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                      this is the last chapter of this OS...i have tried to be fultu romantic ...don't know how it had come out ...pls excuse my behoodapan Embarrassed Wink

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 The last chapter

                                                 Pratigya stood gazing at K as he winked at her and went away from the hall…… A small breeze caressed her trembling body n she looked around smiling happily ……….she had called chandu asking him about krishna………n chandu had replied that he was still at the restaurant , just closing it n informed her that Krishna bhaiyya was very angry n agitated throughout the day n had gone away a little too early ……….pratigya remembered feeling tense n clutching her hands on the spoon n the phone she was holding  n telling him to arrange for rose petals n candles n had asked him to wait for her at the restaurant ………….she sensed that chandu was confused ………but chandu said Ok n was about to hung up when she blurted out that she will be needing a wide circular bed too, her face flushed with embarrassment…………. there was silence at the other end of the phone for some moments n pratigya listened with thundering heart until she heard a soft shy chuckle by chandu as he said 'yes bhabhi…


                                                  pratigya had turned off the phone in a hurry now red all over n had gone to tell GD where she is going after checking that samar is sleeping soundly ……..GD had asked her the reason n she had stammered some excuse about krishna calling her to the restaurant …then she went to her room to pack bed sheets n also her sari n sleeveless blouse…then she had gone back to the kitchen to pack rotis n kheer she had made earlier …. When she reached the restaurant she found chandu n tunna waiting for her with all the needed things……….she had asked them to help her arrange the hall as she unpacked the dinner n laid down it on the central table……..chandu n tunna were enthusiastic as they helped her by lighting the candles n decorating the hall with rose petals strewn across the floor ……….she had been smiling all the time as she arranged the dinner in plates n bowls n also when she was lighting up the candles……….


                                             when chandu had asked her where to arrange the bed , embarrassed , with tunna giggling shamelessly behind him, pratigya had felt heat rise up her cheeks n with her hands twisting the table cloth rather forcefully , she had stuttered 'terrace…' ……..she could feel chandu's n tunna's eyes popping , although she was looking anywhere but at them……….. 'u just get the bed there…..i ….i will …..make further arrangements…..' she had somehow managed to say ……….when they had done as she instructed , she had asked tunna to go home as Krishna may find his presence suspicious n told chandu to phone krishna informing about the false burglary …………..then she had asked him to give her the spare key of the restaurant , instructed him to lock them in once krishna is inside , all the while pretending to rearrange the candles n tables……….n once chandu was outside making his call n waiting for krishna to arrive , she had gone to the vast terrace which was covered from all four sides but open above , the moon light streaming down , bathing the bed …………. She had decorated the bed with trembling hands , her body shivering in the cold night air, while her heart thundered wildly …………..she had silk n satin sheets n cosy pillows ready n she blushed scarlet giggling uncontrollably  as she thought about her husband's devilish desire n passion for her , once he gets to the bed…………. Then she had came down  n went into his office to get changed n then waited with a small silk ribbon cut from the sheets to tie his eyes  as she wanted to surprise him………

 

                                Pratigya , coming back from her reprieve cast a glance filled with longing at the door n and a though burst into her mind………'how am I going to get him to the terrace?' she wondered , smiling shyly………surely she would die of shyness to tell him right in face about the bed being arranged on the terrace ……..she bit her lower lip, suddenly tense……she contemplated running to the terrace when he is about to kiss her when he comes back……but she was not sure her legs have the ability to move rather run…….'think, pratigya think…' she urged herself  letting  out a long sigh turning to face the plane glass pane , purely for decorative purpose, n she gasped looking at the reflection of her in the mirror ………..

