kriyaansh & Swaron luv cnfesion(SS) *ended* - Page 3

Posted: 12 years ago




for the new SS

the concept is interesting. pls do continue...

thanks for the pm
Posted: 12 years ago
nice one do pm me when u update
Posted: 12 years ago
😊 awesome idea...
plzz do continue...!
Posted: 12 years ago
You should continue...its awesome
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey do continue...
Its really nice...
And do PM me next time u update!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted: 12 years ago
hey nice concept
loved it!!
pls updt the 1st part soon
waiting 4 it
see yaaa
Posted: 12 years ago
PART 1:

Rey had done his charm on our poor kria!!πŸ˜† She dint knw wat was going on wid her'

One morning..

Slowly she wakes up.. she looks moves near the table wer her fone was lying! She took it up! Nd was shocked upset nd feeling weird! (Y???😲 wat was wrong??😲)

Rey hadn't left his msg!!😲 he dint even call her last nite!! (heheh πŸ˜† I knw u all thout sumthn else!! πŸ˜›:P ok read further..)

Kria in mind: "huh?? Rey ki ek b msg nhi hai?? Aaj tak aisa nhi hua hai..!! humesha msg karke kuch na kuch toh bolta hai' ya fir atleas good mrng toh wish karta tha aaj aaj kya hua?? Nd kal raat b uski koi call nahi aya !! kyun??! "

She thinks for a while nd thn..

"huh??? Yeh kya kya soch rhi hai??? Rey msg nhi kia toh kya hua haa?? Koi rules hai ki usse har roz tumein msg karna padega ??? pagal kahiki yeh sab sochna band kar aur tayyar hoja der ho rhi hai!!!"

She moves off 2 get ready.. reaches college but still she is confused!πŸ˜• (I knw its silly but aur kria toh bacchii se kam nhi hena!!!πŸ˜ƒ)

Her eyes wer only searching for rey!! Whole collge she had a glance but dint find him!! He askd few dazzlers but result was d same I DON'T KNW!!

Thn she saw swayam nd barat sitting nd having some nice chat!! She observes swayam nd thn.. (ok u can imagine d scene like this in the atrium ' swayam nd barat are sitting in steps .. nil nd Vicky are making fun of each other standing on the corner of steps' down in d atrium right side kria is standing a bit far frm swayam he cant c her.. shorn comes front of him towards the steps..)

Sharon nd simmi comes infront of him

He looks up gives d angry look nd moves off (right side)' Sharon sees this feels bit sad!! (swaron loves hold ur seat bets lol!! I hav somthn spl for swaron lovers tooo soo thr are chances (if time permits) I mite get swaron confession also!! Not actually thout abt it but will c')

Sharon goes upstairs..

While swayam stops infront kria (he gets bac to normal from angry wala exp)'

Sw: "kria?? Kya hua?? Tum aise kyun dek rhi ho.."

Kria: "(she was thinking 'kaash swayam nd Sharon ek saat hote' aftr all kria is d best sab ke baare mei sochthi hai n dab REY ke baare mei b sochne lagi hai) wo wo kuch nhi..!!

Sw: "accha mei class mei ja raha hoon nd listen kal reharsals nhi ho payi soo aaj ek baar sab milke rehersal karle???"

K: "haan haan ofcourzz kal nhi hopaya toh aaj zaroor karenge ok.."

Swayam moves off ' something strikes on kria's head..

K: "swa swayam!! (calls loudly)"

He turns bac.. she moves towards him..

K: "swayam wo wo wo tum tumne.."

Sw: "kya?? Kya hua tumei?? Baat bolne ke liye itna guma kyun rhi ho! Bolo na kya baat hai..!"

K: "rey rey ko deka tu tum tumne k kahi pe (sweet nd Q mark wala exp)"

Sw: "rey ko haann wo (suddenly stops nd thn) kyun?? Tumein kyun jaan na hai??"

K: "wo wo wo (swayam knws but still tryn to tease her) wok ya hena (sees princi movind towars his chamber) princi PRINCI ne k kaha ki wo humein kuch kaam dena chathe hai so so tumei pata hai??"

