Joined: 01 September 2005
guys i was sad because of what's happing in the show so i thought of writing my own fanfic.pls write your comments
well the storyline is the same till yesterdays episode
then kripa comes to know about prithvi and and goes to
give her gavahi on (anagd's side ofsourse).anagd won the
case and prithvi goes to jailanagd was in there filling
out the formalaties.Evryone else was just happy that anagd
won the case.Kripa was also going when someone came to her
it was Dadi.
Dadi-Kripa beta mujhe maaf kardo maine tumhe galat samja.
Kripa-nahin! dadi isme apki koi galti nahin maine hi anagd ko galat smaja.shayad main hi sahi aur galat main fark nain samaj paye.Balki mafi tho mujhe apse mangni chahiya.
Dadi-ab yeh sab bathein chodo aur chalo andar.
Kripa-nahin dadi ab us gahr pe mera koi haq nahin.Anagd deserves more happiness then i could ever give him.(how right you are)
kripa cuts her of.
Kripa-nahin dadi.ab bohot der ho chuki hain.
Kripa takes out a white envelope and gives it to dadi.
Kripa-Dadi yeh anagd ko dedena.
And kripa leaves from there.Angad comes out after finishing all his formalaties.All the time ouside angad was looknig for kripa but could not find her so they all left to khanna house.(BTW all means Dadi,naina,dilip,kartik,manek,aaliya,anitah and anagd).Anagd went to his room to get fresh.he went down and asked dadi where kripa was because he saw them talknig to eachother.
Anagd-dadi kripa kaha hain?
Dadi-mujhe pata nahin vo kaha hain lakin usne tumhare liye kuch bagha hain.
Dadi takes out the white envelope and gives it to angad.
Anagd opens the evelope and finds a letter:
Anagd main janti hun k mari wajase tumhe bohot taklef hue hain.Maine tumhe bohot takleef de hain.Lakin agar ho sake tho please mujhe maaf kar dena.Maine tumhari zindagi main akar tumhe sirf takleef de hain.Isliye main tumhari zaindage se hamasha hamesha jane ka faisla kiya hain agar ho sake tho apne zindagi ko phir se shuru karne ki koshish karna.ab main tumhari zindagi main kabhi nahin aungi.
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