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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 8:42am | IP Logged
Plzzz update na plzzz i luv all ur stories...plzzz update nd congrats 4 new thread..:)

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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Awesome yaaro...well y ws geet running???
Hope Maan nd Geet mil jaaye jaldi...plzzz cont soon nd sry 4 d late reply ws hving my xams so couldnt comment...:(

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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 9:25am | IP Logged
Fab update...continue soon...hope Geet was not running for Adda...

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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
congrats on the new thread...
hope maneet meet each other...
continue soon

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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 11:08pm | IP Logged

                              Part 12

Maan was again in the school…jst for Geet…n what's going own... he was not able to connect all.First the lil talk between ladies they were too happy..But within short time ..why she ran to school..?.. He found Parkash standing far away.So he hided himself….coz what to say him again !!! …Maan was not in state to think.A sudden ambulance siren took him out from his thoughts.

 

 Maan: Ambulance ..? ( he thought)

 

Again Maan got glimpse of Geet.But rushing toward ambulance with a lil crowd of people.n some one on stretcher. Who was on that...?...it was not visible..coz people all around stretcher encircled it .What he thought even he was not aware n ran toward ambulance…till then Ambulance had left that place.n Geet was not there…so it mean she was with that one on stretcher.He was hiding himself from Parkash but he caught Maan from behind

 

Parkash : Saab ji aap yahan…?

 

Maan was shocked…sudden things wer making him mad.

 

Maan: who Geet ..main unko milne ghar gaya tha…per unse mil patta ..unko school ki taraf bhagtay dekha…lagga kush problem hai …warna koi aise to nahi bagta( n he was rite )

 

Parkash : oh saab ji kya karti …hosh rahta hai aise halat main..Bhagawn bhalla kare Adda baby ko jayda chot na laggi ho..( he was much upset)

 

Maan: Adda …?

 

Parkash : Geet Madam ki beti….

 

Maan: Geet ki beti bhi hai (he murmured)

 

Parkash : Saab ji yahi padti hai…adhi chuti main( lunch break)..kelte waqt…sidhiyon(stairs) se gir padi aur railing itni nukili( sharp) thi k sir k piche do teen jagah per jor se laggi andhar challi gayi ( he shivered thinking about that)

 

Maan: kon se hospital main ley gaye…?

 

Parkash : Saab ji yahan to ek hi hasptaal hai…Dr Sharma ka…aap Shankar kaka ki dukaan to jante he hai…wahan thoda duri per hai..aap kisi se bhi puch lena ….agar jaana chate hai..main bhi janna chata tha..per yahan bhi rukna padega

 

Maan: theek hai..main puch lunga ….kisi se 

 

Parkash : Saab ji dua kijiye Adda theek ho jaye…is waqt usko sabki duya ki jaroorat hai

 

Maan: hu( n he  left place in hurry )



Edited by Jass.KN - 19 November 2011 at 11:11pm

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Part 12 continuation 

After 10 minutes he was in hospital….front of causality.He stopped a nurse

 

Maan: Nurse..yahan abhi ek bacchi ko le kar aaye thy …sidhiyon se gir gayi thi.

 

Nurse:woh ICU main hai bahut khon beh gaya hai bechari ka (n she left)

 

What He was doing he was not thinking? But rushed toward ICU….where Geet was sitting as a lifeless creature.. without any emotion on face.Rekha (her colleague n friend) was trying her to react..coz Doctor said she was in deep shock …when she heard that Adda had internal bleeding too

 

Rekha: Geet...hosh main ayo …Adda needs u ( she gav jerks to Geet holding her arms)

 

But no reaction….She again said but no answer.Even her condition was thing to worry at.

 

Nurse: Inka is tarah se chup ho janna inke liye bhi theek nahi…sadma to lagga hai..per is waqt inki beti ko sabe jayada inki jarorat hai.

