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Posted: 15 November 2011 at 4:09am | IP Logged
sad hain but awesome hain!

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Posted: 15 November 2011 at 5:20am | IP Logged
this is wonderful. I really loved kria's confusion.

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Posted: 15 November 2011 at 5:33am | IP Logged
awww! soo sweeet! kriya worried 4 rey!!!! damn cute!
pl continue n pm me nxt part!

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Posted: 15 November 2011 at 5:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jheeel

Dii.!!! wow u changd the whole concept ...AwesumClap   
update soon !!!


ty dear... working on next part !!!! LOL
so will update 2mrw.. ie on wednesday...Big smileTongueWink

watch out for kriyaansh closy moments!!!!! Embarrassed

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Posted: 16 November 2011 at 10:22pm | IP Logged
PART 1:

beautiful part. thanks for the pm

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Posted: 17 November 2011 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Very nice yaar. Well doneClap. Poor Kriya Rey ko bahuth miss kar rahi het

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Posted: 17 November 2011 at 3:57am | IP Logged
guyzz im sorry dint update this yet!!!! im having some probs.. (im really sad at dis moment) soo il update it 2mrw or saturday..!!!!! plzz forgive me for delay!

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Posted: 17 November 2011 at 10:05am | IP Logged
i really dint hav mood due to my problems!!! but KRIYAAANSH omg they hav burnt my mind 2 d core!!! aftr watching such an hot promo again nd again thn in 2dys epi kria's jealousy ahww i cud nt control myself frm posting this!!!!!! ok here is my nxt part..!

PART 2:

She thn was abt move out of d fire exit jus thn she hears one couple talking..


Boy: "u don't knw wat ur feeling abt me!! Tum b muje chahthi ho nd admit it!!" gal: "haan ur rite!! Muje tum bahut acche lagte ho!" boy: "(kneeling down) I LOVE YOU!" gal: "I I LOVE YOU TOO!!!" they move on..


Kria--> yeh kya tha!! Huh!! Kuch nhi chalo..


She goes off nd sees everywer only love nd love so she gets confused Confusedthn sees Sharon..


Sharon was upset irritated full on worried

K: "wo muje aapse kuch.. (she looks up nd says) r u ok???"


Sh: "haan muje kya hua hai??"


K: "nhi tum thodi off lag rhi hoo soo"


Sh: "haan wo (just thn) wait a sec!! mei tumse baat kar kyun rhi hoon???"


K: "nhi agar aap pareshaan hot oh mujse share kar skti ho.."


Sh: "oh tumei lagta hai ki mei apni confusion tumse share karoongi???"


K: "confusion??"


Sh: "jus leave me alone!"


K: "ek min.. ek baat bolo aap ko acche lage ya na lage..! jab b confusion hoti hai tab sirf humara dil ki sunni chahiye coz dil se kabhi galat jawab nhi aati nd usse aapko khushi b milti hai"Smile


Sharon feels good nd thn.. kria was 2 leave..


Sh: "kria! Tum tum kuch keh rhi thi?? I mean kuch pooch rhi thi na"


K: "haan wo wo rey??


Sh: "rey?? Usse kya hua??"


K: "nhi wo aaj clg nhi aya tho.."


Sh: "haan meine b fone kia tha but usne receive nhi ki!!"


K: "oh kk ty"


They move away ..


She could nt resistOuch Kria calls up rey..


Rey is in d car, driving.. sees kria's callShocked.. stops d car at side.. picks up his foneBig smile


Rey: "kria??Shocked Shocked I CANT BELIEVE THIS !!! kria ne muje call?? Huh dude this is great!!"ShockedShocked

About to receive the call stops himself...


Re: "yeh tu kya kar rha hai?? Saari mehnet ka satyanaash karega kya??!! Itni mushkil se aaj pura din usse avoid kia aur ab?? iske liye tuje swayam se b joot bolna pada!! Last moment tu aisa nhi kar sakta!!! Fone receive mat karna!!!"


Kria cuts d call!! She is worried Confused (poor kria LOL)


Kria: "rey ne meri call receive nhi ki!! Kalse baat tak nhi ki! Na koi msg na koi call!! Kya hogaya hai issE!! Yeh kaha hai kisi ko nhi pata! Wow!! Huh!!!"


Kria: "(frm mind- jallliii fir se sochne lag gayi chod yeh sab!!) (thn again-  lekin muje itna farak kyun pad raha!! Hmm mei itna bad feel kyun kar rhi hoon???) universe ji (strts crying..)


Suddenly one gal(gal1) pushes her nd moves front thn tat gal says ... " hai stupid u r in lOVE!!!! C'mon cheer up!!!!"


Kria kept starring at her dumbstruck' she was abt to say jus thn frm behind another gal (gal2) comes running hugs gal1 nd says!!!!- "really!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wooow isliye muje uski haar baat itna effect kar rha tha!! Wooo finally im in love!! Party time chalooo (they move off)!!!


Kria is completely speechless!!! Kria: "yeh kya tha???"


Jus thn workers from the other side are taking few off the broken board pieces (board matlab like banners'..) thn they drop it near the dust bin in one the pieces it was written.. "SIGNS"


[hehehe ab toh samaj jaa meri maa!! koi b ithni acurate signs nhi deta mei de rhi hoon!!! LOL aftr all kria alwz needs spoon feeding!!! Wink]


Kria looks at it!! all signs jus come over infront of her eyes!! She enters the rehersal hall strts thinking'


All signs one aftr the other comes.. 1. DRY RED ROSE'. 2. THE PROPOSAL'.. 3. LOVE IN THE AIR ALL OVER'. 4. THOS E TWO GALS AND THEIR CONVERSATION!!


