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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Lovely update yaar... I loved dat sadhuma nd kids part...

Mujhe toh ye Kisi fairytales jaisa lagta hai...

Do continue soon...
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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 11:44am | IP Logged
luvd d ud..
it's suprb..
Neel & Vanhi learnt all shabdvehan kala..
that's really gr8..
d way thet make fool to aheers is gud..
those 2 parrots r d real heroes of this ud..
bt what is this??
Neel's mom is no more..
that's vry bad yaar..

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 12:11am | IP Logged
Interesting part AruClap

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 8:41am | IP Logged
nice part yaar...rudra n vanhi r so chalu thanks to sadhumaa
poors aheers got fooled by both of them n our rudra got little surprised by vanhi's princely attitude...god what will happen when he got to know that enemy he is wishing to kill is his new fr8 n future gf n then vanhi too
n queen died...poor soul has to suffer the curse of that #%$*& king...now how rudra will react on this,he is going to loose his temper on king well he deserves that
update soon...
luv u... :-)

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 9:17am | IP Logged
you've written it so well! ur stories have always depicted emotions in a beautiful manner. i love with what ease ur able to make ur readers visualize the scenes. keep it up dear!!

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
Loved it dear nd thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
thanks everyone for commenting
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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 1:56am | IP Logged
Well superb update...
Thanks to that sadhuma...
Who gave them hint hw to handle
that aheers nd for those two parrots...
The update some what funny nd nice but the end was so sad...
Felt very sad for rudra...
Hw will he react nw...
Update soon
luv u

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