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The dhak dhak and a Thapad..

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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 6:39pm | IP Logged
Just a few lines about what unfolded in yesterday's episode..feel free to comment please.. Thanks..
 
 
 
The cell kept ringing..Her face filled with concern..Her nervousness and helplessness clearly visible..

A quick decision and confirming and concluding nothing wrong with her friend, eased and comforted her..

She mingled and smiled only to be tested again..
Her heart skipped a beat, face pained at the drama unfolding, horrrored to see herself like this..
 
Her heart did a dhak dhak seeming to add injury to the woes she is facing..
Faced with expectation of hubby pronouncing or denouncing her, publically..
 
Slap, the tapad was  melted out, reeling and shocking the instigator..
The sound sweeter than anything else she ever heard..
 
Her faced filled with wonder, a new respect and regard for her Gollu visible..
A trust and faith and belief she never experienced before..
 
 
The dhak dhak lessened, the tapad still ringing ..
The dhak dhak loud and clear, but for someonelse..
 
Her dhak dhak subsided, but his dhak dhak worsened..
Its indicative of  his heart's strong feelings for her..
 
The dhak dhak and a Thapad
Seems good combo  for Raya..

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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 6:43pm | IP Logged
nice post maris
thank you

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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 8:37pm | IP Logged
wow

totally apt

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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 9:21pm | IP Logged
Avi I wont calll this a poem, but just musings presented as ramblings from Priya's POV..

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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 9:24pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by avivakirk

Originally posted by maris08

Avi I wont calll this a poem, but just musings presented as ramblings from Priya's POV..
Maris,
It had all the ingredients of a poem...I wouldn't call it ramblings but  fantastic creativity Clap
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