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Viraat Manvi OS .The unbreakable bond

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 8:02am | IP Logged
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This is my First OS .
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                    THE UNBREAKABLE BOND

virat sees dat manvi is secretly going somewhere alone...he  follows her n find out dat she is going to da hospital n thanking da doctor for not telling any1 about her having brain tumer till her sisters marriage..virat shocked to hear about her disease & tears start cumin out his eyez dat manvi is not tellin about her serious disease & risking her lyf just becoz she doesnt want her sisters marriage be interupted becoz of her..
next day 
virat searches
for manvi sees dat she is sitting alone crying..
manvi:plzz bhagwan g mere dee ki shadi tak mjay kuch na honay daina plzz:..
virat enters her room..manvi quickly wipes her tear off...
manvi:tumhain sharam nai ha kisi larki k room ma bina knock kiya atay ho?
virat: (sad) i knw u r cring manvi & i also knw y...
manvi
(shocked)y would i cry mjhay ronay ka koe shok nai ha & im just so happy becoz mere dee ki shadii unki pasand say hore ha:') 
virat: (in a serious face) i knw k tumhain sirf bukhar nai ha.tumhain...n  tear comes out of his eyes..manvii shocked to hear dat how does virat knw about her illness..bt she asks no question..manvi:HAAn mjhay brain tumer ha par is wakt nothing is more important 2 me den my sister..not even mee:'(
virat says nothing n walks out of da rooom ..
manvi:virat ruko plzz!plz dont tell any1 about it plzz otherwise everybody wil get worried 
plzz virat plzz:'(
(virat wipes her tear off) virat: okay i wont tell any1 till jivika bhabi's marriage..but 

tum pareshan mut hona im with you..you will get well soon:) (manvi's eyes full of tears hugss virat) 
manvi: daikho na virat i never wanted ki dee ki shadii ho takay ma un say dooor na hun par mujay kya pata ta k bhagwan mujay dee say itna dooor karday gaa... (virat puts his hands around manvi) 
virat: nai manvi nothing will happen to you mainay kaha na ma tumhairay saat hun...

Jivikas sangeeet
(manvi brushing her hair sees dat her brush is full of hair) virat enters da room and sees 
manvi crying...
manvii: virat mere baal pata nai itnay q gir rahay 
hain..
(virat trying to control his tears)
virat: kahan ger rahay hain? (virat smiles) is say zada tu mere roz girtay hain :)
In the evening Virat goes To doctor to know about manvi's health
Doctor:we have to admit her as soon as possible within a week or so...

virat comes back home and goes straight to manvi's room
Manvi:WAt happened virat u look so worried
Virat :Manvi i have been to doctor today and he said that we have to admit u in this Week so 
please please dont say no and chalo mere sath .i have said to doc to make all arrangements for ur operation
Manvi:Virat i cant..dee's wedding is just a week away and i have to be with her all the time and will show to her that i am the happiest sister of the World
Virat.I havent seen a girl in my life Who is as pretty and Pure by heart like u and wipes her tears.

after a Week


**JIVIKA'S WEDDING Dayy**

virat standing in the hall waiting for manvi ..After waiting for 15 mins .he gets restless and goes to her room where he sees manvi  wearing a beautifull greeen lehnga & loooking extreamlyy preetyy) she is having some problem with her zipper.Virats Heart beat pounding Faster and faster
Virat comes near manvi and helps manvi.
Manvi Closes her eyes
Virat Walks out of her room and thinks
ye mujay kya hora ha?y is my heart beating for manvii?



jivika n viren sitting on da mandap..pandit ji: ab aap log pheron k liyee kharay hojain..after da pheray everybody congrats dem.
pandit ji:acha ab ma chalta hun.
viraat:rukiye pandit ji aj yahan pe aik nai do shaadian hon gee..(everybody gets shocked) 

bari maa:wot r you saying viraat?konsi shadi kis ki shadi? 
virat: mere or manvii kii!! (manvii in shock & thinks dat how can he marry me when he knows about my illness)
bariii maa: wot r you saying virat r u in your senses?? virat: haan baree maa i love manvi and i'll onlyy marry herrr onlyy herr..
baree maa: par virat..
virat: bus baree maa ma kuch nai sunna chahta ha mainay faisla kar liya ha agar aap chahti hn k apka beta khush rehay den plzz accept itt!!
Manvi.Speachless..She stares at Virat 
Virat:whispers manvi plz marry me otherwise ill tell about ur illness to ur family
Manvi:cries and nods
viren and jeevika Go out for Honeymoon the next day after marriage
A DAY LATER
Manvi standing in their Room close to the Window Staring at the moon
Virat comes.
Manvi:(angry).Why did u marry me .why did u ruined ur life 
Virat: because i am in love with u Got damit and i want ur happiness and ur happiness is in livng with ur Dee throughout ur life
Manvi:(in tears)Hugs virat Passionately and faints in his arms.


Virat Rushes To the Hospital
Virat:Yelling in the Hospital(crying)Doctor Doctor Doctor!!
Doctor Comes and imediatly takes her to operation theatre
Virat imapationtly Waits outside the OT .praying to God plzz God save her



After 6hrs


Doctor comes out

Virat:Wat happened doc. hows manvi now

Doctor:


m sorry Doc Shez in a critical situation and talking her last breaths u can talk to her.
virat enters the OT


plz play this song in the backGround otherwise u wont get the real feel of the Scene


Virat Cring and holds manvi's hand
Manvi:oo my my chape why are u crying ..look i am Going in a better place atleast ab mje 
tmari Shakal tou nai dekni parey Gi...
Virat.i love u my bandariya 
Manvi: plz i have a wish .bolo poori karo Ge???
Virat: Kya Bolo manvi (still crying)
Manvi: plz meri di ka hamesha khyal Rakhna unhe meri kami mat mahsoos hone dena 
virat: nods
Manvi: took her last breath in virat arms and says janam tu nai par ma aglay 7 janamon tak ham  saat hoongee...

NOTE.Manvi could have saved her life if she got herself admitted to the hospital in time as brain tumour in earlier stages is curable and person can live a healthy life But Coz of her sis she Didn,t Do it so


Edited by sarakhan98 - 20 November 2011 at 5:22am

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 8:13am | IP Logged
very nice, i was crying even reading it.  Keep up the good work

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 8:21am | IP Logged
the story is gr8 bt i dnt want manvi to die man change the surgery part and make it like positive u kno 

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 9:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ninaatwal

very nice, i was crying even reading it. Keep up the good work
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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 11:31am | IP Logged
awesome loved it...

awww u have written it soo beautifull..

i could feel the pain..
pain of loosing some1 u love...

wish to read more from u :)

and PM me whenever u write something :) :)

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 11:45am | IP Logged

woahhh. this made me crrryyy! job well don, but i just cant imagine viraat without his bandariya! maayeeennn im crryyiinhhh

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 4:26pm | IP Logged
Awww... this wasso good. But i hope she doesn't die... pleaassseee

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by me.san

awesome loved it...

awww u have written it soo beautifull..

i could feel the pain..
pain of loosing some1 u love...

wish to read more from u :)

and PM me whenever u write something :) :)
thankyouu sooo much for sure if i'll write i'll pm u:))

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