 

                           Meanwhile krishna , a new sprint in his legs , a wicked grin adorning his lips , had gone out of the hall to the main entrance , where the 'today holiday' board lay awaiting him……….he was so happy n was feeling really desirous ………the image of his wife , trying to seduce him was making him go crazy…………..he hated coming here for some secs leaving his babu behind , but this was needed to be done……for he intended to enjoy not only the night but also the dawn too …..he took the board n hung it in front of the front door so that everybody could see it……….sure he is going to loose one day of good income , but he didn't care, he gains much more , he thought , smiling slyly ……….he made sure that the board will be visible to the outside world , n then walked back to the hall…………he paused at the doors to untie his shoes………


                                            Pratigya felt , Goosebumps erupting all over her body again , as she took in her reflection in the glass pane……….her hair looked wind swept , and she remembered how  his hands had ruffled n gripped her hair ………….n her face was flushed , her neck red ………..but what made her gasp was her lips……….her lower lip was swollen with a cute little love bite near its left corner……….she hadn't felt it until she saw it……….now she felt the pleasurable ache in her lips  ……….he had never done that while he ate rabri from her lips …………a shiver ran through her body as she remembered the way his eyes raked her lips when he had danced with her after wards , a smile playing around his lips…..so that's why he was smiling, she thought in anger …….she was thinking what she would say when she gets back home, surely amma n piyasiya will notice it………..she thought wearily about the  hurtful insults amma will throw at her just bec of poor jealousy n hatred………..she felt slightly angry at krishna for putting her in such an awkward position………….he always took great care of leaving no glaring marks of their love making , atleast which no one could notice from one look, unless they really looked for it………now she was furious with herself as she was shamelessly blushing n her hand automatically rose to her lips to caress there ……..

 

                                   Krishna , who was standing at the door, watching her reaction , his eyes hooded in desire , came behind her , his eyes on her reflection in the mirror …………pratigya gasped seeing him, her eyes locked on to his in the mirror n before she could turn around , krishna  hugged her from behind, as usual, his chin resting on her right, exposed shoulder…….pratigya , who had lowered her eyes in shyness could sense his eyes raking her lips n she lowered her hand in embarrassment, feigning anger ………  she turned her face to the opposite side , away from his face n stood with a scowl on her face, her hands trying to free herself from his grip……….. 'ah, its not my fault …..u r so ravishing …..' krishna said , his face gently caressing hers , along her neck n chin n cheek, a naughty glint in his eyes as he smiled wickedly at her reflection……….pratigya , inspite of herself,  sighed , a shy smile spreading across her lips……but she furiously rearranged her face in a final attempt  to depict her displeasure ……..krishna laughed softly in her ear, his nose nudging her earlobe rather roughly,  sending shivers down her spine n she writhed in his arms, giggling ….'u know babu' krishna said sucking gently below her ear as pratigya tried to wriggle free of his grip …….'u look more ravishing when u r angry' krishna murmured in her ear, biting her earlobe along with her ear ring playfully, making pratigya threw her head back , her head digging into his shoulder …….'but I know u liked it, didn't u babu?'  He asked ,still murmuring , his lips teasing her ear ,lifting his hand from her belly to caress the love bite on her lips, making pratigya sigh , arching her body…………'so, how was it?...' krishna asked her , turning her roughly to face him, his eyes scorching her ………..


                                                 pratigya , smiled in shyness , hit him in the chest saying 'datt' n hid her face in his chest……..krishna pulled her face up , his right hand fisted in her hair , his lips inches from hers……….her breathing had become erratic, her lips trembling n pratigya gazed coyly into his eyes……'tell me na yaar' he teased her….'liar….' she called him, her right hand pinching him on his chest……..krishna looked confused 'what? When did I lie?' , his hands tightening on her hair n waist…………pratigya  said ,her tone naughty, her hands playing with the color of his shirt …'husbands who claim that their wife is ravishing won't go away from her like that…' indicating the door with a nod of her head…………krishna chuckled , crushing her to him , making pratigya gasp , as he said, looking straight in her eye……'oh I just went to hang the "today holiday" board outside……..u see , its already latenight ……n I am not going to let go of this wonderful opportunity  n my beautiful wife easily……. For she needs to be punished for the merciless torture she put her husband throughout this day………n I think one night is not enough for that….may be the morning too woul…..' pratigya put her trembling finger on his lips to shut him up………she was  breathing heavily , although smiling , her eyes pools of disbelief n shyness……….'oh….u r the most shameless person in the whole world……' she whispered hoarsely ………krishna kissed her finger on his lips n she withdrew her finger quickly , bowing her head……….'shameless!!!!, oh ….i haven't even started being shameless …..' krishna said as her bent his face down trying to kiss her mouth…….


