Challenge - Are U game for it ????

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Posted: 12 years ago

Ok I know the story of SNS is proceeding at a snail pace...okok Gopi & Ahem story / Rashi & Jigar ---actual Saathiya's is not even at a snail pace it is much slower...So if the CV's do entertain us...lets do it ourselves --What Say? Are u upto the challenge??

 

So the Challenge is --- We need to pick one kalakari each & give a senario on how it will be exposed & who all will get to know...& after that what will be the reaction of members who get to know about the Kalakaari...All pls do not say Gopi will know & feelbad...think over all...u can use same senario's...

 

I will pick the one where Ahem had slapped Gopi thinking she ordered 5 Lakh worth Jewellery...

 

Senario -- Kinjal is very irritated with Gopi who always says her ghar wale are not that bad...she has also not forgotten that because of Gopi she lost her love & now she is married to Dhawal who is useless & lives in a chawl...She also see's Ahem has a started to change towards Gopi & she wants to put her down...So this time she tells Gopi that she wants to  gift for her mom a set & she says if koki knows that she (kinjle) is gifting she will not agree & hence Kinjle asked Gopi to hide it for sometime till the opportunity comes...

 

Kinjle cleverly leaves the bill downstairs where everyone is around & the bill is on Gopi's name...Already everybody is worried about Rashi& Urmi story & Jigar ...Ahem by chance looks at this & calls for Gopi everybody is suprised...then he asks her what is this calmly & when she does not answer then he gets angry he tells her that he thought she was different but she is still the same & he is disgusted with her &  takes off on her...he does not beat her this time, but humiliates her...along with that everyone in family also are irritated with her & do not talk to her & then Koki says she is disgusted with her & she comes from a mid-class family etc...Gopi is crying & goes to Kanaji & keeps crying...Morning neither Hetal nor Koki talk to her or allow her to do anything...seeing this Kinjle is very happy, Ahem ignores her & walks aways, she is very dejected...dinner also same thing happens & Koki taunts her...

 

Next day is sunday & everyone is at home, Maltiben comes homes & is talking & then she says the other day she saw Kinjle at the jewelery store & by the time she went into the store she left...She also tells that the jeweller told her that Kinjle picked a pretty set which was 10L worth...everybody is shocked. After she leaves, Ahem calls Kinjle & talks to her nicely & then in between asks her what did she do with the 10L set? Kinjle very excitedly tells she gave it to Gopi Bhabi & realises her mistake...Ahem then takes of on her, Kinjle gets irritated & tells what u dnt even care for her, & she deserves only this because of her we did not get out love & she should have been throwfn out the 1st time itself...Ahem then goes into flashback mode & hates himself...Kokilla also then remembers how Gopi looked then? she feels disgusted with herself & also her daughter...everybody looks remembering oldtime...Gopi then comes from the terrace & is suprised everyone has tears in their eyes...she is about to go inside thinking what do I do? As she comes in Ahem turns & see's her, he is unable to see her as he realises what he has done & walks out of the home...n everybody is in their thoughts & nobody is talking to one another or with Gopi...Kokilla tries Ahem's cell & he does not pick up..she gets worried as the night has set in…everybody advises her to rest….as it is very late in the night everybody is in their rooms, Gopi in the hall waiting for Ahem so that he does not disturb anyone & that she can also lock the door.

 

Post midnight Ahem comes & see her waiting….she is unable to read his expression & thinks he is angry with her, she tells him mujhe maphkardijiye …everybody slept & that's why Im here….Ahem unable to see her..just walks off…she locks the door, then when about to goto temple to she sees blood drops on the floor, & stairs….She runs to Ahem's room & finds him standing near the window looking out blankly….& his hurt is very badly hurt…she runs to him & says aap ka haath….she gets 1st aid kit starts cleaning it….looking at her, Ahem is unable to hide his emotions & hugs her (with full force , like she does) & starts to cry….she says what happ? He says Im really really sorry….

Posted: 12 years ago
it's good but how did he get hurt who did he fight with?
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Nafisa_blossoms


it's good but how did he get hurt who did he fight with?
I assumed he hurt himself for hitting Gopi !!!! U can continue...😉
Posted: 12 years ago
really nice . great idea .
Posted: 12 years ago
oh i wish they show that on screen witj gohem 
Posted: 12 years ago
it is very good...
nice idea
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