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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 6:25am | IP Logged
thanks dear polly for reading

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 7:53am | IP Logged
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Edited by RoseFairy - 12 July 2013 at 9:39pm

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Posted: 25 December 2012 at 3:31am | IP Logged
SmileAhem..ahem.ahem...
1.Thank you Arudi for good ff you wrote
Thank you Arunitadi for the PM you wrote.
I know I am a worst poet so please excuse me.Embarrassed
2.The entire story line was stupendofantabulous awesomly superb!Clap
ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapI read it with one breathe and realized that I am again mesmerized by some certain 2 persons who take me with them where your story became real.I found that each and every scene were passed through on my eyes.
3.Rudra has something that make him different and so is Vanhi.But I like their pet name Neel and Sikha the most.
4.Now I wish to see a sword fight sequence between Rudra and Vanhi(I think they are grown up now) where Vanhi covers herf ace with a black velvet veil,only her eyes are visible and Rudra Speaks with his green eyes "Don't Vanhi...why I have to give up everything??Did I do anything wrong??I trust you,I care for you and I unfortunately love youSo you come to punish me for my that deed??"And Vanhi's blue beautiful eyes becomes for fiery and she tells"No...you are the son of my father's killer. And I want revenge...I love you too but right now you are my enemy and I hope we will meet in the another world and will be together there forever...I am sorry...forgive me."
"Saiyara tu Saiyara../Saiyara main Saiyara sitaron ke jahan mein/Milenge ab yara."

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Posted: 25 December 2012 at 5:03am | IP Logged
Rimi i never got such beautiful comment r u thought reader or what??Tongue

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Posted: 25 December 2012 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Rudra and Vanhi are going to complete their lessons to Gurukul.Well I will wait for their return from Gurukul as grown up Rudra and Vanhi or Neel and Shikha. I am fallen in love with Rudra and Vanhi...so as a lover I have a mad request...PLease write and finish this ff as soon as possible otherwise I couldn't sleep anymore.CryPlease...
I can imagine only my MRs as grown up Rudra and VanhiDay Dreaming


Edited by mrmrfrevr - 25 December 2012 at 12:13pm

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Posted: 25 December 2012 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
Awesome, waiting 4 there return nd thanks 4 pm

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Posted: 25 December 2012 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
Touching Update !! Do Update The Next Part Soon !!

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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 12:22am | IP Logged
thanks rimi , sultana and pratiti 4 commenting

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