                                     pratigya , suddenly , overcame with shyness turned her face to the left n krishna , kissed her right cheek instead …pratigya gripped him on shoulder , sighing….he moved his mouth up , near to her right eye , which was closed , slowly proceeding to kiss her eye……..he again moved his mouth down her cheek , this time biting her cheek , ever so lightly n pratigya shuddered visibly ………..krishna stopped kissing her face n asked ,his voice husky with need n desire…'so what say , babu?' ,their foreheads n noses  touching as both breathed heavily …… pratigya her eyes tightly closed managed to ask 'what?'…..'about ur punishment…..isn't a night n a morning fair enough sentence for u….?' krishna asked trying not to kiss her , his lips , caressing her near her  lips, his breath burning her……….pratigya moved her head back , opening her eyes, which was now a sea of longing n desire………..krishna saw naughtiness creeping into her eyes , as she closed the distance between them , her lips moving tantalizingly closer to his , her hands caressing up his arms n shoulder n krishna for a wild , happy moment thought that she was going to kiss him on his lips …………………

 

                                              but pratigya smiled teasingly n moved past his lips , brushing her right cheek along his stubbly right cheek , her hands now caressing the back of his head n whispered in his ear 'guess the answer urself….' , her voice cracking due to desire n shyness,  biting his earlobe , her eyes closed  ……….she slowly withdrew her face from his ear , opening her eyes n holding his gaze, her fingers gripping his hair……….krishna was drugged , , his eyes turning opaque n he moved his hand resting on her back waist up along her spine making pratigya breathe erratically her hands tightening on his hair….. pratigya sensed his devilish mischief as his fingers burned her back nearing the lone knot of her blouse  n she started like a deer infront of the lion , pushed krishna aside , gasping wildly turning to run to the terrace , although her feet seemed made of sand…………..


                                           krishna caught her roughly by her pallu n as he pulled her to him to his embrace her sari came undone from her chest revealing her chest covered by a low neck blouse which flaunted her cleavage to his ravenous eyes……….pratigya with a squeak of acute coyness had reflexively covered her chest with her hands as she revolved to his waiting arms, her pallu dangling from her waist, her body trembling as she bowed her head , resting it in his shoulder, out of breath………. krishna , naked desire dancing in his eyes , ran his right hand along her trembling left upper arm , further along her shoulders , his forefinger tracing the strap of her blouse , moving his hand down to her chest , burning her to her core……..pratigya  hugged herself more tightly ,blocking his hand , snuggling herself further into his chest  n stammered , her words sensuous gasps though her labored breathing , her face resting along his neck 'krishna…….no….not…here…' 'then , where?' krishna asked smiling at her shyness, removing his hand from her color bone  n tracing her belly now, his other hand fisted in her hair……..pratigya bit her lips, too shy to speak…….'hey , tell me babu…where?'….. krishna said hoarsely,  wandering his hand along her belly , slowly caressing down to tickle her lower belly n pratigya writhed , throwing her head back laughing sensuously breathing out his name ………


