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                                                         Episode#5
Hi guys well I am posting this and maybe this will be the last post for today I have to study
It's a bit short

Recap: Kripa and Angad both tell their feelings to each other

After the party is over Kripa makes an excuse that she left her purse inside in real she had left it but she planned to meet Angad
She comes running back and sees Angad in the hall
Everyone has gone to sleep she goes straight and hugs him
A: Kripa kal bahar ghoomne chalen
K: nahin Angad kal mera ek important test hai waise tum kal mere ghar aa rahe ho for dinner
A: really wow!!! Theek hai main tumhe phir call kerta hoon she hears her mother's voice "beta purse mila? jaldi karo late ho raha hai"
Angad gives her the purse and kisses her cheeks and Kripa blushes and gives him a kiss on the cheek
Angad feels hot in that area where she had kissed
She then goes
All this is watched by someone who is it? Well that's a secret
In the next week Angad and Kripa have a lot of fun
And soon the day of their departing cames Angad had already bid goodbye to Kripa in her home 'cuz he couldn't hug her in front of everyone Kripa is crying in her heart but she is not showing it

Soon angad leaves India and reaches London he can't think about anyone else but Kripa
Soon his college starts he mails Kripa daily and calls her twice a week

6 MONTHS pass
Kripa is very happy that her life is full of happiness but will this happiness last?

BACK IN LONDON AT ANGAD'S COLLEGE
Everyone is talking about some new gal taking admission in the college He is not interested his mind is on Kripa suddenly a girl in short minis and sleeveless top passes by
Angad is mesmerized by her beauty
She comes up to him and asks……………….
Well that's it for now guys I know its short but last one waz long

There is entry of a new gal in Angad's life Will that make them apart see in the next episode and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz leave comments


Edited by griffinmonster - 04 February 2006 at 3:12am

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                                                      Episode#6
Recap: Angad is in London for 6 months he still loves Kripa
At his college he sees a girl and is mesmerized by her beauty that girl approaches Angad and asks…………

She comes up to Angad and asks "u r also in first year of BCA ad u r the topper of the mid term exams right?"
Angad is totally lost then the girl shakes him
Girls: hello r u there??
A: oh yeah!!! yeah I am the topper
Angad is still looking at that girl
G: hi I am Simone
They both shake hands. Angad is again lost and has a strange feeling he is getting attracted to that girl
A: I am Angad
S: of course I know that
A: how come? (looking puzzled)
S: I am new here so the professor told me to go to u and ask for the notes and stuff
A: oh sure why not!
S: can u give me a tour of this college?
A: why not!!!!!
Angad can't understand whats happening to him he gives Simone a tour of the whole college and waz laughing at his jokes
Suddenly his mobile started ringing
Without seeing the name he answered the call
And guess who it waz????
Well it waz Kripa
K: hi Angad kaise ho who tumhari bahut yaad aa rahi thi to maine call kiya
Angad is going to say something but Simone shouts from back "who is it?!"
K: oh Angad tum abhi bhi college main ho? I am sorry I will call u later and she hangs the phone
Angad comes back to his real life how could he forget Kripa all this time and she didn't even ask who waz that gal who shouted she trusts me so much and I am hanging with this stupid girl who has no self respect
Angad turns to leave saying he had work but suddenly Simone turned him and hugged him and said " thanx a lot for giving me time"
Angad is shocked he just leaves he is feeling guilty
Angad goes and sits down in his room he calls Kripa she says
K: why the hell did u bunk today???????????............................................ ......................
And she goes on with the lecture
Angad is like he won't do it again and stuff they talk for along time Angad comes back to his life (HAS HE?)
where there is only Kripa and there is no place for any 3rd person (IS It?)

that's it for now guys I'll post soon
coming up in next episode: there is a prom night in Angad's college he is the hottest guy there but he is not going to the ball 'cuz Kripa is not there OR WILL HE GO?????????????????


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Edited by griffinmonster - 04 February 2006 at 12:03pm

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