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Haye ram ye kya hua: KriYaansh OS :) (Page 9)

AabhiArSha Senior Member

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 10:27am | IP Logged

LoveKriyansh IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:22am | IP Logged
too good yr,just telling everythng abt the promo.loved it.
anyway i am shibani,hardcore kriyansh fan.
Thanks fr writing such a beautiful storyClap
Endurance IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 8:55pm | IP Logged

hey aarti sorry commenting late i have read it today  

just one word


-BebaakBegum- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 November 2011 at 4:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kriyansh117

SHIT !!!! Aarti , U shud B IMPRISONED 4 killing me TWICE lolz!!!!!! I ...I...I... MEIN KYA BOLU !!!! Merii  Bolti bandhh karva dii tunee !!!!

This part was OUTTA this WORLD !!!!! I was literally Shivering !!! Every next word i stepped 4ward and proceeded 2 read , I was feeling as if THUNDERBOLTS were hitting me !!!! The ROMANCE , the INTENSITY ,The PASSION , THE THIRST  , EVERYTHING could be felt   !!!!! EVERY LINE MADE AN IMPACT ON ME !!!!  I LOVED IT 2 D CORE !!!!! U R A KILLER !!!
Love u 4 sketching such a BEAUTIFUL OSHug


mahi thats a supercute comment
imprisonment hey ishwar
thanku so much for liking it this much
aww m blushing like hell
thanku for this commentClapClapClapClap

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-BebaakBegum- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 November 2011 at 4:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 100littledevils

OMG OMG OMG aarti!!! ahhh soo HAWT!!!! Blushing DAMN THIS IS WHAT I WANTED TO READ!!! DAMN SOOO HAWT!!! thank u thank u thank u for updating it!!! Loved it lyk hell!! Iam gonna read again!!LOL

hahahah i love u aarti tu hi meri asli twin sis hain!!! haha <3 ab agar tune woh ArSha wala ff update kiya toh tere b'day pe vm fix hahahhahah!!! ROFL just kidding... but plzzz update that ff too... damn that is hot..too!!! super duper hot!!! 

ps - kal tu muhje bol rahi thi ki talent nahin hain tuhj mein.. hut mar ja kaha toh jake lol... talent khut khut ke bhara hua hain!!! aur tere mein wriitng ke alwa aur bahut talent... hain . *winks* sirf d3 phankaas jante hain!! hahah <3
all these for u
now people will surely think m lesboROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
meri twin sis mujhse rishwate mangna band kar ROFLROFLROFL
i want a VM on my b'day
samjh me aa rha hai tujhe ya smjhau ROFLROFLROFL
n thanku for liking it XOXO once againROFLROFL
writing ki taref k liye thanku n baki k liye *BLUSH*vROFL

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-BebaakBegum- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 November 2011 at 5:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by twilightmystery

omg!!! tht an amazing n definately a hot part
loved it so so much
it was like magical
i was soo lost
continue soon
n do pm me
ohhh thanku for liking itTongue
so sorry it was thye last aprt
wanted to end it like this onlyBig smile
kuhu_Arsha IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 November 2011 at 7:34am | IP Logged
awsum supr lykClapClapThumbs Up
-BebaakBegum- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 November 2011 at 12:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nams_love_d3

u knw i jus screwed my lappy up (p.s lappy wasent working!! i made all kind of fite wid my lappy jus 2 bring bac 2 normal! wich was hard tast but 45% succesfull using anothr log in i jus made it stand for normal for new mins!!) jus to read ur FF nd updt mine!!! gosh!! 3 din se neend nhi arahi hai kal sunday hai yahi FF soch sochke pagal hojaongi!!!!! sooo sure aaj puri raat inki KISS hi yaad rahega muje nthn else!!!! GOSH how can u write soo well!! day by day ur increasing ur fan meter!!! heheeh KAJEN D BEST!!! really loved dis!! its making me desperate to view this scene RITE NOW!!!! which is IMPOSSIBLE !!!!! goosssh katham hogayi meri patience im gone mad to d extereme!!! IT WAS AN AWSU JOB KEEP IT UP!!! Clap

U HAVE KILLED ME A 100 TYMES !!! BY UR FF's STILL KILLING DAILY!!!! wover wants to imprison AARTI im wid u all!!! LOL mei b tho deko kya karegi tab!!! nd im telling u if i dont get the other FF's  updt asap i wud b bttr imprisoned for killing u!!!! huh..!! anywzzz u made d extreme hot promo TO REACH THE INFINITY!!!! gooossshhh zindagi me pehli baar my body ran over elctrfying momnts!!! nd reading this i din even realise i had kept water for boiling wich was evaporated long bac completly!!! THE KRIYAANSH ADDICTION WILL LEAD ME TO HEAVEN!!! tHIS S D HOT FF nd i LOVEED IT TO THE CORE!! i wish u cud continue this!!
ok narmada
trust me when i say u r my one of the best readers i mean it
Shittt gal
i always look forward to ur comments
i got so excited after reading ur comment lol i was hoppingLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
thanku so much for loving my work this much
u encourage me to write n write better also
lol but alas m never satisfied with my own workLOLLOLLOL
n u also wanna imprison me hayye ram phas gayi ye choti si bachiLOL
water boiled n evaporated ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
arre baba dhyaan rakho
pta chala tum yha dil me aag laga rhi ho OS padh k n piche aag lagi ho rela waliROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
arre i'll write bahut saara after my xam

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