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SwaRon OS: I Want You..!! (Page 3)

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Posted: 16 November 2011 at 1:44am | IP Logged
AWSUM work SaumyaClap...totally luvd itEmbarrassed
LUVD d scene btw Rey-SharonEmbarrassed...it was SUPERB hahaha Sharon ka confusionLOL lolz nd d way Rey said 
 "Aarrgghh……I'm gonna kill Swayam! Uski vajah se meri best friend Meri hi baat nahi sun rahi hai! Uski toh me…."
hahaha dat was cuteLOL
and den d AWSUM part Swaron confession awww dat was really AMAZINGEmbarrassedBig smile...hope we soon get to c Sharon melting down lyk disEmbarrassed
SUPERB writing...and thnx for d pmBig smile

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Posted: 16 November 2011 at 2:45am | IP Logged
OMG Saumya!!!
 
That was FAB!!!
 
The way Sharon cried and Swayam kept comforting her like his little princess...and the ending,when the walk out hand in hand...it was BEAUTIFUL!!!!!Loved it~!

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Posted: 16 November 2011 at 3:20am | IP Logged
 hii :) thanx for da pm...Big smile
Btw it was so gud

with the current track...dats goin on d3 whr Sharon leaves Swayam !!Cry
It feels so gud when ...we cum across such OS !!!
it fills us wid positivity !!!
Hope it happens da same way in d3 
Fingers Crossed !! LOL

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Posted: 16 November 2011 at 5:53am | IP Logged
Hug soumya kiss mitti se bani ho yaar!!!! lovvveeeddd it sooo much!! soo beautifully wrritten!!! Clap swaron scenes wer jus awsum!!! nd rey sharon part mast tha!!! Approve nd nd woo last line
"Sharon leaned into him and rested her head on his shoulder. They moved forward and walked out of the rehearsal hall, hand-in-hand, ready to tell the world…who they are and what they want. Each Other!!"

this is soo paassionate!!! Day Dreaming loved it dude!! Heart

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Posted: 16 November 2011 at 7:13am | IP Logged
1st of all thnx 4 d PM nd den i wud like 2 say jst luvd ur os...
it was fab osm nd suprb..!!!!!!

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Posted: 16 November 2011 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
Saumya this was REALLY sweeet ! 

Strating from Swayam savin that teardrop to "My Princess" and "My Sharon" nad that bit where their fingers entertwined perfectly ...

Nothign flashy .. no candle light dinner at some posh place .. no phoolon ki barsaaat a la Yash raaj films .. 


Just  Plain and simple ..  Sharon ... eventually finding the courage to recongnise her own feelings and lettin Swayam know ... how much he meant to her ...

BEAUTIFUL .. Ands I loved every bit of it Embarrassed
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Posted: 16 November 2011 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SwaRon911

Saumya this was REALLY sweeet ! 

Strating from Swayam savin that teardrop to "My Princess" and "My Sharon" nad that bit where their fingers entertwined perfectly ...

Nothign flashy .. no candle light dinner at some posh place .. no phoolon ki barsaaat a la Yash raaj films .. 


Just  Plain and simple ..  Sharon ... eventually finding the courage to recongnise her own feelings and lettin Swayam know ... how much he meant to her ...

BEAUTIFUL .. Ands I loved every bit of it Embarrassed
thank you sooo much rafi di...!!!Embarrassed

i'm really glad u like it...!!! if it wasn't for u i wouldn't have written this in the first place...so..
Thank You...!!!Big smile

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Posted: 16 November 2011 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
nnice...

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