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    Vanhi assumed everyone will be upset with her as she didn't seek bada baba's permission before going to the mission..so with a bit tension she reached in her village and she found none asked a question to her..she became quite aback because she never spent a night outside of her village before and she returned after one month that too from dangerous Aheers place but everyone is behaving as if nothing happened..she looked for Shakti but he was not seen..Vanhi knew Shakti will be upset with her and he has every right to be so as she didn't inform him before going..but what could she do?? Shakti strongly opposed her decision earlier and denied to accompany her..of course its only because of he was afraid that aheers could harm Vanhi ..he was not worried for himself at all but his denial didn't leave any other way in front of Vanhi...
Vanhi came to the old pm who was sitting silently under a tree..watching Vanhi his eyes got brightened but he didn't react..thinking him upset with her Vanhi touched his feet with teary eyes .."i am sorry bada baba..i didn't take your permission before going...please scold me or punish me for my disobedience but talk to me...i can bear everything but can't tolerate your silence.."Vanhi's eyes got teary.
   "no grandpa won't talk to you..." Shakti answered instead of the pm..."do you have any idea what was our state of mind when you was just disappeared for one whole month??ask grandpa he hardly had fallen asleep in this whole month...the whole Village spent the days in the prayer for you and now you are asking him to talk to you??"
   "so what could i do?? i asked u to accompany me earlier but u didn't...when you know how important those lessons were for our mission..." Vanhi tried to justify herself
   Shakti was going to say something but old pm stopped him..and touched Vanhi's head
    " i am proud of you daughter "...said pm with teary eyes
both Shakti and Vanhi were shocked...
    " what are you talking grandpa??you are praising her for her irresponsibility??"..Shakti really didn't expect such reaction of grandpa..
   " yes i am praising her and these words can come for you too but you missed the opportunity..Vanhi did exactly what she was taught for these 9 year...instead of talking about her irresponsibility you should think ho responsible are you to make my mission fulfill..shouldn't you accompany her to take the vital lessons for Aheers...today Vanhi proved that she is n the verge of gaining her goal but you are still incomplete..."
   Shakti got hurt with pm's words and he ran away from the place...
pm turned towards Vanhi and hugged her "today i realized that the goal for which i am alive is not so far"...tears rolled down from his eyes..
   "this is the reason of my existence too bada baba..and i will reach my goal..i will"..her eyes got fiery...
   "i have full faith on you daughter"..smiled pm..

Shakti was throwing stones into the pond..he does this whenever he becomes upset ...Vanhi comes to him but he didn't look at her
"Shakti i am sorry .." smiles Vanhi..her heavenly smile can cool down the fire too..Shaki's anger also started melting but still he didn't say anything..Vanhi sits beside him and started throwing stones to pond as well...Vanhi's silence broke Shakti's silence..
"how could you go there all alone??if they would have hurt you then??
"but i was not alone Shakti"..Vanhi assured him
"not alone..means??"..Shakti got shocked again...
"Neel accompanied me ..he took Dhwanivedan and other lessons as well with me"
Vanhi's words created strange feelings in Shakti's mind...a feeling of insecurity and jealousy got created...
"Neel??" .
"so what's strange in that?? " Vanhi got shocked to see Shakti's expression..
"no i meant i didn't know he became such a good good friend to you that...
Vanhi didn't let him complete his words...
"Shakti..Neel is both of our friend.so why are you asking so??"
"Nothing forget it..but i must say the bird you sent was really magical ..only because of Heeraman's message we got rid of tensions"
Shakti changed topic and Vanhi was also diverted from discussion..she stretched her arm and Heeraman flied to her and sat on her arm...Vanhi offered the bird to Shakti...
   "why you are giving it to me??Sadhuma told u to always keep it with you..." asked Shakti
"to tell you that you are the best friend of mine...so i can share everything that belongs to mine no matter how essential or dear its to me..."
Vanhi's words brought smile on Shakti's face .he is now assured none can break their friendship...

       since the queen departed Rudra neither cried nor spoke any word ..he got numbed as stone..silently he finished the funeral of mother and other rituals...during the funeral watching the stony expression of his face and the fiery green eyes none including the king didn't dare to come closer to him or ask him anything..even Rudra didn't let his father take part in mother's funeral..he stood alone until the fire got extinguished..after everyone left he stepped towards the last flame that was still burning..he kept his hand on that flame and took a oath..
"touching my mother's funeral pyre i am taking oath that until i destroy the king and princess Vanhi who made my mother's life hell..neither will i live in piece nor i will let come anyone in my life..this is the beginning of your end"
    ...and he put a mark of ashes on his forehead ..and seek blessings from his mother's soul...

