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Teri Yaad(A-K fanfic)Last part!!!!pg-9

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Posted: 02 February 2006 at 4:59pm | IP Logged

guys i was sad because of what's happing in the show so i thought of writing my own fanfic.pls write your comments

well the storyline is the same till yesterdays episode

then kripa comes to know about prithvi and and goes to

give her gavahi on (anagd's side ofsourseWink).anagd won the

case and prithvi goes to jailAngryanagd was in there filling 

out the formalaties.Evryone else was just happy that anagd

won the case.Kripa was also going when someone came to her

it was Dadi.

Dadi-Kripa beta mujhe maaf kardo maine tumhe galat samja.

Kripa-nahin! dadi isme apki koi galti nahin maine hi anagd ko galat smaja.shayad main hi sahi aur galat main fark nain samaj paye.Balki mafi tho mujhe apse mangni chahiya.

Dadi-ab yeh sab bathein chodo aur chalo andar.

Kripa-nahin dadi ab us gahr pe mera koi haq nahin.Anagd deserves more happiness then i could ever give him.(how right you are)

Dadi-par beta

kripa cuts her of.

Kripa-nahin dadi.ab bohot der ho chuki hain.

Kripa takes out a white envelope and gives it to dadi.

Kripa-Dadi yeh anagd ko dedena.

And kripa leaves from there.Angad comes out after finishing all his formalaties.All the time ouside angad was looknig for kripa but could not find her so they all left to khanna house.(BTW all means Dadi,naina,dilip,kartik,manek,aaliya,anitah and anagd).Anagd went to his room to get fresh.he went down and asked dadi where kripa was because he saw them talknig to eachother.

Anagd-dadi kripa kaha hain?

Dadi-mujhe pata nahin vo kaha hain lakin usne tumhare liye kuch bagha hain.

Dadi takes out the white envelope and gives it to angad.

Anagd opens the evelope and finds a letter:

Anagd main janti hun k mari wajase tumhe bohot taklef hue hain.Maine tumhe bohot takleef de hain.Lakin agar ho sake tho please mujhe maaf kar dena.Maine tumhari zindagi main akar tumhe sirf takleef de hain.Isliye main tumhari zaindage se hamasha hamesha jane ka faisla kiya hain agar ho sake tho apne zindagi ko phir se shuru karne ki koshish karna.ab main tumhari zindagi main kabhi nahin aungi.

                                                    -Kripa

Tell me if you want me to continue pls write your commentsLOL     

 

 



Edited by khushi19 - 12 February 2006 at 12:42am

lucky-moon Goldie
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Posted: 02 February 2006 at 5:04pm | IP Logged
wow this part was awesome plz continue
princess1_43 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 02 February 2006 at 5:04pm | IP Logged
awwwwww khushi .. thats was the best soo far... Clap contd soon ... hehe i wish something good happens ... ugh i am waiting till the maniac is sent where he deservesAngry ... hehe but i love the way u started it ... Embarrassed
khushi19 Goldie
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Posted: 02 February 2006 at 5:14pm | IP Logged
thanks i will try to cont tonight LOL
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Posted: 03 February 2006 at 3:10am | IP Logged
nice yaar let them b together again
karipa Goldie
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Posted: 03 February 2006 at 11:15am | IP Logged
brillient like ur other fan fics plzz con all of them this was all so in my mind sth like this may happebn in show any ways gr8888888888 fan fic con soon Clap Clap Clap
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Posted: 03 February 2006 at 11:35am | IP Logged
it fablouse plz contt i jt luv itt Big smile
sazizi Newbie
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Posted: 03 February 2006 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
cont soon

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