D3-A HAUNTED LOVE STORY-THREAD 1 COMPLETED !!!

Posted: 12 years ago

D3-A HAUNTED LOVE STORY


Hey guys'dis is my 1st  FF'.hope u all wil like it'.!!!!

It has been written by me nd my bst frnd bhavika(bhavikaD3)

So here it goes:-

 

Neha, rey, nilesh, vishakha, bharat nd rene belong to the DAZZLINGS

 

Vicky, Kria, Sharon, Simi, Swayaym nd Amar r WEAKLINGS

 

Neha is a spoilt galwith attitude. Rey is hr bst frnd.Neha nd vishakha r also vry gud frnds.( Neha is nt at all filmy)

 

Rey has a Casanova image in d college bt 4m inside he is CHABILAL.Has a crush on kria nd always tries 2 avoid fights between d 2 grups

 

Nilesh is d rapper of d grup.Rene is his GF.

 

Rene is Ms.Idiot'!!!!!

 

Bharat's father owns a car showroom. Cool dude of d college

 

Vicky is a sincere filmy boy wid a boy nxt door image. He nd kria r brother sisters.He is vry possessive abt Kria.Has a crush on neha

 

Kria as v all no is Ms.baatcutter'.!!!!! a pretty nd gorgeous gal.Loves hr brother a lot.Likes 2 talk

 

Sharon is although a weakling but a gal wid vry gud personality.  Smart. Possesive 4 hr team, cant hear a wrd against dem

 

Simi is a smart gal.Amar is her boyfrnd

 

Swayam is cute sweet smart nd intelligent.

Planning to propose Sharon

 

 Amar- the totla boy'Simi is his galfrnd

 

 

Weaklings nd dazzlings used 2 hav fights bt now all of dem r vry gud frnds. They r planning 2 go on a vacation.They somehow land in a haunted house.So my whole story is abt deir visit 2 d haunted house

 

 

CHAPTER-1

6 months earlier

 

Neha 'the diva enters wid vishakha nd rene following hr.She is luking hot.Vicky is looking at hr (luk luk hawa hawa ) Den suddenly Nilesh enters

 

Nilesh-  Give me d beat guys-

 

Dekho dekho aa rha hai ek weakling gawar

Naam hai uska Vicky chamar

Samajhta hai vo apne ap ko ShahRukhKhan

Par asal mein vo lagta hai like villan of Lagaan (sory, aur koi rhyme nai mil rha tha)

Hai uska crush in Neha the diva

Krta hai vo buy uske lie kapre 4m biba

Neha nai deti hai usko bhao

Bcoz vo realy vry pakao

So dear Vicky u pls go 2 hell

Or v wil definitely throw u in a well'!!!!

                                                ( rap by me(ash), bhavika nd tejasvini(r frnd))

 

Kria- oye! Apki himmat kaise hui mere brood( means brother) ke bare mein aisa kehane ki

 

Nilesh- So wat do u expct ! hum kya use Hritik Roshan bulae??

 

Rey- jst cut d crab guys! Band kro ye ladai jhagra

 

Neha- yeah guys'.vaise bhi in losere se baat krne mein mujhe koi interest nai hai'.chlo lets go!!!

 

SO guys dat ws all, their present situation will b shown in d nxt chaptere

 

Pls hit the like button nd comment if u likd d FF nd snd me a frnd request if u wantd 2 b added 2 d PM list

 

Initiative by ash nd bhavika


PART 2 - PG 5

PART 3 - PG 9

PART 4 - PG 14

PART 5 # 1 - PG 21

PART 5 # 2 - PG 30

PART 5 # 3 - PG 33

PART 6 PROMO - PG 37

PART 6 - PG 38

PART 7 PROMO - PG 45

PART 7 - PG 50

PART 8 - PG 59

PART 9 - PG 64

PART 10 - PG 72

PART 11 - PG 84

PART 12 - PG 99

 LINK TO THE NEW THREAD https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56146869�

 

 

 

Edited by swaron502 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys! I love this! :) Thanks for the pm!

LOL I LOVE the rap, it was SOO Nilesh! Good job guys! =D And I can totally imagine the characters saying these lines. LOL

HAHAHA. Neha is the diva? Not filmy at all? That's hilarious! =P Can't wait for more. LOL. Vicky = filmy. YESSS. I love you guys for that xD

I like your story, keep pming me, and continue soon!:)

Sneha
Posted: 12 years ago
wow really zara hatke...
pm me plz wen u update next
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by -Aicha-


Hey guys! I love this! :) Thanks for the pm!

LOL I LOVE the rap, it was SOO Nilesh! Good job guys! =D And I can totally imagine the characters saying these lines. LOL

HAHAHA. Neha is the diva? Not filmy at all? That's hilarious! =P Can't wait for more. LOL. Vicky = filmy. YESSS. I love you guys for that xD

I like your story, keep pming me, and continue soon!:)

Sneha

thnk u sooo much...!!!!!!!!!!
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by crazysky


wow really zara hatke...
pm me plz wen u update next

thnxxx
Posted: 12 years ago
WOW...this is good...!!! i like the idea very much...!!!

and the rap was totally coolll...and i also love how u have changed the characters...!!!

please do continue...and PM me when u do..!!!!

-Saumya
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by dildostiidancee


WOW...this is good...!!! i like the idea very much...!!!

and the rap was totally coolll...and i also love how u have changed the characters...!!!

please do continue...and PM me when u do..!!!!

-Saumya

yeah yeah! dfinitely i wil PM u...mst probably nxt chap wud b posted by bhavika
Posted: 12 years ago
wooow awsm awsum awsum awsuma wsum awsum awsum awsum awsum awsum awsum!!!


loveeed it!! vicky -kria's bro!! ðŸ˜† loved tat!!!!! 
Posted: 12 years ago
hii its nice plz continue
Posted: 12 years ago
hey it was awesome...PM me...nd continue soon... 

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