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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
Realy nice start Cant wait to read the next part~!

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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 12:09am | IP Logged
Great start for a good FF. Loved Ahem's description and can't wait for the entrance of Gopi. Please update soon.

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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 1:29am | IP Logged
the first part was nice

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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 3:08am | IP Logged
A superb start to what reads as an intriguing, thought provoking FF with a title that makes you wonder 'what could go wrong?'
 
You have provides a good character description of Ahem and the bubbly Anita.
 
Looking forward to your next update.

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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 8:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by NazmaJ

Hey I really like the way you have introduced your story and set the scene in a calm and gentle way.

It sounds really good and the first part intrigues you and brings you into the story wanting you to learn more about the various characters especially Ahem.
 
Your writing really pulls you in leaving you wanting to read more!!


Thank you Nazma..I am happy that you liked my story..I will soon update part 2 ..and thank you so much for the comments and like...

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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 6:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ElizaKawa

wait is Anita Aham's gf?

will get to know as story progresses..Thank you for liking it and commenting


Edited by gohem123 - 19 November 2011 at 6:17pm

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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 6:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by CHIKA784

I loved it,it was so calm and serene,can't wait for Gopi's entranceTongue

Thank you for the comments..and likes...

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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 7:23pm | IP Logged
Such a sweet story. Hey i liked ahem in black jeans n shirt. Waiting for gopi to enter.waiting eagerly for next update

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