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Hey buddies after three days I m daring to write..but plz those who really wanted me to move...tell me after reading.Coz it always became tough for me to rite if not got any desired response 

                   Part 11

Maan reached school on the way Shanker showed.

 

St Martin's main gate was in front of Maan. He was in dilemma whether he should move or not ….How Geet goingto react. With these mixed feelings.He went in.School was not too big…so no gate keeper there. As he was crossing class rooms. his inner conflict was stopping him lik his feet were stuck to bricks. But he forced them to move. It was study time.In many classes there were Christian nuns taking classes….n in some other teachers…especially female ones .

 

Maan was searching for Geet might b she was in any class But which one ? He was jst thinking when a middle aged person came.He was non other then St Martin's peon Parkash..a Nepali Gorkha...He came to Maan

 

Parkash: Ji saab ji apko kissi se milna hai ?( holding one file in right hand n a stick in left hand he said)

 

Maan: woh ha Geet Madam yahi padhati hai na ? (with hesitation )

 

Parkash : Oh to apko Geet Madam se milna hai .

 

Maan: Ji ?

 

Parkash : Per Saab Ji aapko kya kaam hai Geet Madam se (lik a professional investigator he said)

 

First Maan think..But he knew he should hav any reason to confront Geet. Other wise how this peon first n after other staff gav reaction.So he should hav any excuse.As he was aware there was a function.

 

Maan: woh Madam dresses lene gayi thi na function k liye to main ussi k barre main baat karni hai….Shankar Kaka ne bheja hai .(suddenly he said)

 

Parkash: Oh per Madam ji abhi ghar gayi hai…bacche koi program de rahhe hai..shyad woh hota hai na dram..jisme barri barri bolte hai (thinking about right term he rubbed his stick in hair)

Maan: oh Drama


Parkash: Ha wahi…unhone tayari ki hai puri…sarra kush to wahi kar rahi hai to Principal Madam ne kaha ghar ja kar aaram se tayari karo..yaha unse kaam nahi hoga…(he laughed without any reason)

 

Maan: To aab main  kya karu.( he murmured)

 

Parkash : To aap Madam ko ghar per mil lijiye ..yahi per to hai….

Maan moved toward Geet's place on the way shown by Parkash.But he was doing rite to confront her... as such..straight forward.. in her lif.Might she hav forgotten him…moved ahead in her life…n she had some one more lovin than him…she deserved that . .coz he had been failed to give her what she deserved. Ya He was not at fault.But for Geet he was the biggest victim.who ruined her lif.Might b he was the reason ..Geet's family left Hoshairpur…Now he couldn't ruin her once more...before going away from her …she should b aware ..he never cheated on her…He always was hers..n would remain.

 

He put his feet in final destination..The street going straightway to Geet's house.But before he could b at door.He stopped midway. A middle aged lady knocked at her door.She opened it.Her same beautiful smile ..he watched from far away distance after 12 years.Lik a staute he was looking at her face.But she couldn't find him..coz he was behind a not much grown Gulmohar ..But fully blossomed with sparkling bright orange red flowers…lik a beautiful bride had red color Pallu on her head.That lady looked well known to her.

 

Geet: Arre Shilla Kaki aap.? (lik she was surprised)

 

Shilla : Ha beta…maine Mung Dal ka halwa banaya hai…(givin her box she said)

 

Geet: Oh to yeh baat hai…aur kise k liye hai yeh bhi main janti hu…( she laughed in low tone)

 

Shilla: Tumko batane ki kya zarurat hai..jab patta hai ( lik both were talkin in codes n Maan was not able to break those ones)

 

Geet: woh to hai..per mere liye bhi layi hai..ja is barr bhi khali dibba dekhne ko milega.

 

Shilla: Ha beta…is barr aage se char gunna he hoga…isko fridge main rekh lena kharaab nahi hoga,

 

Geet: Ji Kaki per apko kaise patta challa main ghar per hu 


Shilla: Kyonki main tere Shankar kaka ko khanna denne gayi..socha school pass he hai ..wahi tumko de dungi..per jab takk tumhara peon aa gaya Samaan lene…usne bataya tum ghar per ho..

 

Geet: oh

 

Shilla: Accha hua batta diya warna school ka chakkar u hi lagana padta.( she made pity but relaxed face)

 

Geet: waise Kaki yahi kaddi rehegi..ja ander bhi aayegi.

 

Shilla: Na beta mujhe chalna chahea…mere mayke meri bhteji ki shaddi hai na parso..uski tayari karni hai…chalti hu

 

Geet: Kaki ek cup chaye to p lijiye.(holding her by hand she said)

 

Shilla: Nahi Geet..wapis aa kar ..udhar rahi …sath main shaddi ki bhaji le kar aa-u-gi-

 

She laughed and left.Geet looked at Halwa box..oped it..smelled..n a plesent smile came on her face…n she closed the door

 

Maan: oh She is Shankar's wife..But about whom these both were talking…kiske liye Shilla Kaki …halwa le kar aayi hai..aur Geet kitni kuch thi…lagta hai main kahi piche chot gaya hu…( he thought making own assumption )

 

His eyes gone wet.n he started to move backward on the same way which seemed to him the way to get his lif back…n now same way seemed him death bed.

 

Maan had reached intersection of roads one toward school n one on which  he was.But suddenly he noticed a known one crossed him in hurry.Ya she was Geet rushing toward school way.

 

Maan: Geet abhi to ghar per thi aur abhi kya hua isko

 

N he started to chase her.n he was at school's main door.

 

Maan: kya hua isko….( he thought n move inside )

 

But where was she…why she came here lik wind.

 

Maann: kisko pucho…kya hua..why she is here.


to b continued 


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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 1:54am | IP Logged
Thnx for continuing dear
Nice update
Maan is thinking she is maarried !?
Continue soon

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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 2:08am | IP Logged
Congrates for the new thread and thanks for continuing this FF liked it very much. Hope maan meets geet soon and also comes to know about his daughter.

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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 2:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anupm04

Thnx for continuing dear
Nice update
Maan is thinking she is maarried !?
Continue soon

me daring I hav idea what to b next but up to this part..what I ll get
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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 2:15am | IP Logged
U r our Half world osum part dear. . So maan is thing geet is married. . .no dear.

Y are you saying that? Plz do continew writing. . We always waiting 4 next part of ur every ff. . .

aakash and Kalika

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its quite nice...

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