Rudra Aur Vanhi (two flames of fire) (Page 28)

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 10:36pm | IP Logged

wow going togethr to learn war stratgies n dat too to destroy each other...
superb...
loving dis very much...

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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 9:17pm | IP Logged

hmm...war strategy!!..destruction!!...

interesting part aru!!

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Nice update... Queens health decreases day by day nd cause of all her worries towards rudra...felt bad for her...hw can a wife live with monster like husband...
Oho...both went together to learn same vidya that too destroy to each other..gr8
i m waiting the day when they both knw abt their true identity...
Continue soon...
Luv u

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 8:40pm | IP Logged

finally read all the updates that i missed Big smile

awesome updates Aru!!
so they know each other with pseudo names n became good friends. Smile

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 8:51pm | IP Logged

thanks to all for reading and commenting...i am trying to update soon

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Posted: 30 August 2012 at 1:04am | IP Logged

beautiful update!
so their frndship is growing as they din't know abt their real identity
feeling very sad abt rudra's mother!!
she couldn't do anything coz of her cruel husband
she couldn't save mahamantri's daughter n nor could change view of citizen towards her!! and her bad luck continue with her daughter being same like her father & rudra too not knowing truth!! taking his father correct! hope she can tell truth to him!
so rudra & vanhi going to learn dhwanivedan vidya!!
it reminded me DV epi's of rt learning tht sort of skill!!
they want to learn it to defeat eachother!!
but may be both will fall for eachother in their journey!!

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The Aheers live in the deepest part on the forest even Sunlight fears to reach there , they are most dangerous and ferocious of all other tribes and keep themselves secret from the civilized people and kill the people with poisonous arrows who dares to come closer, unlike the Veels with whom old pm and the his supporters live..Aheers are most dangerous groups of tribal..they are also man eaters and offers human blood to the god of forest..in every fool moonlit light they offer a kid for the god..and many terrible rumors can be heard about them..
"Shikha as soon as we would keep foot on that area Aheers would attack us..so how would we protect ourselves..have you thought about this??"
Rudra's question made Vanhi worried too..
"you are right Neel we had to take protection before reaching there...let's consult Sadhuma..she also lives in the forest..let's go to her first .."..Vanhi responded
" Sadhuma..means that saint woman who has some supernatural powers??" ..Rudra remembered his meeting with that saint woman
"yes Neel..but how did you know her??"..Vanhi sounded surprised ..
"why?? do you think only you know everything about the forest?? ..Rudra mocked..
" this whole universe is a mistry ..what a human can know in his whole life?? a lifetime is not enough to know everything about anything of this universe..."
Rudra and Vanhi were so busy in conversing with each other that they didn't notice saint woman in front of them...so both got astonished to see her..
"sadhuma!!!!"..
"yes my children...was waiting for you only" ..smiles the saint woman mysteriously ...
"then you must know why did we come here?..plz guide us then..." both the kids prayed to her...
"Aheers are not only notorious but superstitious as well..you have to use this weakness of them in your favor" said Sadhuma calmly...
"but how???" Rudra confusingly asked..
"and what kind of superstition??" ..Vanhi becme curious...
"come closer my child..i am telling you what to do"..ordered Sadhuma..both the kids came closer to her and she told something in their ears which brought a smile on both the kid's face..
"so you understood what i told??"
"yes Sadhuma..we will do whatever you said..." nodded the kids..
"then drink this medicine..its antidotes of poison..and it will work for one whole day so that their poisonous weapon won't harm you..and within that time you have to convince the Aheers to teach you their secret skills..."
the kids took the medicine what the saint woman gave to them...then she whistled and two parrots flew to her and sat on her to shoulders..Rudra and Vanhi surprisingly noticed one of the parrot is blue in colour other one is red...
Sadhuma gave the red parrot to Rudra
"this is lalmohan parrot ..they are very good in bringing news...keep it with you always.."
and then she gave the blue parrot to Vanhi..
"this is called Hiraman parrot...they are very good messenger..don't disobey their suggestion.."
both the kids took the birds...
"these birds can interact with every living creature so if they are with you no wild species can harm you.."..
"thank you Sadhuma...we will keep in mind your every suggestion...said both Rudra and Vanhi..
"Almighty will protect you my children...now start for your mission and keep faith on almighty..you will be successful "
both the kids touched Sadhuma's feet and took her blessings and started for their destination again...

