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almighty too has heart , it hurts too , and when it happens after effect becomes destructive

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Posted: 14 March 2013 at 9:49am | IP Logged
Sorry


Edited by DeewaniRimi - 04 April 2013 at 3:27pm

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so so Sorry

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sorry?? why?? 4 what??

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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 1:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kadamvari

sorry?? why?? 4 what??

Sorry because i was editing my posts...and I didn't find any suitable word but sorry...
Sorry for everything,anything and nothing...
I know sometime it sounds crazy but really saying sorry is becoming my pleasure time pass nowadays.LOL

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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 2:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DeewaniRimi


I am tired...
Disgusted and disturbed.
From this meaningless and never ending hostility.
This is what I have for all eternity.
I too need to love someone and be loved by someone,
I too need to care for someone and be cared by someone,
I too need to respect and trust someone and be respected and trusted by someone.
But what I get is hatred?
I don't hate and want to hate any more.
And I don't want to be hated any more.
But still this hatred and enmity continue.
But now this is the best time to stop ...
But how??
What could I get from this war ?
And what can I get now and will get in future?
I am in love not only with my beloved but also with my life.
Let live the life.
A new life will come soon...
And may  this  bring the new ray of hope and happiness with full of life.

You are tired??
But this whole thing is started by you.
You know it well...
Venegeance is futile..
Waste of time.
Still you have chosen ...
to avenge.
After knowing the truth...
You are not ready rethink.
You think this is the life...
That is your only goal to achieve.
This hostility, enmity everything.
You chose the path of destruction...
Aware the fact completely...
That Hate is the passionate side of Love.
It only comes when one passionately felt bad for ones Love.
You don't admit that you are in love,
You are love in your love of life.
You ignore your heart's call.
And that was your down fall.
Now you have to pay...
For your negligence...
As Almighty...I can only wish you two.
A happy life.





Edited by DeewaniRimi - 05 April 2013 at 2:27am

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ohh how much m getting my inspiration back through the poem  to continue it..my most beloved story ever Cry

Edited by FairyDreams - 05 April 2013 at 5:00am

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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 9:47am | IP Logged
If you continue this story please let me know...I will surely read this one. on this regard I am giving you my words.

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