                                    n krishna wasted no time , capturing her mouth in a passionate kiss…………. she buckled as her wobbling legs gave away n krishna moved his hand swiftly behind her back to lift her up , securing her trembling body in his arms ,still kissing her gently , slowly walking towards the store room where the stairs to the terrace were , her pallu dangling along their wake, her hands still covering her chest which was heaving up n down , her heart thundering …………… once he reached the foot of the stairs he let her breathe , as he reluctantly released her mouth ……..'I guess, I know…' krishna said as he rocked her in his arms , tightening his grip , n pratigya threw her head back , breathing erratically ………krishna willed her to look in his eyes n pratigya slowly opened her eyes n gazed into his eyes , both communicating in the most ancient language of pure n naked passion between a man n woman who r made for each other……..'oh, I lub u , babu' krishna almost growled  as he  started climbing up the stairs , their eyes remaining locked ……….. they entered the elaborately decorated terrace n krishna ripped his eyes off hers to find the laboriously decorated bed , with rose petals  strewn across it , silk n satin sheets covering it n soft pillows, glowing in the dim light of candles………


                                        krishna walked straight to the bed n lowered her, his eyes raking her flushed face, to a sitting position …….he smiled wickedly as pratigya removed her hands from her chest n laid down on her back , sensuously squirming on the bed , her eyes locked to his………….krishna who was on his knees beside her , took a handful of rose petals n blew them over her face n chest  n pratigya clutched at the sheets , her hands fists over them…………krishna  unable to control his need any longer, removed his belt n threw it away , his eyes travelling up n down her trembling body, lingering on her half naked chest for some time n started removing his shirt………. Pratigya , suddenly tensed, slowly turned on her back in shyness, lying face down , her hands fisting the pillows , revealing her sensuous back to him………….krishna threw away his shirt n straddled her , planting feather light kisses all over her back waist as she squirmed in pleasure , a long sigh escaping her lips………….his mouth turned wilder in open mouthed passionate kisses as  he moved up her spine making her writhe  under him …………she gasped out aloud as he untied the single knot of her blouse , his teeth almost nipping her back n pratigya moaned in ecstasy as krishna nibbled at the back of her neck , his teeth loosening her necklace, his hands clutching her hands over the sheets ……krishna breathed her name in her ear as he flipped her to face him , climbed on top of her , pinning her down, n both looked at each other for a moment , their eyes sparkling in love n passion , both breathing heavily, their face inches from each other……pratigya reached out n pulled krishna's face down to her  by his left ear , n kissed him at the side of his lips whispering 'I love u krishna', the words escaping her throat as a sensuous sigh n closed her eyes…….krishna, with a groan of desire dipped his head to her chest , his hands loosening her blouse along her shoulders n pratigya arched her body to him , throwing her head back , her hands flying to his head to grip his hair , his name playing around her lips , their legs entwined ……… the moon shamelessly looked on …………….(the rest u can imagine ) Wink 

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Late Morning ...Embarrassed 


                                                           Pratigya slowly opened her eyes n peered around n was shocked to see that it was going to be noon ………embarrassed , but smiling shyly ,she snuggled more closer to krishna , her head lying on his chest , her one hand along his hairy chest , sighing as a  beautiful n pleasurable ache still lingered in her body making her shiver…… she slowly looked up to gaze at her husband ………krishna , as usual, was sleeping like a child, but his hands securely embracing her……….she looked around to see the rose petals squashed  all around them , some sticking out of his hair………..she smiled broadly n reached out to ran her fingers along his hair  n then along his chest, lying her head again on his chest , her fingers caressing a cute love bite over it………..she remembered when she had given him that mark last night n she giggled coyly saying 'I love u krishna ' n closed her eyes , pulling the sheets more securely over their bodies…………

Embarrassed 

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wow ekdum lallontop update super duper romantic i m totally Blushing Blushing after reading it amazing concept N ur writing skill is 2 goodClapClap N solid  a long update.
 i have no word to say to describe how better ur OS r? am feeling sad that ur os session is end nowCry
pls write new OS with new concepts i m very happy if u r writes new OSClapClap


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Awesomely  romanticBlushing
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Dhnaya u r awesome, fantastic.. a great treat from u.. hot too hot dirty hotBlushing.. just loved the entire OS esp. last partEmbarrassedWink

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