jaldi me maine subah aise park kardi
Rey: ohh dats fine...aap jaha chahe park kr skti hai
Kria: Kya??
Rey: Ahhh kch nhi...
Kria: Thik hai to il move...
Rey: itni jldi?
Vicky: smiling...haan haan itni jldi kyu rey aapko yaha parking area me mvie dikhayega...
Rey: angrily...vickyyy
Kria: blushing.. K bye tk cre...
Rey: U too...
Vicky: oye hoye kon hai ye...itni pyari pyari batein kr rha hai tha iske sath...chakkar kya hai boss...
Rey: kch nhi corridor me mjse takrayi thi...
Vicky: wooo takrana nd all ha..intrsting...fir
Rey: fir kch nhi...ab chal...M gttng late



Edited by sweetsultana - 22 November 2011 at 7:40am

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Posted: 22 November 2011 at 4:05am | IP Logged
aaawww such a cute story...!!!

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Posted: 22 November 2011 at 4:57am | IP Logged
hieyyy its fabulous ...
continue n plzzz update soon...
n pm me nxt time...
thanxx for the pm for this time

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