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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 5:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by minimuffin86

that was sooo awww and the imagery was stupendous because i could literally see it in my minds eye like a a movie!!
 
Aww thanks so much, its nice to know that what im writing is coming across so well, i sometimes worry about that!
 
Thanks for readingHug
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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 5:34am | IP Logged
so please update soon ya... :) :) can't wait!! :( 

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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 5:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nikita99

Aahsma tum ajeeb ho Wink. It was just too good. love the way you described their emotional state. In part 2 the way you described their closeness omg I almost stop breathing for few seconds and then the way she looked back before entering her house was also a nice touch. Night surely going to be difficult for both of them. Wish we get to see something like that in IPKKND. ClapClap
 
LOLZZ loved the whisperWink aur ajeeb toh main hoon hi as u know...too late to do anythin bout that nowLOL
 
Thanks and remember i was worried while i was writing? Well it was just before that part u got breathless on lolz, i kept thinking i was writing it wrong!! I guess it worked itself out in the end thoEmbarrassed
 
Hmm who knows, we might get to see something like it, could easily happen cos La's always trying to get her to parties...Wink 

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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 6:55am | IP Logged
Omg go girl... Awesome... Truly awesome
Please write more more
Your know u my best writer ever:)
Thanks jaan, continue soon. Love ya:)

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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
Awesome OS..brilliant scene description, it was as if i was actually watching it......I totally loved it Smile esp. the Part 2, dat was truly magical Clap...really hope Khushi actually wears colors like black on the show...she wd definitely look breath-taking Embarrassed...especially for ASR  Wink  ...i hope something like this does happen in the show too Day Dreaming...Plz continue it even more and do PM me again Smile

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Posted: 16 November 2011 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
You really brought out their difference in understanding of the emotions running through them so perfectly. Since I'm reading all your stories at a go,its easier for me to recognize the difference in their perspective and handling of situations. Brilliant.!

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Posted: 17 November 2011 at 4:48pm | IP Logged
Another smashing piece of writing Asma!!
I really loved it.
I really liked the way you wrote of Arnav and Khushi's feelings when they saw each other.
Fab work!!
Thanks for the PM.
Smile

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Posted: 17 November 2011 at 4:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by FebruaryFlower

Another smashing piece of writing Asma!!
I really loved it.
I really liked the way you wrote of Arnav and Khushi's feelings when they saw each other.
Fab work!!
Thanks for the PM.
Smile
 
Aww thank u sooo much - for this and all the comments!!!Embarrassed And mo worries on the PM, i'll let u know if and when i write any more.
 
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