                   the silver light of full-moon was flooding the jungle when Rudra and Vanhi reached to the place of Aheers..the beats of drums reached to their ears..but before they could step forward it seemed thousands of arrows come from darkest part of forests and blocked their way..and before they could move they were surrounded by ferocious looking Aheers...who tied them with tight ropes and brought them to their king who was sitting on a high stone...in front of him there was a horrible looking idol watching who even the bravest person wil shiver in fear..in front of that idol the ground is wet with red blood...the Aheers who brought Rudra and Vanhi to their king said something in their language..which Rudra couldn't understood but Vanhi could as she was grown up with tribal...
     "they are thanking god to send us here so that now they could behead us and offer our blood to the God of forest"..said Vanhi
   "so are you afraid??"..asked Rudra...
"certainly not..because i can't die so soon i have many works left...what about you??"
" same here..i have to destroy my enemies before i die..so we can't let these Aheers to behead us"..smiled Rudra..
the Aheers couldn't understand what they talked but got angry..the king came in front of them and said in their language..
"we don't know who you are ..but our God had sent you for us to offer your fresh blood to our God of forest...every year in this month's full moon night we offer a kid's head..but tonight we didn't find any suitable kid so we were afraid of God's curse..but God has listened to us and send both of you..now be ready to die..."..
the king and other Aheers shouted in their language to ask blessings from God..an then the king took his falchion to behead them and then only Vanhi shouted
"stop...whatever you are doing making your God angry...he will certainly curse you.."
the king was surprised to see the small girl's courage ..none dares to talk to him in such a high voice...
" you are warning me??"..the king burst into laughter...
" no we are saying the truth...your God doesn't want any innocent child's blood..God is angry with you..so we came here to stop you..if you won't stop killing child like this God will punish your whole society.."...
hearing Vanhi's words some Aheer soldiers became so angry that they were about to attack her but the king stopped..he never heard such words before that too from such a small girl..that girl and boy seemed not that ordinary to him...
" can you prove whatever you said?? "
asked the Aheer king curiously...
"of course...but you have to promise that after today you won't kill any child or leave eating humans..."..told Vanhi in a firm voice...
"admit it..but if you failed..then not only we kill you...but we offer kid's blood every month now onwards.."
such cruel words shocked both Rudra and Vanhi but they kept themselves calm..
" ok i accept " ..said Vanhi...
" so what are you waiting for??prove your words.."..the king seemed to be impatient...
" let the right time come..till then we will make our prayer to God.."..Vanhi smiled mysteriously
            both Rudra and Vanhi then sat on their knees and closed their eyes for prayer .as their hands were tied they couldn't fold their hands...all the Aheers men and women surrounded them with curiosity...what magic would these kids show...after few moments..both the Hiraman and Lalmohan whistled ..and immediately Rudra and Vanhi stood up...and looked at the moon and started shouting...
"oh God show you are angry..these Aheers are committing sin by killing child..they don't deserve moonlight..let them stay in darkness..curse them..show your anger to them."
    and only then the Aheers noticed the moon started disappearing...in few moments the whole forest was cover into darkness..the kids and women started crying..the wild animals started roaring..all the Aheer men started shivering..everyone considered it as sign of the God's anger and started to be prepared for God's punishment..they heard whenever the sun or moon gets disappeared that only indicates about God's worst punishment..
     all the Aheers including the king lied on the ground with folding hand in front of Rudra and Vanhi...
" please forgive us..we couldn't recognize you..you are God's messenger ..please save us from the God's anger..we promise not to kill any kid again..please ask God to forgive us "..cried the king...and all the Aheers..
Rudra and Vanhi smiled watching each other...
" so you promise in the name of God "
" yes we promise..we would never kill any kid , never eat any human again..please save us from destruction"..
"ok, oh almighty they are repenting..please forgive them..take out the darkness from them."
and then gradually the moon again appeared..and after a few moment again everywhere started flooding in moonlight..
a sound of relaxation was heard all around the tribe...the king noticed both the kid's hands are not tied anymore..he considered they surely have supernatural powers...he himself carried them to his own throne and everyone started worshiping them