 

Rekha : Nurse kya karu isko hosh aa jaye…mujhe kush samjh nahi aata.( even she had tears)

 

Nurse: Inke pati kahan hai ?…inko sabse jayada wahi sambhal sakte hain

 

Before Rekha could say any thing Doctor Sharma informed about Adda's critical condition n She needed much advanced treatment ..it mean she had to shift Shimla.

 

Dr.Sharma: Rekha Ji iski bahut jarorat hai warna Adda ka bacchna namumkin hai..

 

Rekha: Per doctor saab Shimla ka rasta to bannd hai…Mujhe khud janna tha Shimla issi wajah se nahi ja payi ..

 

Dr: But we hav to ..let me talk to Dr Kapoor…Shimla k sabse bade neurosurgeon hai shayd koi rasta nikal aae( n he left)

 

Maan over heard every thing n till now was a silent spectator.He went in Dr Sharma's cabin chasing him.

 

Maan: May I come in Dr.

 

Dr Sharma: Yes plz ( he was still holding phone might b gonna make call to Dr Kapur.)

 

Maan: Dr main apse Adda k barre main baat karne aaya hu.

 

Dr Sharma: Ji per aap….aap ki taaruf (  identity ) ..n u know Adda.?

 

Maan knew If he reveled his identiy things gonna b more worse..instead of finding solutin .So he had to make excuses till…Adda was in danger n Geet in shock .

 

Maan: Dr main Dev Singh…actually I had some work in this town..even in same school where Adda is a student..jab main gaya to wahan Adda k sath yeh accident ho chukka tha .As a human being.. I think... if I hav things in mine hands.If I m capable to help... I wanna go for this ( he made excuse again but internally he was broken)

 

Dr Sharma: main samjha nahi.

 

Maan:actually business k silsile main main yahan aaya tha..aur rasta band hone k karn I stuck here….I think she needs emergency assistance…I m sorry I overheard ur conversation…so I wanna help 

 

Dr Sharma: But how ? 

 

Maan: I gonna arrange helicopter…I think she should b in Shimla as soon as possible ( he had made whole strategy what to do next.! 

 

Dr Sharma: If u can do this that will b great…aur yahan helicopter utaarne k liye jagah hai..I mean ground... which we all in this town use for functions ..due to lack of open space in houses…

 

N Maan made call to Mr Tandon..outside Dr's cabin

 

Maan: Mr Tondon apke ek friend tourism agency challe hai..who also arrange helicopters for tourists to visit far places around Shimla.

 

Mr Tandon: oh u need it for urself ..no problem I can arrange ( he thought Maan wanted it for him)

 

Maan: Mr Tandon I hav no time..n I ll pay him as much as he wants even more than that ...but I want it on emergency basis ..reason that is personal one.plz

 

Mr Tandon: main kehta hu usko..woh apse baat kar lega ..giv him every detail.

 

N after five minutes Maan got call from that man Tarun.After getting all information helicopter was there in less than hour .

 

Dr Sharma: U became a savior ..sunna tha…kabhi khabi aisa ho jatta hai ji socha nahi hota….per dekh bhi liya …a stranger becomes seviur ( he put hand on Maan's shoulder )

 

Maan thought whether he was a savior or reason of Geet's sufferings.But he was jst livin for her.So without thinking whats wrong n  rite... it was time to take action

 

Maan: Dr Sharma maine koi ahsaan nahi kiya agar ..us ki jagah meri beti hoti to main uske liye yehi sabh  karta. But I hav a request don't tell her mother any thing ..main yeh nahi chahta k  isko ahsaan samjhe .( he requested)

 

Dr Sharma: ok Mr Singh..as u wish .but if u r stuck here ..come in same helicopter.

 

Maan: No Dr actually I hav arranged other one…us main aap us bacchi ko aaraam se Shimla pehucha dejiye.

 

Maan din'td want to face Geet. But he wanted to b with her.So he couldn't wait for road to b cleared. Hence he arranged other one also for him so that he could follow them in Shimla too .


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Edited by Jass.KN - 19 November 2011 at 11:31pm

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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
awsome part. .

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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
awesome update loved it
when would they meet each other

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