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Posted: 16 November 2011 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Thanku all

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Posted: 16 November 2011 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
AGEY??? Wacko

I WANT MOREEE!!! LOL

strting sai pehley tumharey JABAR JABAR kai liye... ROFLROFLROFL

now da real part... Smile

REY FRUSTRATED... HAWWTTT HAWWTT!!! lol.. Blushing frustration main kya kya karey gaa agey .. cant even imagine... GOOSEBUMPS atey hain!! ROFL Blushing

Her big almond eyes shined in its usual manner with her bright childlike smile .. awwweee!! Smile

He couldn't help but fall in love with her over and again seeing her in front of him ... and we all cant help falling in love wid both ov dem again and again!!! Blushing

His deep hazel grey eyes went down to check her out... HAILA!!! *FAINTS* Blushing

*click click*
*tadddam taddaam*
... wid soundeffevts likha hau toune tou!!! MEE LIKEY!!! Embarrassed

And the lift suddenly started shaking and the otherwise candascent lights started blinking and the whole lift came to an halt after giving a whole lot of 5 mintues fear of earthquake ....hehe i was waiting for dis to happen... akhir lift hai jis main hero heroin akele hain..tou band tou hona tha na boss!! ROFLROFL

BTW AARTI!!!!   U ROAK!!! StarAPNE CHANNE KAI JHAD KAI UPAR LADDERS LAGA AUR THORA AUR UPAR CHARH JA!!! .LOL.. ITNE DHANSU PROMO PAR TOU NE YEH ADD KARDIA!! ..Day Dreaming. I TOU LOVE U YRR!!!Heart HugIM FAINTING AGAIN AND AGAIN!! Blushing

okay... 1/4th agey ka cmnt!! lol.. LOL

He could feel her feather body shivering aganist his but for the first time he wasn't concerned about it. His mind and heart were playing some horrendous game which was the sole reason for the adrenaline rush through his body. His strong masculine arms held her by her upper back and her heaving bosom was pressed aganist his masuline chest.....  OMG!! touch touch again again!! *faints faints* again again!!!  Blushing specially da underlined part!!! Blushing

looking  into her oh so inquistive eyes. .. Blushing

Hmm..said kria moving a little back in the dimmed n blinking lights of the big lift space..her eyes fixed on the ground and her one hand tucking already tucked strand of hair..this gesture of her made it more than clear to not only rey but to the entire world that miss junior jhaasi ki raani kria ghai was nervous and shy which appealed rey more than ever...his eyes were roaming all over her body building up the sexual tension in him..he could feel his palms getting sweaty. It was getting difficult for him to keep his hands off her..the testesterone level in his body went up him making him close his eyes to stop thinking about it but all his efforts were going in vain..... OMG!!Blushing kya likhti hai AARTI!!! SHIT!!! da way kriya kai gesture sai u explained wat she feels.Day Dreaming. nd her expressions... Day Dreamingaisa lag raha hai promo parh nai dekh rahi hun!!! Day Dreaming

He moved back to avoid making those sinful thoughts a reality..his back was pressed against the wall of the lift n kria stood a li'l far from him clutching her fingers tightly. ... Blushing becharey ko kitna cntrol karna parega!!!.. lol... ARTTII U R KILLING ME!!!Blushing i can TOTALLY IMAGINE DA WHOLE SCENE... ND FAINT!!! Blushing

looking at her with those desireful eyes..staring on her full lips..glossing like ever and awakening the demon in him... SHIT yr aarti.Blushing..kaise likhti hai tou!!! parh kar.. i go into a complete dreamland!! Day Dreaming

*hayyye rama ye kya hua ye tum aise hume satane lga
Tum itni pyaari ho saamne hum kabu ma kaise rhe...*
... HAYYEEE!!!! Day DreamingBlushing


OKAY... AARTI U R MIND BLOWING!!! StarKYA LIKHA HAI YRR...Clap U REALLY KNW HOW TO BUILD UP A SCENE STEP BY STEP... ND DA BEST THING IZ KAI KOI BHI LINE EXTRA NAI LAGTI...Smile ITS LIKE HAR LINE SAI U GIVE A CLEAR PICTURE OF WATS HAPPENING!!! EACH AND EVERY LINE TELLS SOMETHING ABOUT WAT DEY R FEELING... WAT R THEIR EXPRESSIONS...ND INC DA INTENSITY OV DAT SCENE...ALL COZ OV DA WAY U USE UR WRDS,,, DA WAY U PLAY AROUND WID DEM!!! ClapJUST AMAZING!!! Day DreamingU R AN AMAZING WRITER YR... I LOVE DA WAY U WRITE!!! Hug
LOVE U... Heart



Edited by bakho - 16 November 2011 at 3:30pm

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Posted: 16 November 2011 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
comon plz update fast. want to read more.
can't wait for it.
vise hi promo has made us restless.

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Posted: 16 November 2011 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 16 November 2011 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
YAYAY...!!! miss junior jhansi ki rani nervous ho gayi...!!!!!!!WinkLOL

yay...waiting 4 d next part...update soonn..!!!!!Big smile
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loved it.
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Posted: 16 November 2011 at 8:57pm | IP Logged
AWESOME...GREAT...FAB...GORGEOUS...
PLZZ UPDATE SOON AND PM ME WEN U UPDATE NEXT...PLZZZ

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