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KriYaansh OS.- Teri meri prem kahani PART 2 PAGE 5 (Page 2)

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Posted: 11 November 2011 at 5:28am | IP Logged
pm wen u continue but plz dont create maya as in bodyguard movie b/w kriyansh

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Thank you so much for the support and for liking it guys. It means A LOT to me as this is my first ever OS. I will continue very soon, well as soon as i can. It's gunna be short and sweet. Thanks again =)
 
@crazysky: No maya. DW =)
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Posted: 11 November 2011 at 6:58am | IP Logged
OMG OMG OMGBig smile !!!!! Rey Kria"s Bodyguard Day Dreaming, N she fAlling in love wid himHeart , Thts sooo AWESOMeHug!!!! I am relly awaiting 2 see their Noke Jhoke LOL, Fights  N LOVE Embarrassed, haayyeee Merii Shonnaa , Dil jEET LIYA TUNE MERAHeart !!! Ab Zyaada suspense matt rakhiyo humse !!!! Nahii tou pakka marr joungi !!!!! Love U Shonaa Hug


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dude just one word...continue it plzzz
do not forget to PM me when u update

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nice idea.. i also loved bodyguard
it will be different n interesting
image krya as rich girl n rey as bodyguard
u should continue
see yaaa

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Continue YUKTI !!!!!

 
 
Plz Continue
 
Of-course continue
 
Obviously Continue
 
HEHE!! If u forget to Pm me ...Then tera ...hmm...So..PM me...YAY!!

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HELLO HELLO! Okay i'm here with PART 1 of KriYaansh OS Named Teri meri prem kahni.
I would like to inform you all the ME and MAHI (
kriyansh117) 
WILL BE WRITING THIS OS TOGETHER. :D
Enjoy!

 

SUNDAY Morning: Kria wakes and gets ready. She is in a good mood today as she dreamt about her new life starting tomorrow. Kitnee sare sapne the Kria ke paas. On top of the world Kria heads down stairs to have breakfeast. BUT when she reaches the kitchen along the way she see's this hatakata MAN standing there.

 

Kria: MUMMYYY!! I Think there is a robber in the house!!

 

Kria's Mum rushes out to see what happend.

Kria's Mum: Kya Hua beta?

Kria: MA! Aap ko kya yeh brick wall nahi dikhi dera?? Refering to the Man standing there.

 

Kria's Mum: Areey beta asa...

 

Just then Kria's dad walks in.  What's all this Hungama about?!?!

Kria: Papa (She pulls her dad to the side) Who is that??

Kria's Dad: That's your BODY GUARD!

Kria: KYA!!

Kria's Dad: Hain. Kaal see he will go everywhere you will.

Kria is fuming inside. This is so embarrassing she is thinking.

Reyaansh (Body guard): Hi My name is Rey, Your new bodyguard. I will protect you from all harm. Puts his hand out to shake Kria's

Kria: Firstly mujhe pata hai ki tum mere body guard ho. Papa ne bata diya. Bar bar repeat karne ki koi jaru rat nahin! Secondly mere life me aab sabse bare harm TUM HO! (Snubs Rey)

Rey smiles at himself and thinks wow kya laddki hai. Chaalo Rey kaam pe lag ja.

 

Rey"s mom - Beta tum Baitho mein tumhare Liye khana lati hoon .Tab tak Kria tum Rey ko Ghar Dikhao

 

Kria - MOM!!!! Yeh mera bodyguard hai , Woh mera PATI nii hai ke mein usse apna ghar dikhau !!

 

(Kria"s Mom Gives her a stern JHAANSI KII RAANI WALA LOOK to which she agrees)

(Kria and rey both go to the garden )

 

Kria -( Makes a pale face n says ) Yeh humara garden hai , yaha trees aur flowers grow hote hai ...

 

Rey - Haan , aur yeh tumhara FACE hai jaha see LAVA erupt hota hai

Kria - What !!!! Aeee mister , Mein TUMHARI BOSS hoon , Zara Respect se Baat karo !!

 

Rey - TUM meri BOSS nahii ho , I M ur Bodyguard , N i Have a NAME , Itz Rey

 

Kria -( points her finger toward him ) REY nahii , Tumhara naam Tou ULLU HONA CHAHIYE , Pata nahi bhagwanjee ne kahga fasa diya !!!!

 

Rey - ( Twist her hands) Aur tumhara naam BAAT CUTTER , GODD u r SUCH A BAAT CUTTER !!!!!!Jitni cute lagti ho utni cute baatein nahi kar sakti tum ???

 

Kria Was about to interrupt but she heard her mom  calling

 

Kria"s mom - Kria beta , Rey ko idhar le aao

(They both go inside)

 

Kria"s mom - Beta lo khana kha lo , tum subhe se bhukhe hoge naa

 

Kria - Nahi nahi , kaise bhukha hoga , subhe se logon ke Brainz jo kha raha hai (kria mumbled)

 

Rey -(smiled at kria"s comment) Nahi aunty , mujhe derr ho Rahi hai , Mein kal se duty join karta hoon, byyeee Aunty , byee kria

 

Kria"s mom - BYE beta

 

Kria - Byee , My Foot!!! (Kria thinks to herself..Mummy ko impress kar kar chala gaya! Idiot!)

 

Rey: Okay Mr Ghai mai chaltha hu. Kaal 8:00 pe i'll be here.

Kria's Dad: Okay Reyaansh Bye.

 

LATER THAT NIGHT IN KRIA'S BEDROOM

 

Dear Diary Tomorrow is my first day at college. FINALLY, the day is here. The amount of effort I had to put in to convince daddy to let me go. He says that he doesn't trust anyone in the real world. I don't know why he calls it the 'real world'. Is he saying that I live in the fake world? GOSH sometimes I don't understand my dad. I mean I love him a lot but we share different views about the world.

Anyways he says that I'm allowed to go to college on one condition. IF I HAVE A BODY GUARD WITH ME! THAT'S right! I was so frustrated after hearing this but thought that if my dad is letting me go then the least I can do is listen to him. So now I'm stuck walking around school with this MASSIVE, UGLY, RAKSHAS insaan. Who know's what my reputation at school will be. Instead of keeping it low key it will drag MORE attention towards me! And you know what His name is REYAANSH. Kya naam ajeeb naam hai? :/

KRIA'S MUMMY: Kria beta are you asleep? Tomorrow is a big day for you.
Kria: Yess mum, I'm going now. Goodnight ma.


Kria's Mum: Good night beta, sweet dreams.

(Kria quickly finishes writing in her diary.) Okay bye. I will tell you the rest tomorrow.

Okay Guys this this is PART1 of The OS.

 

And here is a treat:

PROMO: Kria and Rey go to college together and her  father tells her that to get to know him more better she will be going shopping with him after college. SHOPPING WITH BODY GUARD? :O SERIOUSLY DAD!

 

Hope you all enjoyed it. Do Comment and Criticism is more than welcomed.



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