Swayam abt 2 say but remembers wat rey had said!!

[ Fone conv:  r--> swayam!! Aaj mei clg nhi araha hoon! So' " sw: nhi araha hai?? Par kyun???" r: "wo wo na dad ne suddenly ek meeting fix kardi soo im helpless tho" sw: "tho???" r: "plzz yaar kria ko mat batana !! agar wo pooche tho batao ki tat u dunno ok??" sw laughing..πŸ˜ƒ sw: "accha teek hai chal rahkta hoon!!" r: "ok bye dude tc" ]

Sw: "haan wo wo muje nhi pata!! Tum tum kud fone karke kyun hi poochthi shayd tumei reply kare!!"πŸ˜‰

K: "haan tum fone... (swayam realises d danger nd escapes! smart!!!πŸ˜†).."

Kria again in her mind!! K: "yeh kya kar rhi hai!! Kyun rey ke liye ithna pareshaan ho rhi hai?? Ek din clg nhi aya tho tho pahad nhi toot padega!! Jaake lecture attend kar!! Huh!! She moves off ..

Whole day she couldnot pay attention it was almost evening now!! She walks near fire exit... goes inside remembers all KRIYAANSH moments in fire exit! β˜ΊοΈ

Feels lonely!! Sits thr nd strts thinking!!

Kria--> yeh muje kya ho rha hai??? Subah se rey nhi dika toh mei itni pareshaan kyun ho rahai hoon!! Kyun aaj kal uski haar baat mujpe itna effect karta hai!! Yeh kya ho raha hai (strts worrying)😭😭😭😭😭

Afcouzz musibbat ke waqt ek hi tho hai jisse kria pooch sakti hai!! Obviously  her UNIVERSE JI..

Kria--> Universeji! Aab aap hi batao muje kya ho rha hai!!πŸ˜’ She starts moving to nd fro!! Thn sees a dry red rose (old some1mite hav threw it thr)!! Red rose???? Iska kya matlab hai?? Oh god!!! Itni confussion!!! Huh..!! muje kuch samaj nhi araha hai!!

Her mobile rings! She was sooo happy thinking rey mite have called she picks up it was of Swayam! felt heart broken!! πŸ’”

Sw- "kria kaha ho tum!! Hum sab ne rehersals ki! Tum ayi hi nhi ! kyun?? R u alright?" k-"haan wo mei bas.. im really sorry swayam!!" sw: "accha its ok!! Meine sabki rehersals le li hai soo relax nd ab tum kaha ho??" k-"mei clg mei! Bas thodi der tak akele rehna chahthi thi!!" sw: "ok but bahut der hogayi raaat hone hi waali soo go home!! Ok.." k: "ok byee"

Kria then --> universeji!!! Plzzz is help me!!!😭 Jalli aaj tumne rehersal b miss kardi kya hogaya hai tumei?? Hmm!! (taking deep breath) aapki wajah se yeh sab hua hai!! Ab aapko hi batana padega!! Ki kya baat hai!!!" πŸ˜­

this is all for today stay tuned for next part... coming up wid kriyaansh hot nd sweet nd cute scene!

Edited by nams_love_d3 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!!Kria is really cute...she is missing Rey!!!!!!!!
Nice starting ...Waiting for the next part..(is there a need of writing thisπŸ˜†,obviously I'm very eager to know what is going to happen next)
Edited by --aimy-- - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
OMG wha tan Amazing Part i loved :)
kiria lines aw lovely she thinking abt rey all d Time awww
Poor Kria she thinks Rey call her but thats was Swayam AHHAHA lol
swayam is sweettt yar
very nice Part i Enjoy  to read
each&every lines i loved :) big smile in my face feels bad for Kria :P

but sweet Awesome update Precap OMG Kriyaansh hot ,sweet and cute scenes OMG i cant wait at a;; update soon !
Posted: 12 years ago
acha tha..par mjhe ye smjh ni aya ki rey ne swayam ko btane k lye kyu mana kia..wo to kria ko ultimately pta chal gaya ki wo ni ayega...ho skta h nxt part me cnfusn dur ho jae..waise nyc1 continue

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