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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 11:08am | IP Logged
A very nice ud dear..
So Mahamantri's daughter is dead..
well whatever that king do with her..
he'll definately pay for that..
at 1 side Vanhi & Neel r frnds..
and at other side they hate each-other..
hmmm..
& they r totally unknown wid it that..
"Shabdbhedi" kala which they r going to learn..
they r learning it to kill each-other..
let's see what happens?
bt for now I m enjoying their frndship..
& I think Neel shud giv sum time to his mother..
& his mother shud tell him abt Mahamantri's daughter..
I luvd this ud..
plz giv d nxt 1 soon..

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 5:36am | IP Logged
Wow !!!! Lovely Update First Of All !! The Best In This Update Was How U Finished It !!!! Really Loved That Part !!!

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Awesome part aruThumbs Up...Waiting for next part

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 5:26am | IP Logged
wow it was mazing di!!!!!!!
ur discriptn was superb!!
i h8 dis king even more!!! hes a monster!!
how can one b SOO 
poor queen has 2 bear all dis!!!
Rudra wil b diffrnt..hel b niice...
Neel-Sakhi r frnds ...but Rudra-Vanhi????
both r going 2 learn lear d dhwani vidya!! yay!!
ab dosti aur stng ho jayegi...
both r learng it 2ghtr 2 try n defeat each othr...
im worried 4 d queen...
w8ng 4 d next one...

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 10:29am | IP Logged
thanks to all of you for your beautiful and lovely comments

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
wow going togethr to learn war stratgies n dat too to destroy each other...
superb...
loving dis very much...

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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
hmm...war strategy!!..destruction!!...

interesting part aru!!

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