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Hey guys its me fiza! I'm updating chapter 4 from my cell... my laptop is in the shop I was down with the flu for a while now I'm better so I felt like writing so here it is

Chapter 4

Jeevikas POV 

11:30pm

 I slowly open the door without trying to wake maanu or malu but like always my sweet choti bhen maanu was waiting up for me.
"Maanu what's this your watching TV what about your photo project you should be working on that instead na" I say. 
"Di forget all that how was your date with manan I mean after so long you both met kaisa tha" asks maanvi. 
"Acha tha after a long time I had fun" I said "maanu its late ill just change and lets get ready for bed tommorrow is a working day for me and you have college" I said trying to avoid any more questions from my lil Sherlock Holmes.

I get in bed and open my diary and start writing as soon as I start to my drama queen sister starts her drama. 
"Nahin! kyun! why this di your my everything and this diary is my ...my" Mannu struggles for the right word 
"Is your what Mannu?" I look at her with a smile. 
"Di its my sautaan just not fair you say you tell me everything but instead God knows what you write in that diary of yours I swear di I will main Mar daloon gi I will burn it one day" says Maanvi. She gives me one last warning look before yawning widely and slipping into sleep on my bed after a muttered good night. This is her usual habit though she shares a room with Malu, my Mannu still loves to sleep with me parts of her childishness that I adore so much 
 I start writing in my diary Mannu you wont understand why people write things in their personal diaries things they wouldn't tell anyone I sometimes surprise myself too with what I write ... I start by putting today's date
Today was a good day at work but very busy. I was so excited about my date with Manan I couldn't wait to see him but like always it was for a short while in between dinner he got paged to get back to the hospital. As always he paid the bill and took my word that I would finish my food and have the driver drop me home I kept my promise not only for him but if I had come back early, then Maanvi would find out then call and put Manan on a gulit trip which I didn't want  and Mannu would try to convince me to take a break from the relation which I can't, I know he loves me. But sitting there at the restaurant I noticed someone who shared a similar situation as mine albeit with a reversal. On the table next to me there was a couple who was just like me and Manan but in there relationship the Guy was so loving and his gf was so controlling if ihad a guy like him I would be lucky. 
OMG! what am I thinking! no Manan is such a sweet guy I think I'm dead tired I should sleep .
I close my diary and place a peck on my Mannu's cheek before switching of the bedside lamp.


Edited by RDKFF - 26 March 2012 at 12:32pm

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Fiza di...you have done an awesome job once again in depicting Jeevika..
Love you Di..

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Nyc partt..!
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