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Hey Shalu 🤗
Lovely update amazingly written! :) Could sense Khushi's fear for her life very well and Arnav appreciating her guts brought a smile. 😳
Shyam's entry with a PinkGoat! aka our Laxmi 🤣 OMG that was hilarious! 🤣
Though i have to say, too much of a coincidence? Well Shyaam being in Lucknow wasn't fishy to anyone, he was supposed to be there or it was completely normal, nothing unusual.
Now where on earth was A Warning for the video? Scared the hell outta me! 😡 Gosh! 😒 Excuse me *pukes* 🤢 That was terrible *shudders* *settles back and onto the story*
The video made it bad :/ nyways Arnav's tale was more on the emotional edge rather than the main happenings..am surprised that he shared the close details with her. The very beginning, how he tagged along his mother, how he was numb when she was shot. These emotional elements- you surprised me there! in a good way- i thought sm1 like Arnav would never disclose them, rather safeguard them. Arnav wouldn't want many people to know. But maybe this is another facet to the Arnav you wish to portray to us, his equation with Khushi.
What i didn't like was that despite Arnav being so generous, He did smile a genuine one, something very few people had the privilige to witness, and later he told her his sad tale, and she further knowingly asks him a question why did your chachaji kill those women? she knows she may sound intrusive and immediately hastens to make it polite "If you don't mind me asking,"
He politely tells her that may be some other day Not refusing inshort and he Also gives her directions so that she doesn't get lost in the mansion on her way back and then she says- Raakshas Laad Governor!
What the-? Seriously Khushi!? In this chap Arnav was so charming, so endearing. I mean he wasn't even rude. then why? hummm :(
The Hunter- Ha! so not exactly what i expected😆 The first insight into the creeps mind and he already feels trapped! Nicce 😈
Coming to the past, Arnav's father used to stay out a Lot, he was a member of the SIF, then why didn't Arnav's dad share those letters with SIF? Am i missing out or jumbled up something here? SIF is famous for capturing Samrat Singh Raizada with their exceptional talent. And this whole scenario was the reason Arnav and Anjali joined late. Hmmm wonderfully done! Hats Off Shalu! gr8 going:D
Thanks for the lovely read,Congo for winning the Best writer of the week title, you deserve it hun 🤗Keep Rocking ! xD
Luv
Zara :)
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