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kajen

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 5:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by crazysky

while reading ur last part every scene of the promo was moving like a movie before my eyes n it was so hot to handle n u know what... i can feel hot in winters...
ur description power is so strong... gal 
love it...
n love u too
i loved every line u wrote ...
hugh...
its too hot here 
kitni garmi badh gyi h...????????
ac chaloo karna padega mujhe...
n last but not the least
...
one last question...after reading ur last part arises...
"am i alive ...
or m surely dead???????"
hey chetna
awww m so so so happy that u loved it
haha it resembled the promo thank god
i was so nervous ask farah damn i never read this part n wrote it in a haste
hahaha n u r very much alive lol
marenge to hum epi dekh kLOLLOLLOLLOL


n thanku again
m so loving writing coz of all u people

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 10:27am | IP Logged
FANTASTIC...ITS JUST AWESOME..CNT GET OVER IT...UPDATE SOON AGN...

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:22am | IP Logged
too good yr,just telling everythng abt the promo.loved it.
anyway i am shibani,hardcore kriyansh fan.
Thanks fr writing such a beautiful storyClap

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 8:55pm | IP Logged

hey aarti sorry commenting late i have read it today  

just one word

ouchBlushing


kajen

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Posted: 21 November 2011 at 4:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kriyansh117

SHIT !!!! Aarti , U shud B IMPRISONED 4 killing me TWICE lolz!!!!!! I ...I...I... MEIN KYA BOLU !!!! Merii  Bolti bandhh karva dii tunee !!!!

This part was OUTTA this WORLD !!!!! I was literally Shivering !!! Every next word i stepped 4ward and proceeded 2 read , I was feeling as if THUNDERBOLTS were hitting me !!!! The ROMANCE , the INTENSITY ,The PASSION , THE THIRST  , EVERYTHING could be felt   !!!!! EVERY LINE MADE AN IMPACT ON ME !!!!  I LOVED IT 2 D CORE !!!!! U R A KILLER !!!
Love u 4 sketching such a BEAUTIFUL OSHug

U R MINDBLOWING !!!!!!


AWWW
mahi thats a supercute comment
imprisonment hey ishwar
m gonna say JAKHO RAAKHE SAAIYA MAAR SAKE NA KOI LOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
thanku so much for liking it this much
aww m blushing like hell
thanku for this commentClapClapClapClap

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kajen

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Posted: 21 November 2011 at 4:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 100littledevils

OMG OMG OMG aarti!!! ahhh soo HAWT!!!! Blushing DAMN THIS IS WHAT I WANTED TO READ!!! DAMN SOOO HAWT!!! thank u thank u thank u for updating it!!! Loved it lyk hell!! Iam gonna read again!!LOL

hahahah i love u aarti tu hi meri asli twin sis hain!!! haha <3 ab agar tune woh ArSha wala ff update kiya toh tere b'day pe vm fix hahahhahah!!! ROFL just kidding... but plzzz update that ff too... damn that is hot..too!!! super duper hot!!! 

ps - kal tu muhje bol rahi thi ki talent nahin hain tuhj mein.. hut mar ja kaha toh jake lol... talent khut khut ke bhara hua hain!!! aur tere mein wriitng ke alwa aur bahut talent... hain . *winks* sirf d3 phankaas jante hain!! hahah <3
WINK WINK WINK WINK
lolzzz
xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
all these for u
now people will surely think m lesboROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
meri twin sis mujhse rishwate mangna band kar ROFLROFLROFL
i want a VM on my b'day
samjh me aa rha hai tujhe ya smjhau ROFLROFLROFL
n thanku for liking it XOXO once againROFLROFL
writing ki taref k liye thanku n baki k liye *BLUSH*vROFL

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Posted: 21 November 2011 at 5:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by twilightmystery

omg!!! tht an amazing n definately a hot part
loved it so so much
it was like magical
i was soo lost
continue soon
n do pm me
ohhh thanku for liking itTongue
so sorry it was thye last aprt
wanted to end it like this onlyBig smile

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Posted: 21 November 2011 at 7:34am | IP Logged
awsum supr lykClapClapThumbs Up

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