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Posted: 17 November 2011 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
Hi guys I initially did this FF scenes for FB group, Sid used a couple of my scenes which I was happy about like the Jeevika drunk in honeymoon..

Part 1 to 4 is on page 1
Part 5 is on page 3
Part 6 is on page 5
Part 7 is on page 7
Part 8 is on page 9
part 9 is on page 13 - HONEYMOON SPECIAL
Part 10 is on page 17 -HONEYMOON SPECIAL
Part 11 is on page 22- HONEYMOON last part 

Part one

viren and Jeevika after marriage- The morning after, Jeevika lays beside viren as the sun brightens the room awakening viren. He opens his eyes and stretches his arm almost oblivious till he looks down beside him overwhelmed by the delicate beauty who is now his life- he slowly pushes a strand of her hair beside her face caressing her skin slightly. He then kisses her cheek not wanting to awaken his sleeping beauty and whispers ''mashallah'. But then suddenly her grey eyes open ever so slightly, viren quickly lays back down pretending to sleep. Jeevika looks around the room taking in the surrounding- she then looks at viren and smiles lovingly as she brushes her fingers through his hair. She notices his cheeky smile enjoying her touch. She then comes closer to him and whispers 'mashallah' before laughing and trying to run. But viren grabs Jeevikas hand and pulls her back down they both laugh and get lost in eachothers eyes. Viren takes this opportunity to kiss her cheek again whist Jeevika blushes. Viren smiles ' tum kahin nahin jaa rahi ho' .



Edited by Sarahvirika - 05 May 2012 at 8:27pm

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Posted: 17 November 2011 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
continue it ...

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Part 2

continuation of part one-
As viren was getting romantic with Jeevika there's a knock on the door. Viren jolts and Jeevika laughs at him. Viren gets up annoyed 'koi humein chain se sone nahin deta'- Jeevika raises her eyebrow teasingly 'tum kahaan soye?, vaise bhi naashta ka time hai main jaa rahi hoon'- she grins and walks to the door but viren runs and blocks her. He does a puppy face 'mat jaooo'-she pinches his cheek amused- he grins- 'virenji tumhe bhook nahin lagi?'- viren shakes his head. She smiles 'tum bilkul ek bacha ho'- he nods- 'haan tumhaara bacha' he puts his head on her forehead as they enjoy the moment. The door is knocked again , viren again jolts. Jeeviks quickly opens the door - virat is there looking suspicious, he coughs ' hi jeevika bhabhi, kya tu aur tumhaara BACHA neeche aarahe ho ya Nahin?' - Viren gets embarrassed and runs after virat. Jeevika looks on laughing at them she makes her way downstairs.

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Part 3

Virat quickly runs to his seat and viren hits him on his head. Swamini and bua smiles at them. Viren is just about sit down till he sees Jeevika go in the kitchen. 'main abhi aaya, haath doker' - virat gives a knowing look -'pyaar main kya kya jhoot bolna parta hai' he sings - everyone laughs but viren again embarrassed gives virat a 'i will get you back' look. He makes his way to the kitchen where Jeevika is busy making parathas. Viren walks in slowly and Jeevika looks up and stops- without having to look back she gives a knowing smile ,'aap yahaan virenji?'- viren stops then goes to the sink trying to act cool washing his hands, 'haan main toh bas haath doraha tha'- he quips. Still running his already clean hand under the water. Jeevika looks at him 'bas haath?' , she looks slightly disappointed..'hmmm ok'. Viren smiles 'nahin bas haath ko nahin', he splashes water on Jeevika. She gets shocked and gasps 'viren!' - she then puts some flour on him, he keeps splashing water and she keeps throwing the flour till they both start laughing at their antics and mess. Jeevika realises her sari and hair is all wet and trys to dry herself with a cloth but viren pulls her towards him. He caresses her wet face and says 'tum itni khoobsurat ho'- she blushes. Bus accidently walks in and they both try to pretend nothing happened. ' hawww tum dono bilkul salman aur aishwariya hum de chuke sanam romance karahe ho'! Jeevika laughs but virens left confused.

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Posted: 17 November 2011 at 2:28pm | IP Logged
Part 1,2 and 3 added - part 4 coming soon- enjoy

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 4:34am | IP Logged
This one is romantic but also situational highlighting how manvis illness and JeeMan may affect virika and viren


Part 4-

Jeevika changes her clothes and drys her hair after the memorable antic with viren. She smiles remembering it as she combs her hair. Viren walks in having just had a shower from the flour all over him- he stares at her and walks towards her hugging her from behind. 'kyun na hum later dinner karle bahaar, bus hum dono?' he says thoughtfully whist looking at her in the mirror. Jeevika smiles and then nods , 'acha' .. Viren gets happy and kisses her shoulder before putting his shirt on. Jeevikas phone starts ringing with manvis name popping up- she looks concerned for a moment. Viren looks on curiously. She answers- 'hello Manu? ..'kya?' ..'tum kahaan ho'?' ok main aarahi hoon jaldi' she shuts the phone stressed. Viren looks worried:'sab teekh toh hai jeevika?' she starts crying - 'nahin virenji , manvi bimaar hai, yeh dabbu tha fone pe, mujhe usse Milna hai abhi!' viren holds jeevika to console her- 'ok fikar mat hum saath jaayenge abhi' - jeevika looks up at him tearfully- 'nahin viren tumko bahot kaam hai aur yeh big case hai- main nahin chahti ke mere vaje se..' viren puts his finger on her delicate lips and wipes her tears. 'arre mere kaam mein kal bhi karsakta, lekin tum mere zindagi to tumhaare liye main Kuching bhi karsakta' - Jeevika slightly smiles through her sadness she picks up his tie and does it for him slowly- 'agar tum nahin hote virenji toh mujhe aisi himat na hoti'- viren kisses her forehead.

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 4:41am | IP Logged
very nicely written..!! :)

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 4:58am | IP Logged
very nice ff
written nicey and described wonderfully
can you please continue it im waiting very eagly for the next part

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