"but my child hatred gives person nothing...love gives everything" .. Rudra turned back and surprisingly found Sadhuma is smiling to see him..
Rudra ouched her feet and said " i know that you know everything..give me blessing that i will be successful to destror my both enemies"
"i am blessing you to succeed to fulfill the mission for which you were sent by Almighty..."
   Rudra didn't understand Sadhuma's all words but he was not in thinking position..so he took her permission and left for the palace...

the king after all kind of effort couldn't make Rudra saying why did he leave the palace and where was he been for one month??..his anger got outraged but he didn't dare to heat Rudra..so he ordered not to give him food..but after 2-3 days of that trial too Rudra didn't say anything..then King's beloved daughter took the situation in own hand and suggested the King to send Rudra to Gurukul so that he can get lesson of obedience and discipline ...Rudra was waiting for this to happen...he couldn't wait to complete his lessons..so he happily agreed to go...

here when pm heard about queen's death he really got sad..because in that Senapati's family his wife was the only one for whom pm had a soft corner..his daughter called her elder sister and pm was the one who suggested her father to get her married to Senapati after her kingdom got defeated in the hand of Senapati..so he had a guilty consciousness that he was responsible for destroying her life by giving her married to Senapati...to see him mourning on the demise of his enemy's wife Vanhi and Shakti were taken aback...then some followers of pm told him that what God does for good only..if the queen was alive then perhaps pm would think twice to give life to revenge plan but now none in that family left for whom he had any concern..the princess is already famous for walking on tyrannical path of her father..she kills women and girl children whom she considers more beautiful than her..her husband has no voice against his wife and father-in-law...he is just good for nothing..their children obviously are going on mother's path...and young prince Rudra is the most stubborn kid of the world..so for them the pm and their men had absolutely no sympathy...so now they can easily fulfill the goal of complete destruction...
        but the news of King's sending prince Rudra in the best Gurukul of Aryavart made the pm thinking about Vanhi and Shakti's education too..he had taught them whatever they knew but to make Vanhi an able ruler..she needs to complete her lesson from Gurukul..but if he sents her any famous Gurukul of Aryavart ..the king can kno that she is alive..so he decided to send her to an ashram which is far away from the kingdom ..in a tapoban.. where Vanhi can complete her lesson without revealing her identity..so he decided to move for few years...

                 before leaving the forest Vanhi and Shakti was waiting in their meeting place in a hope that at least once they will meet Neel before leaving..in this one month since they returned from that Aheer's place he didn't come to meet his friends ...Shakti didn't have hope of his coming..but Vanhi's heart as saying he will surely come today..and her hope came true..Neel was seen coming towards them but he was looking very devastated and pale.
   "Neel are you alright?? why are you looking so sick??"..asked Vanhi...
    "i lost my mother..my whole world has been snatched from me..." Rudra's words pierced Shakti and Vanhi's heart ..both lost their mothers when they was not in the age of understanding the meaning of loss...but still they felt the pain of Rudra...Vanhi kept hand on his shoulder ..Shakti hugged him...
       "i have come to bid adieu to you...i am going to Gurukul for completing study" ..Rudra said breaking the silence..
   "even we are going for the same "..said Shakti...
"but i have hope that i will meet you again..my friends in need Shakti and Shikha will miss you in these years..and hope we will help each other in our mission in future... "..said Neel
     "don't know about mission but we will meet for sure...will miss you Neel.." said Vanhi with teary eyes...
     "this is for you will help you in your mission " Rudra presented a pointed sharp knife to Vanhi ..and Vanhi and Shakti presented some special tribal bow and arrow To Rudra..
      Rudra before leaving hugged Shakti again..and then with teary eyes hugged Vanhi ..
    "i will miss you like hell Shikha"..said Rudra in Vanhi's ears
    "i will wait for you Neel" .replied Vanhi...

then Rudra left the place for Gurukul...Vanhi and Shakti started for their Ashram...to give more fire to their mission...



Edited by FairyDreams - 30 December 2012 at 4:42am

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Ahem..ahem.ahem...
1.Thank you Arudi for good ff you wrote
Thank you Arunitadi for the PM you wrote.
I know I am a worst poet so please excuse me.
2.The entire story line was stupendofantabulous awesomly superb!I read it with one breathe and realized that I am again mesmerized by some certain 2 persons who take me with them where your story became real.I found that each and every scene were passed through on my eyes.
3.Rudra has something that make him different and so is Vanhi.But I like their pet name Neel and Sikha the most.
4.Now I wish to see a sword fight sequence between Rudra and Vanhi(I think they are grown up now) where Vanhi covers herf ace with a black velvet veil,only her eyes are visible and Rudra Speaks with his green eyes "Don't Vanhi...why I have to give up everything??Did I do anything wrong??I trust you,I care for you and I unfortunately love youSo you come to punish me for my that deed??"And Vanhi's blue beautiful eyes becomes for fiery and she tells"No...you are the son of my father's killer. And I want revenge...I love you too but right now you are my enemy and I hope we will meet in the another world and will be together there forever...I am sorry...forgive me."
"Saiyara tu Saiyara../Saiyara main Saiyara sitaron ke jahan mein/Milenge ab yara."

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Rimi i never got such beautiful comment r u thought reader or what?? Tongue

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Rudra and Vanhi are going to complete their lessons to Gurukul.Well I will wait for their return from Gurukul as grown up Rudra and Vanhi or Neel and Shikha. I am fallen in love with Rudra and Vanhi...so as a lover I have a mad request...PLease write and finish this ff as soon as possible otherwise I couldn't sleep anymore.Please...
I can imagine only my MRs as grown up Rudra and Vanhi

Edited by mrmrfrevr - 25 December 2012 at 12:13pm

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Awesome, waiting 4 there return nd thanks 4 pm

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Touching Update !! Do Update The Next Part Soon !!

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thanks rimi , sultana and pratiti 4 commenting

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