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Thanks for the PM. The last part was totally awesome esp ""You just said 'when I told you I love you', not 'when I told you I loved you'... You still love me", he said, with a devilish grin". That was something that I totally didn't expect but I totally loved it
Please continue writing new OS/FF and include me in your PM list
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Hi, Jaz here...ive been looking for a VirMan ss for a long time and finally i came across yours...the first 2/3 paragraphs made me want to read...originally i had planned to simply hit the "like" button but then one line had me chance my mind...
Omg!!! the part where you wrote about that one tear of Manvi's hurting Virat more than the heart break he's suffered!! that was bloody amazing!!! ...the picture you painted about Virat sitting outside of Manvis room was just fabulous!! i could just see it in my head!! ,...and i have to admit...i loved how he attacked Manvi's family for not paying any attention to her!! haila...awesome!!! ...typical man in love...denial is alwasy step one!! inn ladkoon ka kuch nahin hosakta...