FF- Darr - New - 18/11/11 chapter 3 page 6 - Page 4

U have all tracks culminating into one !!!!! So will the new love sustain the pressures of the outside world?

wow that is an awesome update. I expected Rashi to repent but you made Kinjal to repent now. Wish she had revealed the necklace kalakari also. Glad that Gopi realised what Rashi did to her about the letter

Omg wot a turn of events , loved how u brought in all the culprits and cupids of gohems marriage together now let's have some fireworks . This is getting exciting , all the big mouths blaming each other and in the process revealing everything . Can't wait for your next chapter , wonderful update ayesha

Originally posted by: CHIKA784

Awww loved it!,pooor Gopi,awww she's probably broken down!

thank you

Originally posted by: rsk16

great chapter.very nice.great 2 see kinjal repenting

thanks raunika

Originally posted by: faayey

Wow outstanding cant wait for the next part.⭐️

thanks

Originally posted by: ever

Cant wait til the next part

thanks ever

Originally posted by: taniks

Omg wot a turn of events , loved how u brought in all the culprits and cupids of gohems marriage together now let's have some fireworks . This is getting exciting , all the big mouths blaming each other and in the process revealing everything . Can't wait for your next chapter , wonderful update ayesha

thank you taniks
there more to come 😆

Originally posted by: _Precious_

wow that is an awesome update. I expected Rashi to repent but you made Kinjal to repent now. Wish she had revealed the necklace kalakari also. Glad that Gopi realised what Rashi did to her about the letter

haule haule rashi ko bhi repent karna hai is ff main.
thanks though

Originally posted by: navyab

U have all tracks culminating into one !!!!! So will the new love sustain the pressures of the outside world?

thanks navyab

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

Ayesha...i really want it to happen...Thanks for this great FF

thanks monyka
plus congo being motw

Originally posted by: sks21

that was very good ayesha...
finally kinjal changing but she should have told abt the necklace
update soon...

tnks

Originally posted by: smithasrk

Poor gopi. Thank You for the update loved it. can u pm me when u update. i donot want to miss anything😊please

Love

Smitha

thank you smithaa

Originally posted by: NazmaJ

Great second chapter Ayesha!!

 

I love how you brough Anita and Umang in and made Kinjal start to feel bad - still didn't admit about the necklace and letter though!!

 

Poor Gopi has just had the blinkers lifted  - I wonder what she and Ahem are going to do next!!

thank you nazma. i will drag them on these umang anita... this will show aham his love way to gopi, and gopi will get some akal too..

letter and necklace will still come...

its been revealled the letter, and kinjal name has been revealled
just hope she admits it

Originally posted by: ayesha_78

thank you nazma. i will drag them on these umang anita... this will show aham his love way to gopi, and gopi will get some akal too..

letter and necklace will still come...

its been revealled the letter, and kinjal name has been revealled
just hope she admits it

Wow, loved this chapeter! Please hurry with the next one!!!

Originally posted by: sandyuk

Wow, loved this chapeter! Please hurry with the next one!!!

shall do... 😃