Viraat Manvi OS .The unbreakable bond - Page 2

Posted: 12 years ago
wow!!!!!!

love ur OS completely..

u hav written it soo lovely.. no words to appreciate dear  loved it completely :)

hope to see more such lovely OS's/ FF's/ or SS's sooon!!

me waiting...
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by uniquebluerose


why why why did you kill Manavi...I do not watn manvi to die...boo hooo
 
 
you have made me cry...how could you!!!!

ooops sorryy:)
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by tina_1234


very nyc nd emotional 

thankss=)
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by sarakhan98


thanx for liking 😳

thankss=)
yh ohh ok=)
Posted: 11 years ago
 such a sad story but it was awesome .
love the way how he confesses 😊  hate the way how she faints and dies 😡
Posted: 11 years ago
woww realllyy lovelyy
touched my heart
and a beautiful msg at the end

Posted: 11 years ago
wow...dat was really touching..made me sad...bt wat will happen nw if manvi is dead..:-( temme itzz a nightmare..pleaseee...
Posted: 11 years ago
Seriously this a very sad story, you could feel the pain in the end, why did she have to die, what will become of virat now? What about her di?

My Hindi is not that good if you could put English translations in I would be grateful 

Please continue and please pm me when you update love to read some more?
Edited by screen22 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
OMG.. Manvi dies... dis made me sad..😒😭
felt all d pain n emotions... U hv written everythng sooo beautifully... 👍🏼ahhh m speechless... felt sooo bad for Virat n Jeevika man how dey will survive... 😔 n Manvi knowingly put her lyf in danger fr her sis...🥺 ahhh... AMAZING WORK GAL...👍🏼👏

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