VirMan OS&SS : Note - pg.70 - Page 45 | Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

--Mystical--

@--Mystical--

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome!! 👏

D separation being caused due manvi's insecurity n virat's fear..making them doubt one another's feelings..plausible..n u depicted it so well..

Virat's desperation 2 see manvi atleast once n manvi feeling stupid after badi beeji trying 2 put some sense in her head was also very cute..i feel badi beeji can sure play a cupid in virman love story..heck i want her 2..coz i love manvi-badi beeji bond!!

Neway coming back 2 d os..Loved it..especially d end...

"I am home" so true...home is whr heart is..both of them were lost without each other..finally found home in each other's arm...

Gr8 job n thanx for d pm..do pm me again venevr u update!!

Forgot 2 add..d song u chose suits d os perfectly..like virat singing it 2 manvi!!👍🏼

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Nikhita

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Posted: 12 years ago

That piece of writing was so sweet and heart-warming! It really clutched at my heart, and I could actually feel the amount of love that they have for one another.

Thank you for such a lovely piece! 😊

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Nikhita

@Nikhi.

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

That piece of writing was so heart-warming and sweet; it really clutched at my heart, and I could actually feel the amount of love they have for one another.

Thank you for such a lovely piece of writing! 😊

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Gunia

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Posted: 12 years ago

awww... that was amazing! the emotions were so beautiful!!! awesome awesome work... and a bit different from your other stuff!!!

super thanks for the PM and looking forward to reading more from you!

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love_never_dies

@love_never_dies

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Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful ashly,,, cute confession...

PS: its one of my favorite song...

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ashred12

@ashred12

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushnav

Yaar, aapko humare TV industry se bulaava ab tak nahi aaya? *Mia checks the brains of all producers*. Aise superb writer ko ab tak kisi serial mein kaise nahi dekha yaar?! Thank God for IF! Warna such a beautiful story miss ho jaata na humse? *HUGZ*

awww...so sweet of u dear...🤗
thanx a lot...😃

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ashred12

@ashred12

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: niha12345
sooo beautiful...
luved it a lottt...

BB finally makes manvi realise her luv for virat..

luved it..

please continue soon...

please pm me wen u write next,,..

thanks for the pm and the bautiful update

thanx dear...😃
BB is so smart in d show...remember getting gf for dabbu ? uff...kya tez dimaag hai... 😊

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ashred12

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IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonika1988
Simply awesome yaar
I mean it was so wonderful . It was a perfect update for me .
And trust me this update was really cute .
100 on 10 from my side
No no no nooo
I think u deserve more than that

thanx a lot dear...😃
to be frank, i wasnt sure i wud finish it...

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ashred12

@ashred12

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hs7071
Aawwbeautiful girl u really wrote a beautiful os so sweet and aaahhh BB was amazing she made our maanu i mean virat's maanvi realise her love for him to good thanx for the pm and do keep on pm-ing me if u write more...

thanx a lot...😃
after manvi n dabbu, BB is my fav char in d show...😊

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ashred12

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: missingremix
Awesome!!👏
D separation being caused due manvi's insecurity n virat's fear..making them doubt one another's feelings..plausible..n u depicted it so well..
Virat'sdesperation 2 see manvi atleast once n manvi feeling stupid afterbadi beeji trying 2 put some sense in her head was also very cute..i feel badi beeji can sure play a cupid in virman love story..heck i want her 2..coz i love manvi-badi beeji bond!!
Neway coming back 2 d os..Loved it..especially d end...
"I am home" so true...home is whr heart is..both of them were lost without each other..finally found home in each other's arm...
Gr8 job n thanx for d pm..do pm me again venevr u update!!

Forgot 2 add..d song u chose suits d os perfectly..like virat singing it 2 manvi!!👍🏼

thanx a lot dear...🤗
i'm glad u noticed d "home" part...n d song...it was d inspiration to write d whole os...😉

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