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sweet update 
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Nice FF.. If possible could you please PM me?Smile

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Really nice FF...please update soon and do pm me when you do it next !!
Waiting to read more :)

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Part 6-

Jeevika looks at the time and knew it was nearly time for Viren to be back home from the office early. She quickly tries some sari's... But wasn't satisfied.. She already tried 10 already. - But then she sees one in the cupboard standing out. It was a white shimmery one with a sleeveless choli one which Viren gifted to her. She smiled and tried it on. The white sari complimented her figure and was glimmering in the mirror but she hadn't draped the sari around her shoulder properly just yet as she wanted to comb her hair out.  She applied some kajal on her eyes then looked up notices Viren standing there staring at her intently...  She realises she didn't rap the sari around her and nervously tries to do it but viren intervenes... as his hands touch hers she lets go of the sari shawl... he slowly raps it around her brushing his hands on her bare back. She gasps slightly closing her eyes. He whispers in her ear...- Bilkul pari ho tum...' - She looks up at him and reaches his intense blazing gaze, as he pulls her closer by the waist... she melts.  Jeevika still watching viren as he kisses her neck... reminds him breathlessly..
'Viren... kya... hum dinner date nahin kar rahe ho?'
Viren looks up awake again... and slaps his head. Oh yeah date... Chalo lets go...  He quickly rushes to freshen up.   Jeevika smiles at his forgetful cuteness.
Just as she is about to go downstairs Viren stops her...

Ummm tum idhar raho.. mujhe bahar 2 min mein milna.. ok..?

Jeevika looks confused as Viren runs downstairs...  
She waits for a bit then impatiently walks down and outside... first she doesn't see him and wonders... Until... she heard approaching noise.

Viren arrives with a white horse carriage and driver... Jeevika looks at the carrage in both shock and amusement...  Viren takes his hand out...  Chalo.. yeh sab tumhaare liye... meri pari 
Jeevika's smile widens... she takes his hand and he pulls her up next to him as the carriage starts moving.  
Jeevika admires the white horse and the cold air...- Viren looks at her intently again... he grabs her hands and hold it.. She looks at him and smiles.  Thank you Viren...    She says,

Viren: Arre, yeh toh shuruaat hai... Hamaare dinner remember?
Jeevika raises her eyebrows teasingly... Oohhh... kya plan kiya tumne?

Viren points ahead... Dekho...
Jeevika looks forward and sees a white open cottage... with the glimmering candles inside for the candle light dinner. All ready and prepared just for them.
She looks in shock and then at viren wondering how he did all this... Viren smiles grinning with his pride. 

...

They finish the dinner ... the doors are open with the air flowing.. But all of a sudden the rain gushes outside in the dark.  Jeevika and Viren both look at it smiling. Jeevika sees some of the rain coming inside. Main darwaza band karti hoon...  She walks near the door outside trying to shut it... some of the rain falls on her and Viren stares. Just as she is about to shut it her sari gets stuck on the door. She tries to remove it... but no luck. Viren gets up slowly...  he holds her back... and untangles the sari...--- they look at eachother and get lost in the moment. Viren then kisses Jeevika's shoulder and slowly brushes her hair aside as he kisses her back.. She closes her eyes melting inside. She moves to face him and their noses touch as they stare into eachother eyes. Jeevika then looks down and runs outside shy but smiling. Viren follows her.  As the rain gushes the romance thickens.

Viren and Jeevika get drenched in the rain... -Viren kisses Jeevika and she hugs him...- The song Hum tum song plays in that moment..



--VIREN-- 
Saanson ko saanson mein dhalne do zara 
Dheemi si dhadkan ko badhne do zara 
Lamhon ki guzaarish hai yeh, paas aa jaaye 
Hum hum tum, tum hum tum 

--JEEVIKA-- 
Aankhon mein humko utarne do zara 
Baahon mein humko pighalne do zara 
Lamhon ki guzaarish hai yeh, paas aa jaaye 
Hum hum tum, tum hum tum 

--VIREN-- 
Salvatein kahin, karvatein kahin 
Phael jaaye kaajal bhi tera 

--JEEVIKA-- 
Nazron mein ho guzarta hua 
Khwaabon ka koi qaafila 

--VIREN-- 
Jismon ko roohon ko jalne do zara 
Sharm-o-haya ko machalne do zara 

--JEEVIKA-- 
Haan lamhon ki guzaarish hai yeh, paas aa jaaye 
Hum 

--VIREN-- 
Hum tum, tum 

--JEEVIKA-- 
Hum tum 

--VIREN-- 
Saanson ko saanson mein dhalne do zara 

--JEEVIKA-- 
Chhoo lo badan magar is tarah 
Jaise sureela saaz ho 

--VIREN-- 
Andhere chhupe teri zulf mein 
Kholo ke raat aazaad ho 

--JEEVIKA-- 
Aanchal ko seene se dhalne do zara 
Shabnam ki boondein phisalne do zara 

--VIREN-- 
Lamhon ki guzaarish hai yeh, paas aa jaaye 
Hum 

--JEEVIKA-- 
Hum tum, tum 

--VIREN-- 
Hum tum 
Saanson ko saanson mein dhalne do zara 

--JEEVIKA-- 
Baahon mein humko pighalne do zara 

--VIREN-- 
Lamhon ki guzaarish hai yeh, paas aa jaaye 
Hum 

--JEEVIKA-- 
Hum tum, tum 

--VIREN-- 
Hum tum 

--BOTH-- 
Hum tum 



Viren runs after Jeevika in the rain... as they laugh... He picks her up and they both get lost in eachother again. He then takes her inside and shuts the door as they continue their love... 


Edited by Sarahvirika - 29 November 2011 at 8:46pm

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Posted: 29 November 2011 at 8:58pm | IP Logged
Aww, so cute! Please PM me when you put up part 7. 

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Thank you all for your lovely comments and likes! .. Makes me motivated to continueee thanksss!!
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Thanks again..Hug Part 7 coming soon. xx Enjoy ...part 6.. x


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Hey! Great job! Please PM me when you have the next part up. Thanks! :)

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