NEW FF: HATE at first sight! PART 3 PG 12

Hey my name is Sonbull.
This is my first FF. The story is about Arjun and Arohi.  😊  

prologue:

The first time she saw him. He looked gorgeous and tall. He has short black hair and golden brown eyes, she had never seen eyes like his. His high cheekbones, defined jaw line and his pink lips. his broad shoulders, his muscular body and don't forget his abs. He was wearing a plain white t-shirt and blue jeans. He looked simple, yet attractive. His attitude, the way he talks, the way he walks.

 

YES... it was HATE at first sight!

Pls let me know what you think and let me know if i should continue.
❤️

part 1 - pg 3
part 2 - pg 7
part 3 - pg 12

Edited by SA_KA - 12 years ago

Love the prologue.. continue soon..

 

 

 

 

Funny how she describes him so well but rather than love at first sight its hate lol... wonder why, so please do add me to your pm list! Would love to find out why and more!
And btw even if you don't use the name Arohi the only image and person that would come to my head will be Arohi because with Arjun's name Arohi only looks good nothing else.

Anyways please update soon! Nice prologue, interesting

Dr nyc start. Bt if u dnt hv problm dn change ani 2 arohi. Cz my mind n cmnts wl forgot dis ani name wid arjun 4 sure. N i wl cmnt as arjun arohi.

Hey Sonbull, Edited by Arjuhisis - 12 years ago

congo on new ff
nice start and can u plz change ani to arohi
continue soon

lol! great start!!

i went with the flow and expected 'love at first sight' !! rofl!

do continue and add me to the pm list!

This content was originally posted by: Arjuhisis

Hey Sonbull,

 

congratulations for the new ff

 

nice prologue

 

i have a humble request - if all my fellow readers agree with me, kindly make ani as arohi - i somehow cannot digest any other name with arjun

 

pls continue soon

 

 

congo