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divya86
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Hi, Jaz here...ive been looking for a VirMan ss for a long time and finally i came across yours...the first 2/3 paragraphs made me want to read...originally i had planned to simply hit the "like" button but then one line had me chance my mind... Hi Jaz!! Wow, I'm really chuffed that you liked my little fic so much!! Thanks for commenting!
Part 1:
Omg!!! 
the part where you wrote about that one tear of Manvi's hurting Virat more than the heart break he's suffered!! that was bloody amazing!!! 
...the picture you painted about Virat sitting outside of Manvis room was just fabulous!! i could just see it in my head!! 
,...and i have to admit...i loved how he attacked Manvi's family for not paying any attention to her!! haila...awesome!!! 
...typical man in love...denial is alwasy step one!! 
inn ladkoon ka kuch nahin hosakta...
Thank you!!! That's some high praise! If you could 'see' the picture I was trying to paint, then I'm satisfied!! That means I must've done something right for once in my life! Lol @ typical man in love. Yes, denial really seems to be step 1. Hi 5 @ ladkon ka kuch nahin ho sakta...
Part 2:aww...good to see Manvi back and running away from injections 
...i love that she can feel Virat around her even if she cant see him......my mouth literally fell open when Virat began talking about his and Manvi's kid!! yeh toh bohot aage bad gaya!! 
...Viren gave awesome advice but when Virat said the ice cream had melted!! thats too funny!!..."turned into a girl" ...and then she went to sleep!!! what a riot!!
An angry Mannu is not to be trifled with!! And yes Virat has it bad, he just didn't know cos, like you said, he's a typical guy. But once he does realise, there's no stopping him! Glad you enjoyed this part!!
Part 3:
him watching her would have been pervy if he wasnt in love with her...and he was just happy looking at her...watching her sleep...as long as he isnt letting his mind wander...its all good!!!
...but he's a smart one...picking up on the small vocabulary that makes all the difference in the world...too cute!! hes adorable...just too cute......the murderous look in Manvi's eyes!!! oh i want to see that on the show!! if looks could kill!! ...perfect song too!! i can totally see them dancing to this...hopefully sooner rather than later! JAZ
I only included that bit cos I personally think it is very pervy to stare at a sleeping girl! But that was one cliche I couldn't resist Lol, he just might be letting his mind wander... I'm too sharif to write it, that's all!! Yes, it's the small things that make all the difference and Virat is quick on the uptake, so he got it!! I actually wanted to write that the nurse was hitting on Virat making Manvi angry and jealous, but decided to save it for some other time. Can't wait to see that on the show - totally with you on that!! Wouldn't it be awesome to have them dance to that song?!! Fingers crossed for that!
Thank you so much for taking out the time to comment, Jaz, you made my day!!
Edited by divya86 - 23 November 2011 at 11:11am
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