Fan Fictions


Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions


chocochip Groupbie

Joined: 12 October 2005
Posts: 173

Posted: 03 February 2006 at 6:42pm | IP Logged
tht was jus gr8

Pyaari_Shailee IF-Rockerz

Joined: 24 April 2005
Posts: 8644

Posted: 03 February 2006 at 7:06pm | IP Logged
wow its amamzin cant wait till nest episode
*~Isita~* Goldie

Joined: 24 August 2005
Posts: 1833

Posted: 03 February 2006 at 7:26pm | IP Logged
wow man so coooooooooool Clap
do continue Tongue
lucky-moon Goldie

Joined: 05 December 2004
Posts: 2427

Posted: 03 February 2006 at 7:33pm | IP Logged
mindblowing plz continue
griffy.fz IF-Sizzlerz

Friendship Animated Sig. Winner
Joined: 18 January 2006
Posts: 10742

Posted: 04 February 2006 at 1:55am | IP Logged
thanx a lot for yr comments Smile
i am going to post the next episode in 25 mins Wink
so plz wait Embarrassed
Vandu4ever IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 04 November 2005
Posts: 26155

Posted: 04 February 2006 at 2:08am | IP Logged
too good!!!! Clap Clap Clap
love it
plz continue soooooooon
griffy.fz IF-Sizzlerz

Friendship Animated Sig. Winner
Joined: 18 January 2006
Posts: 10742

Posted: 04 February 2006 at 2:43am | IP Logged
                                                          Episode #4
Recap: Angad asks Kripa to have a walk on the beach.

Angad and Kripa are walking on the beach. It looks very romantic (no no they are not holding hands the view is very romantic) Kripa is on the verge of crying and Angad waz trying to figure out how to tell her?
Suddenly Kripa breaks the silence by her sob yeah she was crying Angad heard this and turned to her
A:KripaK.Kripa tum ro kyun rahi ho?
Main ek saal ke bad aa jaunga plzzzzz Kripa plzzz Kripa mat ro(he didnt know why he said that cuz the relations between them were not like that that Kripa would cry on his going)
Suddenly something happened to Kripa She turned and gave a hug to him a very tight hug Angad is shocked and words started coming out of Kripas mouth
Kripa (shaking a bit and still hugging him she is not in her mind she is very depressed)Angad tum mere saath aisa kyun kar rahe ho ?tum mujhe kyun chod ker jaa rahe ho ? tumhe nahi pata main tumse kitna pyaar karti hoon I love u Angad!!!!!!
At these words Kripa comes to her senses and realizes what she had said she leaves Angad there and starts running
Angad is also baffled what Kripa had said but when he sees Kripa running he runs behind with full excitement on his face
A(running) : Kripa ruko plz ruko tumne koi gunaah nahin kiya hai
But Kripa doesnt listens tears are flowing from her eyes she curses herself that she had ruined their friendship
A(still running behind her and he is catching up with her):
Kripa mujhe tumse zarooori baat karni hai plzz Kripa ruko
At that time only Angad gets hold of her hand
Kripa falls down and so does Angad on top of Kripa
They quickly get up
K: maine tumse jo kuch kaha use bhool jao
A: main agar bhol jaaoonga to main zinda nahin reh paunga
Kripa(puzzled) :Angad tum kya keh rahe ho?
Angad moves forward holds her had and says : Kripa tum mujhse pyaar karti ho?(it waz not a Question but a confirmation)
tears are flowing from his eyes ,tears of happiness.
Kripa: Angad tum kyun ro rahe ho?
Angad : pehle tum mere sawal ka jawab do
Kripa(now feeing guilty of making Angad cry but she couldnt tell a lie she saw deep into Angads eyes and automatically she says) Angad haan mai tumse pyaar karti hoon
Angad(very happy): sach main Kripa aur main bhi tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon
Kripa(starts crying):kyyyaa
Angad sees this he says :kripa plz mat ro tumne koi gunah nahin kiya kripa I wanna say u that I LUV U TOO
Kripa just cant believe her ears she is shocked but then the look on his face assured her that those words were the truth
Angad holds Kripas hand and kisses there I really luv u
Kripa looks into his eyes I luv u too and they hug for a long time
A: kripa plzzzz mujhe maaf ker do main soch raha hoon ki main London na jaoon
K: no no u r going Angad u will have to understood?
A: but Kripa I cant leave u
K :u dont have trust on me that I will fall for another guy?
A:no my sweety(both are smiling and their faces are shining)
they both look into each others eyes they again hug and Angad kisses on her cheeks then he moves forward his lips Kripa also moves forward when they are about to kiss kripa moves away and hugs Angad
Angad then asks Kripa what had happened she doesnt answer
Angad let goes off her and sees that Kripa is crying
A: kya hua Kripa ?maine kuch kiya?
K: nahin tumne kuch nahi kia KKK.(after a pause)
Angad yeh sub galat to nahi hai? main abhi bahut young hoon arent we betraying our parents ?
Angad smiles and understands her problems he gives her a very tight hug
A: its not yr lips I want I want yr love and I have already got that
K(now smilingSmile) : I luv u Angad
A(also smilingSmile): I luv u kripa
They both return to the party after some more time

Kripa remembers what Angad had said to her a few minutes before coming
"hum tumse door hain to kya?
Humara dil to aapke paas hai
Aur aapka humare paas hai
To phir hum juda kahan hue ?
Bus do lashe(bodies) juda huo hain
Kripa remembers and starts smiling but a tear of happiness falls
Immediately she gets a call on her cell
V: I luv u Kripa and I don't want u to cry
She recognizes its Angad's voice and looks up he was calling from far end she nods her head and both are lost in their world
They can't talk to each other cuz Angads friends had come and Angad got to talk to them

Thats it for now guys I hope it waz romantic!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Plz leave comments and maybe I'll post the next part soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
Coming up: angad goes to London and what he see there he is very mesmerized(secret)

Edited by griffinmonster - 04 February 2006 at 3:00am
griffy.fz IF-Sizzlerz

Friendship Animated Sig. Winner
Joined: 18 January 2006
Posts: 10742

Posted: 04 February 2006 at 2:46am | IP Logged
i hope this is long Cry for u people

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
"Advika-Unique"(LastPart V)Above18yr plzz

2 3 4 5 6 7 8

Author: bhoomikauttam   Replies: 60   Views: 13442

bhoomikauttam 60 13442 12 June 2010 at 9:55pm by bhoomikauttam
“Dil ki baatein” Short story last part VI

2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9

Author: bhoomikauttam   Replies: 65   Views: 12271

bhoomikauttam 65 12271 13 December 2009 at 4:27am by bhoomikauttam
“ Rishta Tute Naa ” - lastpart IV

2 3 4 5

Author: bhoomikauttam   Replies: 33   Views: 6059

bhoomikauttam 33 6059 21 October 2009 at 1:30am by bhoomikauttam
MayurFF-MayurAfterMarriage[Part 12-LastPart-Pg 23]

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 24 25

Author: A-N-S-H-I-K-A   Replies: 196   Views: 29200

A-N-S-H-I-K-A 196 29200 26 August 2009 at 5:26am by preksha07
Kaisi Deewangi...AK Ended lastpart pg69

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 73 74

Author: insia12   Replies: 590   Views: 67640

insia12 590 67640 10 November 2006 at 2:37am by insia12

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index