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ketki_arshi

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 7:59pm | IP Logged
wow sounds mysterious,good start, what will happen next???
please update sooon...

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 9:11pm | IP Logged

Interesting concept...liking it...Embarrassed

Thanks for the PM...Hug

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 9:16pm | IP Logged
great start... comtinue soonClap

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 9:26pm | IP Logged
Fantastic beginning! You really are very talented with your words and expressions. Gave me a scary feel instantly on reading. This Sheesh Mahal looked like some scary place straight out of one of the Gothic romances or a murder mystery. 

I also loved the play of colours you introduced in this part. The red saree and with blood-red (murder and violence) and the dark and black night dripping with rain drops telling an untold story of crime, revenge, and redemption. It was almost as though i was looking back at the pages of some lost and forbidden history. 

You also brought out the imagery of the hunter and deer to perfection. But who is the deer and who is the hunter? Will be explained in course of this FF I hope! 

I was just stuck by one thought. We are yet to meet the characters who embody these qualities. Is there a chance that in future, the rules and the roles of this game will be reversed? Will we see the deer turning back and retaliating against the hunter? This one got me hooked up immediately. Continue soon!

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
Nice.. Pls continue

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
wow i like this concept!!! please continue amd thanks for the pm

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 10 November 2011 at 1:42am | IP Logged
wat a gud start! lovd it sharneil! continue soon!

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