                the original incident was that night was of full lunar-eclipse ..which happened once in a century..and which the tribes considered about the sign of god's anger which will destroy them.the saint woman was well aware about this..so taught Rudra and Vanhi to take opportunity of this superstition of the Aheers..Lalmohan and Heeraman were aware about the timing of eclipse so they whistled ..and untying hands in that darkness was as easy as swallowing water for Rudra and Vanhi...but the tribes considered them as the God's messenger...
                " so how can we serve you oh messenger..." asked the king..
     " will you do whatever we want??? " asked Vanhi back...
       " please order us..we can give our life if you say once..." answered the king...
     " no need to give life..give us your secret skills..the dhwanivedan ...teach us your each and every strategy..God will be happy with you " ...Vanhi ordered as a princess...Rudra was quite surprised to see her princely attitude..
    " as you wish oh mighty children .."..Aheer king happily agreed to teach them Dhwanivedan and other skills..
             for the next 1 month they spent with the Aheers in learning all types of war skills including dhwanibhedan..living with them Rudra also learn their language..and they learnt that these aheers are not bad man ..rather they are innocent like kids in front of some so called civilized people..they attacked on outsiders out of fear only...and when they love someone they can make spent every drops of their and their family's blood for their beloved and respected one..Rudra realized he hadn't come here for only the war skills but to meet another side of life..to learn how much tolerant a warrior has to be..because in every moment these peoples are fighting for their existence...though Vanhi was aware about the tribe's life style but living with Aheers were much harder than living with a bit civilized Veels..thus the both of them crossed the biggest hurdle to become perfect warrior..
                    after all the skills they acquired Rudra and Vanhi asked the king for his permission to leave..though none of the Aheers were willing to leave them they didn't dare to force the kids whom they considered as God's messengers...the Aheer King took a promise from them that whenever they will be in any trouble they must remember him..and Rudra and Vanhi agreed...to their surprise they noticed tear in those aheers eyes who are regarded most cruel creatures of mankind...

   " good bye Neel, everyone is waiting for me..will meet you again.."
" good bye Shikha."...
                                 Vanhi already sent her message of being with Aheers to the pm and Shakti through Hiraman...so though they became worried and angry but they couldn't come here as they didn't know the exact position and also had full faith on Vanhi..o though Shakti wanted to come and bring Vanhi back the pm stopped him...he knew Vanhi will succeed to acquire the knowledge which later will help her to fulfill her revenge...so pm sent his good wishes and blessings through the Hiraman to Vanhi...so Vanhi bid a good bye to Rudra and left for her village.. but Rudra waited her Lalmohan to come ..whom he sent to the palace..Lalmohan came and said that his mother's health is deteriorating and she wants to meet Rudra...without wasting a moment Rudra rides his horse and ran for the palace...

              after reaching the palace Rudra didn't looked at anyone even didn't bother to answer his father ..he only ran faster than air to the queen's room...and reaching their found his mother sleeping on bed..she was looking ..so pale and weak..as if she even has no power to breathe...
     Rudra with chocked voice called "mother"
queen opened her eyes with much effort...watching Rudra all right a sense of relaxation filled her heart..she raised hand with all effort to touch Rudra once...and then everything ended.as if she was waiting to touch her son for last time..after years of suffering from a cursed life the poor soul departed for the land of eternal peace...


Edited by FairyDreams - 25 December 2012 at 4:42am

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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 5:24am | IP Logged

thanks for updating after long time Big smile

waiting for RS too Day Dreaming

Edited by shruja - 27 October 2012 at 5:24am

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