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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
Guys this is my 2nd ff with virmaan and jeevi though jeevi will cum later I'll b starting plzzz tell me if I shud continue

Start of something new
It was the last day of high school and the crew had planned an outing but eventually the plan fell back when miss maanvi got lost. She had taken the wrong train and now she was missing.

Virat and his crew has planned an outing after there Kay meeting though his dadaji eventually did not kno thnx to his brother he sneaked out of the house for partying.


    virat was walking on he train a he heard a girl screaming
Oyyye tinge Sharam nhi atthi kya ek akeli ladki ko cher rahe ho kuch to
Tameez Keri mere baab ke bi baab ki umer ke hi
Madam main apko Cher nhi raha bhal ke ye keh raha hoon ke yeh train reserved hai aye isse appko uterna parega

Kisne Kaha huh arrey mere pass ticket hai
Maam for the last time yeh train Aday ghante se pehley jaw chuki hai
Kiaaa aur Tum mujhe ab bata rahe ho
Mam main appko keh raha ta chali Gaye chali Gaye Lekin app sun ti to phir hi na
Kia chali gaye chali Gaye yeh to tab kehte na jab tumhari dhoti utar jaati chali gaye chali Gaye

Virat cud not help but laugh nw he had tried controlling it but it was done maanvi started glaring at him
Kia Kia hai he he he tumhe yeh mazaak lag raha hai he he he
Virat laughed harder at the face maanvi made

The conductor went to virat
Sir main inay kab se samjhane ki kaushish kar raha Hun Lekin yeh to Samajh tI hi Nahi ke yeh train reserved hai
Ohh to tumhari train hai huh. Dekho meri train has chinju hai so main iss train mein rahungi Waisey yeh train jaa Kaha rahi hai
Virat raised his eyebrow at the girl who already declared the she will stay in the train he had reserved. Obviously she was not like the other girls who would cry and b too scared to be alone with guys in a train
Jahaan app chahein virat.laughed
Acha to agar main kahun ke Bhagwan ke pass chale to phir kya kahoge oyye mere saath zyada free hone ki koshish mat Kero rishikesh ki hun ek Jhatke mein tumhe tameez sikha dhungi
Oh to miss rishikesh y don't u do so

Arey yaar tumhare munn lag ke main apna din haraab ker lungi
Glad u think so said virat
Maanvi glared and said mujhe munsoori Jana hai to wahan pe train Rokh dena mujhe neend aye hui hai main jaa Rahi hun sone aur haan she snapped get finger on his face agar zyada hushiyari dhikhane ki koshish ki to mujhse bhura koi Nahi hoga samjhe

Virat smirked as she left so she was goin to Munsoori too.

Hhuh interesting girl he thought

It was obvious tht virat nd his crew were goin t
Munsoori too
Wen maanvi found out she asked him well ordered him to answer wether why he didnt tell her
And viraat had sweetly replied well tab nhi bataya to abhi bada deta hun hum
Monsoori ja rahe gain

Maanvi had ignored him and tried enjoying her vacation but where ever she went virat turned up there

Their vacation had ended and they ha gone back with maanvi without saying bye

Maanvi had enrolled in a college in Chandhigar nd she was moving there with her sister as she cudnt stand being away frm her

It was the first day of college when maanvi heard girls screaming

Woh agaya haiii
Omggg mujhe koi catch kare he is sooo hottt
Haye dayia Kia chal hai
Kia face hai
Aur mera Kia haal hai

Maanvi laughed at the girls and thought kaun sa salman agaya hai yahan pe
She started walking as usual without looking and bumped into sum1 and as the two separated they said well maanvi said
Tum
While the guy said
App

App the girls in the college who had gathered to see the hunk
The handsome hunk had called a newbie app

What do u think hope u like it

Edited by Brklyn_gal - 14 January 2012 at 12:33am

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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 2:07pm | IP Logged
love it n plz cont... also plz read my ff.. yeh pyarr hoga hai dobara

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plz continue soon... and pm plz wenever u update Embarrassed

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Luv it!! It's well umm.. A new stry goin really well!!!! Shud srsly cntinu!!! Nd plz pm me..


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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
Nice story...
Plz PM me when you continue 

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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
Very nice :)

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
Part two thnx for the lovely comments u guys r damn nice

Well here it is

Tum said maanvi
App said viraat

App app app everyone started saying the girls got jealous and the boys too who saw manvi

Tum mera peecha ker ker ke yahan pe bhi agaye

Oh hello madam apka peecha izat rass Nahi athi kya

Oye tum... Maanvi said

Oye Kia huh

Viraat held manvis arm and dragged her to the terrace of the school which as usual was isolated

Woyee mera haath choro
Nhi chorunga to Kia

Plzz maanvi whispered.
Virat let go suddenly hearing the plead it made his heart beat faster

Virat woh main yeh kehna chahti hun ke Jo bhi iss vacation mein hua woh Tum sab bhul jao

Bhul jaoon Kia matlab

The flashback of vacation

Virat and maanvi had gotten drunk and the two had spent the night in the same room but had done nothing wrong.
But as the two had woken up they thought sumthing wrong had happened the night

Manvi had cried and virat had consoled her as the two grew closer as days passed. They almost looked as if they had started dating but their closeness had eventually grew far as the days of vacation passed and eventually their outgrowing closeness ended without byes.

Back to reality
Virat yahan pe ladkiyan Tum pe marti hain air mujhe pehle din mein hee dushman Nahi chahiye

Oh to yh baat hai theek hai aj se
Main bhi tumse dooor rahunga Kuin ke tumhe doosron ki fikr hai

Virat mera yeh matlab

Nhi maanvi umm class shurun hone lagi hai main chalta hun

Virat
Bye manvi

Scene shift
Manvi entered the class with tears and all the girls glared at her

Ohhh ohhh virat Ne dil Thor diya Kia

Manvi looked away and went to her seat

Virat entered and sw maanvi and stiffened as he saw her crying

The only thought tht passed his mind was I made her cry

He saw the girls laughing at maanvi nd knew tht was wht maanvi was tlking about

He walked in the class and his one look shut the girls up

Maanvi felt him near and looked upto a smiling virat

She smiled back confused a little

He came and sat next to her and whispered srry

The girls shocked as they saw virat sit next to manvi started tlking loud about maanvi but used a different name.

Virat luked on as he heard them

Virat Tum aisi ladki ke bare mein Kia kahoge

Virat replied main kahunga un ladkiyo ko Jo uske bare mein yeh kehti hai ke don't hate her if u ain't her

Aur Waisey bhi agar woh larki un larkiyon mein se hoti to woh bhi jalti usey Kuin ke woh Sab se pyaari hai meaning it's coolly the girls hey her shed be jealous too of she was on of the haters as she is really beautiful frm inside and out

This shut the girls up

Guys I kno this epi was boring but promise to make it better this was cz I had a headache thnx for reading this torture

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 3:34pm | IP Logged
It was amazing ... Thnx for pm... I will wait for ur next on now

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