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Thanks for the PM. The last part was totally awesome esp ""You just said 'when I told you I love you', not 'when I told you I loved you'... You still love me", he said, with a devilish grin". That was something that I totally didn't expect but I totally loved it
Please continue writing new OS/FF and include me in your PM list 
me.san
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VirManandJeeVi
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jnawaz
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Hi, Jaz here...ive been looking for a VirMan ss for a long time and finally i came across yours...the first 2/3 paragraphs made me want to read...originally i had planned to simply hit the "like" button but then one line had me chance my mind...
Part 1:
Omg!!! 
the part where you wrote about that one tear of Manvi's hurting Virat more than the heart break he's suffered!! that was bloody amazing!!! ...the picture you painted about Virat sitting outside of Manvis room was just fabulous!! i could just see it in my head!! ,...and i have to admit...i loved how he attacked Manvi's family for not paying any attention to her!! haila...awesome!!! ...typical man in love...denial is alwasy step one!! inn ladkoon ka kuch nahin hosakta...
...i love that she can feel Virat around her even if she cant see him......my mouth literally fell open when Virat began talking about his and Manvi's kid!! yeh toh bohot aage bad gaya!! 
...Viren gave awesome advice but when Virat said the ice cream had melted!! thats too funny!!..."turned into a girl" ...and then she went to sleep!!! what a riot!!
...but he's a smart one...picking up on the small vocabulary that makes all the difference in the world...too cute!! hes adorable...just too cute...
...the murderous look in Manvi's eyes!!! oh i want to see that on the show!! if looks could kill!! ...perfect song too!! i can totally see them dancing to this...hopefully sooner rather than later! 
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