Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

Virika after marriage<3-Part11-Pg22 UPDATED (Page 6)

vishid Goldie

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Posted: 30 November 2011 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Hey thanks for the PM

It was great. Loved this part Big smile

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MariQuestFilms IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 30 November 2011 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
Oh my goshhh Silly Was perfectly done. I SO want this in the show as their date.  I could so see it... Awesome can't wait for more.

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shivu124 Senior Member

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Posted: 30 November 2011 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
please pm me once u write another 
loved it 

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Sarah4eva IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 December 2011 at 7:26pm | IP Logged
Part 7

The morning awakens as the rain stopped outside giving a glistening glow with the rising sun. Viren moves about on the bed and realises Jeevika isn't there. His half open shirt and ruffled hair is evident of last night as well as the realisation that they were still at the cosy private open cottage they romantically stayed. Viren sits up smiling as he remembers last night and Jeevika... He then looks around confused and yawning... --  

Viren: Jeevika? Kahaan ho tum?

Viren gets up.. he walks outside the room and to the private kitchen... and still doesn't see her there. .. As he is about to turn around.. Jeevika bumps into him from behind and falls back...he grabs her. She just came out from the bathroom and her wet hair was still dripping, she was still wearing the white sari from last night..
Viren stared at her longingly... and smiled...- Jeevika shakes her head and clicks her fingers at him.- She falls on the floor accidently. 
Viren in lost mode quickly tries to help her up.  Jeevika looks at Viren confused and hits him on the arm but then walks to the kitchen... 

Jeevika : Uff Viren tum na.. .. main tiyaar horahi thi.

Viren hits his head with his hand ... and then follows her.

Viren: Main bas doond raha tha ke tum kahaan ho..  Aurrr... umm.. kal raat...

Jeevika's face turns from serious to shy as he mentioned 'kal raat'..  She looks at him then quickly pretends to make something.

Viren notices and walks closer teasing her...

Viren: Kal raat... hum tum aur baarish... bahot bahot baarish  (Jeevika looks down and pretends to clean the kitchen.)
Viren comes closer...--------- 
Jeevika: Haan?.. Aur???... She continues to look away till viren grabs her waist and forces her body next to his with them face to face.

Viren: Aur??? he says softly staring at her lips
Jeevika feels her breathing go heavy at the proximity ...
Viren is just about to kiss her till...

Jeevika quickly says  ... Voh dekho Virat hai!!   (Viren jumps suddenly) 
Jeevika starts laughing and runs... Viren runs after her. 

She runs to the room and viren grabs her and they both fall on the bed as he starts tiggling her.. They both laugh... as he holds her. 

*A while later**

Viren and Jeevika are lying together on the bed... Jeevika's head resting on Viren's chest...-
She starts playing with his button.. 

Jeevika: Hum kab ghar jaa rahe hai? She says with her eyes closed.

Viren: Soon... par mein yahaan rehna chahta hoon tumhaare saath..

Jeevika gets up..

Viren.. Mere saare kapre ghar mein hai.. chalo hum ab chalte hai.

She tries to push him up but instead he pushes her to him.
He cups her face near his and puts his nose playfully on hers.. She smiles at his cuteness..

Viren: Itni kya jaldi meri jaan?

Jeevika: Virenji!! Tum naaa!

Viren: Main na??  He starts teasing her...  Jeevika then starts tiggling his arm... and he then moves off the bed laughing.

Viren: Achaaa  Achaaa hum jaa rahe hai! 

Jeevika laughs...  Dekho!! Meri baat tum haroz maano virenji!... she winks...and gets up... Viren smiles then picks Jeevika up in his arms and walks out the door..  She screams and laughs at his antics...  This time they go in the car.  Jeevika looks back at the cottage remembering last night and lovely date.. She looks back at Viren and smiles lovingly as he holds her hand. She rests her head on his shoulder.


They get home and Virat sees them in the same clothes as last night.. He grins at Viren but Viren gives Virat a 'u better run' look.  Jeevika blushes... and smiles.

Virat: Namaste Bhabhi .. and Bhaiya... Tum dono kahaan gaye?..

Viren starts coughing not wanting to answer..

Jeevika looks at viren getting embarrassed but responds back to Virat..

Jeevika: Mera pyaara sa Devar..hum goomne gaye the...ab tum kaam karo na?. She hits virat on the arm and he laughs walking off while viren still gives him a 'don't ask me' look.

Viren and Jeevika both walk in their room... Jeevika looks through the wardrobe trying to find something else to wear.  Viren watches as he changes his shirt..- 

Viren: Ummm.. woh pink wala... !   He smirks..

Jeevika looks back at him and smiles... 

Jeevika: Hmmm... ok... per ab mujhe matching nail polish bhi laana parega.

She gets her nail polish out and remembers how only Manvi would be able to help her put nail varnish on her left hand. She gets teary eyed.. Viren notices and comes towards her... he pulls her face towards him concerned.

Viren: Kya hua?

Jeevika shakes her head...Kuch nahin...    She puts the nail polish back on the wardrobe and sits on the bed.  Viren picks up the nail polish and sits next to her. Patao na Jeevika, main tumhara viren hoon na?...  Jeevika caresses his cheek...  Bas mujhe Manvi ki yaad aarahi hai... voh hamesha mujhe nail polish lagati thi meri left hand per.. ..

Viren holds her left hand and opens the pink nail polish bottle ...
Chalo...  ab main lagata hoon.. 
He starts putting it on her slowly... and Jeevika smiles tearfully at him. staring at his expression trying to concentrate...  all for her.

He accidently gets the nail polish on her last little finger away from her nail and tries to clean it...
Jeevika stops him... she takes the nail polish bottle from his hand and puts it on the table next to him.  She looks at her hand and smiles tearfully... Perfect!...She then puts her forehead on viren's and as her tears of love and appreciation flowed.. she cupped his face... I love you virenji!... Viren smiled with his tears...  Main bhi!!...  He kisses her. And pulls her to him as they again lay on the bed together.

Theres a knock on the door..  KAANA TAYAAR HAI BHAIYA AUR BHABHI!  Virat shouts knowing they are there..

Viren: Lagta hai hum voh cottage dobaara jaana chahiye.. ..

Jeevika laughs and tightens her grip...

Edited by Sarahvirika - 05 December 2011 at 7:45pm

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shahriddhi Groupbie

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Posted: 05 December 2011 at 8:07pm | IP Logged
Awww <3 I love it! N I love virika!! Pm me the next update

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shivu124 Senior Member

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Posted: 05 December 2011 at 8:16pm | IP Logged
loved it pm me next part 

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Sarah4eva IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 December 2011 at 8:19pm | IP Logged
Welcome guys!!! ^^ Please all leave your comments and make sure I am in your buddy list as when new parts are added I will update!! :D

Thanks for reading and commenting.. appreciate it! xx
..Ananya.. Goldie

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Posted: 05 December 2011 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
awwiiiee...SOOO sooo damn cute..eee loved each and every bit of the update :) :) please continue soon!

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