She suddenly gets up!! (u can imagine d scene like wat happns in tv serials wen some1 realises somthn and camera rolls around them like whole world is REVOLVING!!! )


Kria: "muje rey se pyaar hai??????!!!!!" "universeji ki signs????"


She dint knw wat 2 do' she has a big smile on her face wen she moves few steps further!! She remembers few of their intense scenes!! Thn she comes bac to normal..


Kria: "kya muje rey se pyaar hai!! Muje rey se pyaar hai(slow nd sweet tune).. Muje Rey Se Pyaar Hai!! (hyper tone +1 level)' MUje Rey SE Pyaar HAi!!! (hyper tone +2 level)' MUJE REY REY SE PYAAR HAI!!!! (hyper tone extream limits!!)


Kria: "nhi nhi yeh yaar nhi ho sakta!! Mei aur pyaar!!!?? No no!! shayad shyad mei rey ko pasand karti hoon! haan haan mei rey ko pasand karti hoon!!! Pyaar nahi nhi ho sakta !! (slow tune in convincing voice)"


Kria: "pyaar nahi ho sakta na.. pyaar nhi ho sakta he henaaa!! (she gets worried) pyaar!!?? Nooo rey se !! nhiii (crying)


She sits nd strts thinking..!!


Rey: "(near the sea shore walking' it had jus become quite dark' he was looking at the waves..) kria!! Mein yeh dekna chahtha ki tum muje miss karti ho ya nhi! Lekin sach toh yeh hai ki mein tumei bahut bahut miss kar raha hoon!!! Jaan na chahtha ki tum mujse baat kare bina reh sakti ho ya nhi! But mein kud tumse baat kare bina tumein deke bina nhi reh sakta!! Tum itni sweet kyun ho baatcutter!! Kyu mujepe itna kaaboo kar diya ki muje tumare alava kuch aur nhi soojtha!! GOSH kab tum aur mei hum honge?? Kash mei tumse keh pata that how much im addicted to u..!! "


Rey: "nhi!! Ab aur nhi hota!! I cant!! Muje usse abi dekna hai!!! Lekin iss waqt kaha hogi baat cutter??"


He thinks ' sumthn flashes nd moves towards his car nd strts driving..!


Kria... slowly taking step by step comes infront of d mirror looking herself! Remeberring all the kriyaansh moments ' slowly the rehersal hall light becomes dim..! little dark curves the hall! Slowly spotlight fall on her nd the following song plays..!   


To understand the song sequence' lstn to the following song nd read below as wat she thinks nd rey thinks through out the song!!! Hear the song.. imagine kria dancing (similar to PHIR MOHABBAT SEQ) nd can imagine rey (like sometimes out of d car leaning or sometimes dancing the street)'.

 


Kria- dances gracefully'


Scenes acc to d lyrics she remmbrs-


{ Kriyaansh first hug'

Kria nd rey in d pool ..

Kria giving rose 2 rey'.

Kria slapping him!

Kria was about to fall nd rey holds her (during first epis.. she was abt to skip nd fall bcoz if a ball infront of her)..

Kria feeling jealous of new teacher'} nd dances .. wen TERI DEEWAANI chorus comes' she imagines rey next to her..!


Rey holds her frm behind ' kria gets electrified hugs him tight saying I LOVE YOU REY'.EmbarrassedBlushing!!! Jus thn widin few seconds he is nt thr (coz it z her imagination!!)


Thn she starts remembering their first meet... first dance' their frdship during ksg' kabbaddi match'!!


Thn 1ce again slap scne' nd all those scene wich hurted kria (cateen incident!.. g.s elections!...)


Now REY..


Rey sees a a couple outside the car' imagines it to him and kria..!


Rey's imagination: near the sea shore' rey nd kria hugging tight nd thn a passionate dance.. thn it looks lik kria wants to depart away but rey seduces her!! She thn hugs him tight nd thn nd thn they-KISS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(hayeee I wish aisa ho atleast in dreamzzz seq plzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)


Rey comes back to senses nd drives!!


While kria is still dancing !! nd saying-

NAHI YEH NHI HO SAKTA!!! HOW CAN I ??? PATA NHI REY MERE BAARE MEI KYA SOCH RAHA HOGA??? REY MUJSE PYAAR NO WAYS!! MUJE KISI NA KISI TARAH SE APNE PYAAR KO CHUPANA HOGA!! HAAN YAHI TEEK HAI!! BUT AGAR REY B MUJSE?????


Again she starts dancing .. nd at the end of the song.. wen again TERI DEEWAANI is chorus comes (p.s  at the end teri deewaani chorus stays for long time..)

Tat time she turns turns turns aound thinking abt rey nd her love!! (all flashback scene moves very faster.. nd scenes are DIL SE RE song seq.. couple dance (im sure aftr few days thr s gona b a kriyaansh couple dance).. etc etc)'


Kria turns soo faster that she falls down' she closes her eyes nd says! REY!!!!ShockedHeart


Very next thing she realised is his presence nd also tat he was holding her in his arms!!!!!! Shocked


NEXT UPDATE ON SATURDAY Big smile IN THIS UPDATE NO KRIYAANSH SCENES ARE THERE  AS I PROMISED!!! SOO PLZZ FORIVE AS I HAD SOME MORE PLANS FOR NXT PART! ND YA TO MAKE UP FOR MY PROMISE I BROUGHT THIS DANCE SEQ ND ND ND ND DREAM KISSEmbarrassedBlushingDay Dreaming
HOPE U ALL LIKED THIS Smile


Edited by nams_love_d3 - 17 November 2011 at 10:18am

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