VirMan OS&SS : Note - pg.70 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Suchi-NivReniac

Oh woww!!!! that was awesome Ash!!

I could sooo imaaagine them both doing this.

Ohhh Hay I wish you could have added

Viraat saw maanvi in the changed dress and she looked very pretty or realized that in the car after things had calmed down.

SIGH SIGH SIGH

what a wonderful starttt of the day by reading such awesome OS muahhhzzz XOXO

thanx a lot dear 🤗
i was trying to keep their current char intact..dats y i didnt go there...😊

Originally posted by: NivRenDeewani

🤗yeyeee my Ashuma wrote it!!!

and by the way...we didnt brainwash u😆not our fault that u agree to everything we ask *evil laughter* *hugsss* luv u.

OMG "" What did you do to the door ? Did you kill the door with your talk ? "🤣🤣
🤣cant stop laughing

<font size="2">AHAHHAAHAHHAAHAHAH the whole nok jhok between VirMan was just sooo good. so funny,ohh i so canimaginethem do this.</font>

OMG both locked in😳that scene was supurb...i luvd how manvi pushed him back and they got locked in hehehe and" Agar dhakka nahi dete toh main iss wall pe wallpaper ban jaate. Tum itne force se jo mujhpe gira ! "🤣🤣

" Tum aur tumhare yeh bag mujhe snail ki yaad dilati hai."🤣🤣🤣🤣

OMG ROFL, my stomach hurts from laughing

ohhh everyy dilogue, every interaction, EVRYTHING was perfect ashuma. Ohh i so so sooo wish somehow we get a similar scene in the future with VirMan.

I cant thankyou enough for doing this for me and radhi. ur a fantastic writer my darling ashuma. THE BEST.

luv u too 🤗
glad u liked those lines...just came to my mind as i wrote it...my fav is d wallppr line...😃

Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Its awsome...👏
❤️Loved it...🤗
And Thanks for the PM

thanx a lot...😃

Originally posted by: SnehapatelKMH

OHHH wowww..datzz awesome..had fun reading it😃..& Thanxx4 da PM..😊

thanx a lot...😃

Originally posted by: _Priyanka_

the best part is that i could totally imagine the way the two would mouth the dialogues writte:)

really nice!!

thanx a lot...😃

saw this on fb now..,. awesome!!!

Originally posted by: harshabashpam

saw this on fb now..,. awesome!!!

thanx a lot...😃

hIII SHOOVAA heheh I do want to write something on them but I want to see more of their reaction before I write something . FOr some reason I feel so content with their act on the screen its like anything I add to it woul dnot do justice.  Edited by Suchi-NivReniac - 12 years ago

Awesome...VirMan are so adorable😳.Loved it to the core and thanks for the pm🤗

..sorry double post..😛😳 Edited by missingremix - 12 years ago