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shybabe
shybabe @shybabe IF-Sizzlerz
Anniversary 17 Group Promotion 6 + 6
Posted: 12 years ago
OOHHH! I LOVED THE BEGINNING PLEASE DO CONTINUE😃
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bookadict303
bookadict303 @bookadict303 Goldie Inactive
Anniversary 16 Group Promotion 2
Posted: 12 years ago
Sounds amazing...continue soon (:
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YPNHK_kiFANno.1
YPNHK_kiFANno.1 @YPNHK_kiFANno.1 Goldie
Anniversary 14 Group Promotion 3 + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
Wow! Shalu you have GOT to continue with this! Your description really sucks you into the story! 👏 Edited by YPNHK_kiFANno.1 - 12 years ago
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FebruaryFlower
Zeba @FebruaryFlower IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 13 Group Promotion 4 Networker 2
Posted: 12 years ago
A brilliant start Shalu.
Looking forward to your wonderful writing!!
BTW - Love the title!!
😊
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music1
music1 @music1 IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 4 Networker 1
Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the start.Mystery unfolding I guess.Waiting for the next part.Please do add me to ur PM list.😊
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ketki_arshi
ketki_arshi @ketki_arshi Senior Member
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 2 Engager 1
Posted: 12 years ago
wow sounds mysterious,good start, what will happen next???
please update sooon...
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Rumi007
Rumi007 @Rumi007 IF-Sizzlerz
Anniversary 14 Group Promotion 6 + 5
Posted: 12 years ago

Interesting concept...liking it...😳

Thanks for the PM...🤗

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Addie07
Addie07 @Addie07 IF-Dazzler Inactive
Anniversary 12 Engager 4 + 8
Posted: 12 years ago
great start... comtinue soon👏
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shailusri1983
Shailaja @shailusri1983 IF-Dazzler
Anniversary 13 Group Promotion 4 + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic beginning! You really are very talented with your words and expressions. Gave me a scary feel instantly on reading. This Sheesh Mahal looked like some scary place straight out of one of the Gothic romances or a murder mystery. 

I also loved the play of colours you introduced in this part. The red saree and with blood-red (murder and violence) and the dark and black night dripping with rain drops telling an untold story of crime, revenge, and redemption. It was almost as though i was looking back at the pages of some lost and forbidden history. 

You also brought out the imagery of the hunter and deer to perfection. But who is the deer and who is the hunter? Will be explained in course of this FF I hope! 

I was just stuck by one thought. We are yet to meet the characters who embody these qualities. Is there a chance that in future, the rules and the roles of this game will be reversed? Will we see the deer turning back and retaliating against the hunter? This one got me hooked up immediately. Continue soon!
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..Anita..
..Anita.. @..Anita.. IF-Sizzlerz
Anniversary 13 Group Promotion 6 + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
wow i like this concept!!! please continue amd thanks for the pm
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